Aapki...AasthaFF(Part 15 update in Pg 78)

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Saranya

@charanyaaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

As usual nice naina. No words to explain.
Perfect family at the end. Sounds great!
Pls do pm if u start next ff

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Naina...its really a nice update and hott at the same time...but what made me wonder out of all is avantika8 arnav7...time gap is literally short...
Ashlok cant wait for luv each other...but I kno its possible.llol...loved it...thanku so much for giving this ff for us...n looking forward for ur next update in hum apki...
Its a perfect ending for a perfect story dear

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Nirmala

@nim_var

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Naina, great ending and a perfect family of 4.0

Enjoyed it. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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athmi

@athmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

This update indeed a standing ovation.👏👏👏

really a super duper update.😃

when coming to the 15th part

so romantic and sensational 😳

naughty astha provoked the sleeping lion.😆

sizzling good morning kiss ever.😳

he selection of Agra for the honeymoon was so romantic. 😳

"Taj mahal" the place of pure love and it makes those who are in love to feel heavenly.😊

now coming to the most important section of the update.😳

Shlok the master in selecting perfect nightgown for a romantic night.😉😆

I personally loved his choice.😳

astha look damn hottie when i imagined her in that attire.☺️

i was awestruck when she initiated to seduce him.😳

"put his tongue inside her ear and then fluttered it gently" that sent shivers down my spine ☺️. that was something very new to read. i loved that so much.😊

superb romantic and sizzling lovemaking section.☺️

the epilogue was so adorable.😃

two kids!! wow a full-fledged family.😊

even after 10 years they are so romantic as a newly wed couple.😃😳

astha was true; kids are so naughty like their dad.😆😆

on the whole the update was outstanding.👏👏👏

perfect ending for a perfect story.👍🏼

love you dear🤗❤️🤗.

Edited by athmi - 11 years ago