Aapki...AasthaFF(Part 15 update in Pg 78)

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: avi_ashi
it was beautiful update dear.
waiting for the honeymoon .. He he he..
update soon 😳

Thanks a looot yaar..😃
I will update soon😊

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sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Nice and romantic update dear...

No words...

Thanks for the PM...

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Nice and romantic update dear...

No words...

Thanks for the PM...

Thaaanks a lot for appreciating..😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: athmi
Outstanding update naina... 👏 👏 👏
The way you described each and every rituals of Marathi wedding was awesome. I have learnt Marathi practices through your writing. 😊
finally summer gone and spring has started in their life 😊
you again proved your excellence in writing hot stuffs 😳 😳 😳
i thoroughly enjoyed his teasing lines :
1. Why are you blushing like this..?Are you seeing me for the first time..?
2. I am not going to do anything..I will go and sleep on the couch.. 😆
their loving making was mind blowing. making me still blush ☺️
i enjoyed to the core 😃
on the verge of excitement to read their honeymoon stuff 😳
only one more chapter to go. i'm crying literally 😭😭😭.
plz start thinking for a new story plot. want to read more from u. 😊
awaiting for the final chapter with puppy eyes
love ya... 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ 🤗

Don't cry yaar Aathmi..You keep reading my other FF..😊
I am stopping this because I didn't want to drag the storyline..
I am really really overjoyed reading your comments..😃
I just love them..You have always supported me wholeheartedly..😃
Plzzz do support my other FF tooo...
Love you..❤️
God bless you yaar..😊
You are tooo Good🤗🤗🤗

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sreekailas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

U r malayalee no?! the way u described maharashtrian wedding got me confused..i mean, u did a wonderful research on that topic! and rest of d part,i was ☺️..

but y r u ending this?!!!😭😭

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: sreekailas
U r malayalee no?! the way u described maharashtrian wedding got me confused..i mean, u did a wonderful research on that topic! and rest of d part,i was ☺️..
but y r u ending this?!!!😭😭

Yeah I am a Malayali..
But I googled about a typical Maharashtrian wedding and I made Aashlok wedding like that..😊
Thank you for appreciating my effort..

I want to end this because I don't want to drag it ..
But don't worry keep reading my other FF..😊
You will love it too😳

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sreekailas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Yeah I am a Malayali..
But I googled about a typical Maharashtrian wedding and I made Aashlok wedding like that..😊
Thank you for appreciating my effort..

I want to end this because I don't want to drag it ..
But don't worry keep reading my other FF..😊
You will love it too😳

wow!!like i said, u did a wonderful research! n im already in love wid ur other ff!!

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Awesome update

Finally they r married

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: niki795
Part 13
Awesome update

Originally posted by: niki795
Awesome update
Finally they r married

Thank youuu sooo much niki..😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

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FINAL PART

PART 15

Morning after the first night:

The bright rays of the morning sun found their way through the open windows of their bedroom...Aastha opened her eyes saw Shlok laying cuddled to her...She ran her fingers through his hair and gave a sweet kiss on his lips...Shlok smiled in his sleep and murmured .."Aasthaa.."

Aastha smiled seeing his reaction..She wanted to get up, but Shlok's arm was around her waist...Slowly she took his hand and laid it by his side...Then she carefully wrapped her bare body with a blanket and got up and went into the bathroom...

After having her bath, she opened the cupboard, took a saree and wore it..Then she stood in front of the mirror, took some sindoor and applied on her forehead...Shlok was still asleep in his bed. She decided to have some fun.

Aastha went to the bathroom and took water in her palm and put it on Shlok's eyes and face..Shlok yelled angrily..

S : Aaarrrghh..What the hell..?!!

Aastha giggled and Shlok opened his eyes..He caught hold of her hand and pulled her...She fell right on top of him...Shlok hugged her tightly and Aastha began to struggle hard to get away from him...Shlok rolled sideways with her and he closed his mouth around her soft lips and sucked on to them profusely. After a few minutes he took off his mouth and gazed at her lips. It was swollen after his kiss and Aastha stared at him wide eyed..He smiled seeing her face..He moved his thumb across her lower lip and whispered in her ear.

S: It was your 'Good morning' kiss..

Aastha hugged him tightly burying her face into his chest..

A: I love you Shlok...

One week after their wedding

It was night time and Aastha was alone in the kitchen. Everyone had gone to sleep..She was just arranging everything neatly before she also went to sleep. Suddenly she heard the sound of rain outside and she walked to the window..When she opened the window, the wind blew inside and the rain droplets also flew towards her..She was enjoying the sensation and suddenly she heard it..."Click" Somebody switched off the light inside the kitchen and all went dark...She was startled and she turned to see who it was...She could see an outline of the person who was in the kitchen other than her...

A :(shouted)Who is that..?

The person suddenly moved towards her and pinned her to the window side wall with one hand on her shoulder and then closed her mouth with the other hand...

"Shhh!! It's me..."(and took the hand from her mouth)

A :(relieved hearing his voice)Shlok..!!Oh my god..!You frightened me..Why did you switch off the light..?
S: Shhh...

Then he held her chin with his free hand and slowly kissed her left cheek...then right cheek...The wind was blowing hard and her beautiful hair was all over his face...He smelled the refreshing fragrance of her hair...Then he kissed her beautiful hair..A lightning flashed and illuminated their faces for some seconds...Shlok surveyed her beautiful brown eyes and she too was lost in his passionate black eyes...As if hypnotized, she moved her lips towards his lips...Suddenly a thunder cracked and she leapt into his arms and hugged him...

S:(laughs) Oh my Bold and beautiful Biwi..What happened to you now..?
A :(placing her face close to his chest and hugging him tightly) I don't want to miss a single chance to hug you my Patidev..

Together they walked back towards their room. As soon as they reached there, Shlok gave her a surprise. He handed her something and she was so happy to find two air tickets to Agra.

A: Woww Shlok.. We are going to see Taj Mahal...How romantic..!!

She hugged him again happily..
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They reached Agra, the following evening and they checked into a luxurious hotel. After freshening up, Aastha and Shlok got ready and took a taxi to Taj Mahal.

As they arrived the monument, they crossed the gateway and walked along the beautiful garden. Together they gazed at the breath taking view of the Taj Mahal- the symbol of immortal Love.

Feeling ecstatic, Aastha squeezed Shlok's hand.
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They reached back into their hotel room after having their dinner. Shlok locked the door and hugged his beautiful wife. Aastha was also in a really romantic mood after their visit to Taj Mahal.

S: Aastha, I have a gift for you..
A: What is it Shlok..?

He indicated a packet lying on their bed..Aastha walked towards it and took it in her hands. But she didn't notice the mischievous smile playing on his lips.

Aastha opened the packet and took a black color nightgown in her hands. It was transparent and lacy plus matching lacy lingerie..Feeling uncertain, she gazed at Shlok.

S: Go on..Wear it..
A :(wide eyed) You want me to wear this Shlok..?
S: Of course..Yes..Now be a good girl and wear it for me..

He pushed her into the dressing room and waited outside.
After a minute, Aastha came out wearing the sensuous nightwear.
Shlok was knocked off by her beauty and oomph. He was staring at her literally open mouthed. Aastha was amused by his reaction and she decided to surprise him. She gave him a naughty seductive smile and walked towards him. Shlok was double surprised seeing the blazing look on her otherwise innocent face. She opened the first three buttons of his shirt and spread it open. As he looked down at her with raised brows and wide eyes, she kissed the centre of his chest with pure passion. She opened the remaining buttons and removed his shirt and then his vest. Shlok began to enjoy this now. He wanted to know how much further this game will go on..With her both hands on his shoulders she pushed him backwards on to the bed. She took her mobile and played a hot and rocking dance number. Then she began to dance for him like a hot seductress. Her moves were so ravishing that Shlok couldn't contain himself. He got up and caught hold of her waist and crushed it to his abdomen. She didn't stop her dance and she moved her body along with the music rubbing herself onto his body. He got mad and bent his face and crushed her lips with his lips. Aastha stood still and surrendered herself to his attack. She then put her hands around him and they roamed around his bare back as he was kissing her generously.
He licked her right cheek and bit the skin there. He sucked on to her earlobe and put his tongue inside her ear and then fluttered it gently. She shuddered and gasped. Shlok carried her up in his strong arms and put her down on the bed. He removed her nightgown and threw it aside. Then he stared at her body which was only covered in two-piece black and lacy lingerie. Aastha couldn't meet his eyes and she covered her face with her hands. Shlok took his own time to savor every part of her body. He then fully undressed her and himself and then entered inside her, at first slowly and then in fast paced movements. She moaned and cried in pure ecstasy and clung onto his body for support. He soothed her by gently kissing her lips and face and neck now and again. After a while, both of them climaxed at the same time. Shlok fell upon her and he hugged her with all his love. Both of them were highly exhausted by their vigorous lovemaking and they fell asleep lying in the arms of each other...
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Epilogue

