Ashlok SS-Still In My Heart....(Last Part-pg82)

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Mast hi as usual great update dear😊
Shlok roked😉 loved it meerab
Thanks for pm buddy

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan
wow great so cute they are meerab please dont kill my aasthu na .i love their cuteness plss...consider our wish I know U also dont want to kill asthu na plsss...dont kill her .i want happy ending 😊 please...

Ok sweety ...i m working on the end part😊

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Aww really nice update so sweet can't wait to read more hope you update it soon

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: rbb1
Aww really nice update so sweet can't wait to read more hope you update it soon

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sumayya Ejaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Awesome nice story loved the way both were crying while astha confess her feelings 😳 thanks for pm and plz plzzz update soon can't for the next part after reading the precape 😉

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Chapter 2

Awesome update Meeru 👍🏼

The ice cream and thank you part was so cute. Shlok is learning etiquettes and becoming more polite and kind in Astha's company. And what's more he is starting to feel the first pangs of attraction for Astha 😛 I can totally see him falling in love with her soon. After all how can he resist such a cute beauty like her 😳

He liked the feeling of her soft and warm hand in his...how cute that is!! 😳

You know what I was reading the part where Astha calls him weird and Shlok thinks that's what I call her, this quote that I read a few times flashed into my mind. It's so appropriate here for your story. Don't you think? 😃

"We're all a little weird. And life is a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall into mutually satisfying weirdness"and call it love"true love."

Lol...I am loving the war between Shlok and the principal. I see he's unknowingly providing Shlok opportunities to spend more time with Astha and come closer to her 😉 I think I will like this principal a lot 😆

Shlok is embarrassed to admit he spends time with Astha...it's predicted from an arrogant spoilt brat like him but still.. 😒 And as if that wasn't enough he even makes fun of her in front of his friends Poor Astha will be so hurt 😭

So from now on Shlok will be practicing at her home now 😃 You know what? This play part of the story is the one I was most eagerly waiting for 😳 Looking forward to read the next chapter 😃

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: meerab...
Omg😛!!!...I m glad that u gave a long wala comment even for the prologue...thanku sweety for loving the concept...and yeah its based on ''a walk to remember'' but still different regarding progression of the story...but i hope you will enjoy the changes tooo😉😉😉...
Btw the movie is also one of my most favorites😳...and abt the end part... on sooo many requests I am trying to make it less sad...still confused😕...

And wowww...u will read every single comment...so sweet of u...but u can directly ask me what u want to know...

A big wala thanks once again dear...😛
Love you😳

How can I not leave a long wala comment after getting to know it's based on my favourite novel? I already feel this strange kind of affiliation with this story. Even though I love all ur stories and u know that very well, but I think this will be my favourite story of urs. And I am saying that before having any clue about how you have planned this story. See my craziness for that novel 😆 But however u may have planned it I am sure it will be awesome. You are one of the most awesome and creative writers of all 😃 And that's why I have no doubts even for a moment that I am going to enjoy this story even more than ur other stories 😛

I know...movie was awesome. So romantic and emotional 😭 ❤️

You know what? As far as ending is concerned, and I guess I am in the minority who says this, I want an ending similar to the book. You can make it less sad if you want but I would like a sad ending for this story. Haha...I don't believe I am saying this because it's the first time I am demanding a sad ending but here I want to experience a complete Ashlok version of A walk to remember through your story. So I want the ending to be as tragic. Waise bhi sad romantic stories ka bhi apna hi maza hai. They are more special and ever-lasting. At least that's what I think. I hope I don't sound like a sadist 😆

I will surely ask you if I have any questions 😃

You are welcome Meeru...love you too 🤗

P.s. your bunny is so cute 😆😆

Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago