Aapki...AasthaFF(Part 15 update in Pg 78)

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
he is getting attracted to her
and astha is nt able to control her feelings
overnight stay interesting
do update soon

Thank uuu sooo much..😃
I will continue sooon..don't worry😊

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athmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

hey naina

r u going to run away or will u spend some time here

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: srilotus
BEAUTIFUL UPDATES(CH-7.CH-8)

Thanks a looot😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

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PART 9

Shlok was lying on the bed in the guest room. Half an hour had passed after Aastha had prepared the bed for him and asked him to go to sleep. But not even a second had passed without him thinking about Aastha. Her eyes, her hair, her lips, her smile; every single thing about her seemed to disturb him and they didn't help him to fall asleep. The stronger he tried to block these thoughts, the faster they succeeded in invading his mind.
"Damn!!", He sat up in his bed..He bowed his head and raised his hands to support it. His mouth had dried up and he felt suddenly thirsty. He looked at the window. Rain was regaining its might now. The wind blew harder than before. He knew that there was no use of switching on the lights because of the power failure. He got up and fumbled his way along to reach the kitchen. Somehow he reached the kitchen and a flash of lightning illuminated the scene and he saw a water jug and a glass on the kitchen platform. He went and drank one glass of water. He then decided to carry them to his room, in case he felt thirsty again.
As he was sure of his way back this time, he didn't fumble much in the darkness. Suddenly he thought he heard someone yelling from the direction of Aastha's room. Because of the sound of the heavy rain he had to strain his ears so as to make sure of what he had heard. He heard the noise of someone yelling again and was quite sure this time that it was Aastha's voice. Feeling alarmed, he placed the jug and glass on a nearby table and hastily ran towards Aastha's bedroom. He opened the door to her room and rushed inside the dark room.
S: AASTHAA..
Another lightning flashed and he saw her sitting huddled on her bed, and shivering uncontrollably. Upon seeing Shlok, Aastha looked up at him.
S: What happened, Aastha..?Why did you shout so loudly..?
Unable to say anything, she pointed towards the balcony. Shlok ran towards the glass door leading to the balcony. When he opened door another flash of lightning occurred and he could see that two- three flowerpots lay broken on the rain splattered floor. He could sense that someone had tried to break into the house- may be a burglar. God!! What if something had happened to Aastha..?!! He returned to the bedroom, closing the doors safely.
A: Someone was there Shlok..Did you see him..?
Shlok was unable to answer as he too was in terrible shock. He just moved towards her and took her in his arms with all his care and hugged her tightly. Aastha was totally relieved of all her tension in that single hug. She put her arms around him and held on to him even tightly. She sobbed bitterly and he couldn't stand it anymore. Pulling her from the hug, he cupped her hands with his both hands and he kissed her lips with all his love. Gently, he comforted her lips which were shaking badly and she just closed her eyes and stood there, melting down in his kiss, her hands still around his waist. She felt like she was on top of the world. He then kissed away her tears from her cheeks and again pulled her face close to his chest, hugging her even more tightly. She pressed her cheek against his chest and inhaled a deep breath of relief. She just couldn't believe what had happened just now. It felt like a dream to her and she didn't dare to open her eyes, lest she broke it.
Minutes trickled away and both of them didn't try to break the hug. The rain was falling slowly now, as if not to disturb them, even with its noise. Shlok felt that Aastha had fallen asleep in his arms. Slowly, he tried to detach her from the hug but she murmured something in her sleep and hugged him more tightly. He smiled happily.
S: Aasthaaa. I am Shlok..Not your bed.
A :(opens her eyes gently) Shlok..(moves away from him abruptly)I am so sorry..
Aastha had never felt so much thankful to the darkness, which was hiding her embarrassment from him.
S: Aastha..(he placed his hand on top of her head caringly)Goodnight..
A: Goodnight Shlok..(smiling)
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Morning rays of sun caressed Aastha's face. She slowly opened her eyes and blinked them gently. She woke up and went into the washroom. She splashed her face with water and looked into the mirror. Suddenly the memories of the past night events rushed into her mind, which was blank till then. She wondered whether she had dreamed all of it. She freshened herself and walked into the kitchen.
She decided to make tea at first. As she ignited the stove and placed a kettle with some water on the flames, she could feel two hands slipping forward along the both sides her waist and she gasped. She looked sideways and was surprised to see it was Shlok hugging her from behind. He smiled and rested his chin on her right side shoulder. All this was new for her. Blood rushed into her cheeks and they reddened.
S :(talks huskily into her ear) Good morning Aastha..
A: (softly) Good morning..
Shlok planted a loving kiss on her cheek and she squirmed slightly.
Shlok understood that she was not feeling comfortable and took off his hands from around her. He left her, walked towards the Refrigerator and opened it. She watched him and saw that he had put on his dried clothes after freshening up. He was looking even more handsome now.
S :(casually says) I will also help you prepare the breakfast..
A :(surprised)What..?!.. You know how to cook?
S: A little bit..Don't forget that I have been living alone for quite some time. I have got to look after myself...You see..
A :(laughs) Oh I see..
She had prepared the tea by that time and she handed one cup to him. After having their tea in the kitchen, they prepared some sandwiches and mango juice for breakfast. All these time Shlok maintained a safe distance from Aastha and behaved quite casually and friendly. Aastha who had enjoyed the 'romantic version' of Shlok earlier, now badly wanted it back. Still, she thought this version was safer. Otherwise god only knows what might happen.
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~PART 10~
Friends, I know that its a bit Short..Please Forgive me..😳
Did you all like this part..?
Please let me know..I am waiting for your opinion😊
Love,
Naina😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago

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athmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

I pinched myself to test whether I was dreaming 😛
Is that you written all these??... I'm out of words. 😃
All most 3 times I read the update. It was really sizzling 😳
I truly loved the lip lock he used to make her calm 😉
I seriously blushed reading the morning hug and the kiss. 😳
It was the part I enjoyed most in this chap. 😃 😉
Hats off to you 👏
Waiting for more piping hot updates form you. 😊
I don't want this bond between them to be changed.
Let the updates coming continuously 😊
Hugs from me 🤗
Love you. ❤️ 🤗

Edited by athmi - 11 years ago

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Saumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

res ill comment soon!!! UNRES Naina Naina!!! Yaar tu kya cheez hai mujhe samaj ni aata!!!! What an terrifically romantic update!!! I am fallen for it!!! Yaar i cant even imagine this type thing and u wrote it!! Its truly amazing and super se bhi upar!!! It was short but what a dhmaka!!! Truly enjoyed it!!!!!! Yaar!!! U r dhoom!!!!! I love u!!! Hug u infinite time!! Shlok ka romantic side bahut sweet tha!!! That lip kiss was sooo innocent and romantic!!!!

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Naina loved this update...its very soothing...here its raining heavily in my place...so I felt everything while reading...its so real..and the kiss..really romantic...even more romantic there morning after...n their back hug..enjoyed it to the core...these days our show lacking romance...pls keep up this pace for a while without any drama...tfd pm dear...