10 years later :

It was a fresh morning in Agnihotri Mansion...Shlok, Aastha , and their two kids were lying on the bed...Avantika(8 years) and Arnav (7 years)were lying on Aastha 's left side...Shlok was lying on her other side...Avantika opened her eyes...She looked at her younger brother who had his eyes still closed..She turned to her other side and looked at her parents who were still asleep..Suddenly Shlok blurted out, still asleep...

S:Aastha ...come closer...Hmm...close...(smiles)
A :(opens her eyes and looks at him) Shlok..
Seeing their mother wake up, Avantika pretended to sleep.But she viewed them with partly closed eyes...
Aastha laughed seeing that Shlok was talking in his sleep. She then looked at her children who seemed to be still asleep...She sat up...
A:(shakes him)Shlok..Keep quiet..The kids will think that you have gone crazy..
S:(frowns again)Kids..? whose kids..?
Aastha couldn't handle this anymore..She shook him vigorously...
A:Shlok..wake up..open your eyes..!!(shaking him)
S:Oh Godd!! Stop it Aastha for god's sake..!!(and opens his eyes)
Seeing her sitting beside him on the bed, he looked at her passionately..
A:What..?!!
S:Nothing Aasthaa..You look beautiful..Come on..Give me a kiss now..(extends his hand to pull her closer)
A:(hitting him playfully) Keep quiet Shlok..Kids will listen..
S:(raises himself a little and looked at the sleeping kids)They are sleeping yaar..
A: So?
S:(smiles naughtily)Sooo...
Shlok pulled her hand and made her lie beside him..He raised his head and moved his face towards hers...
A:Stop it Shlok...(blushes)
S:(huskily)Only one kiss..
A:(giggles and tries to push him away)Shlok!!
S:Ummmuah...(kisses her cheek soundly)
A:(hits his arm playfully)Shlok...The kids!!
S: They are my kids ..So they are sensible...They won't disturb us at times like this..
Ar:(giggles soundly)Of course Papa..That is why we are not disturbing you..
Shlok and Aastha looked at their son, surprised...
Av:(opens her eyes and hits her brother on his arm)Arnav, you were also awake..(then she also giggles seeing her parent's faces)
S: Oh my God..!You were not sleeping..?
Suddenly Aastha pushed Shlok away from her feeling embarrassed..She sat up and adjusted her night gown...
Av:No Papa...We saw everything..
A:You both..naughty kids...(raises her hand to hit them)..Go and brush your teeth, now..
Both the kids laughed merrily and got out of the bed and ran to the wash room...
A:(turns to Shlok and sees him smiling naughtily) You were right..They are your kids..Shameless like you..!!
S:(laughs)But they are adorable like you..Isn't it?(hugs her)
A:Shlok!!(smiles and hugs him back)
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END OF THE FINAL PART...THANK YOU ALL FOR LIKING MY FANFIC AND SUPPORTING ME...😃
PLEASE DO SUPPORT ME FOR WRITING MY OTHER FF 'HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN??' WITH YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS...😊😊
PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS FOR THIS PART TOO...
LOVE YOU ALL A LOOOT...🤗
NAINA

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago

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