NEW AASHLOK FF/SS KALEERA updtd CS pg 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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again my crazy mind is telling me to put another story...

INSIGHT
guyzz m really obsessed with Punjabi ritual KALEERA so thought to start a new FF on this ...

WHAT IS KALEERA?
On the day of wedding in morning the bride is made to wear the bridal chura, red and white ivory bangles that signify her status as a bride...her relatives then tie a kaleera (jingle) on these churas, which convey their good wishes and blessings...the eligible girls line up and the bride lightly bangs her kaleeras on their head...it is believed these girls would be the next one to get married...

PROLOGUE

she just stood numb when the ladies and her best friend hugged and congratulated her as the KALEERA fell on her and as per the ritual she was the next one to get married...she just ran from there and cried bitterly smiling at her fate...every girl has this dream to get married but it has become a nightmare in her life...will she ever get married? she questioned herself again...

so how was it
hope u all like it
plz hit like and comment
loads of love
Nazia😊😊😊

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.furrii. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love that ritual too! Amazing idea!
Update soon! 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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New one!! Thanks a lot dear; just love to read your works... As usual awesome prologue! Hope that you will update the first part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Great nxt story started
Great start!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice I guess the girl is astha who ran away do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow anothr one frm u😃 lovd d cncept..n d name! Plz cntinue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So d grl is Astha! N y she thnks if shel evr get married?😳 cnt wait fr next😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for your story sounds interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting prologue...looks like a story of a tortured soul...one with lot of bad memories...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely prologue! Seems interestingg😃 cont soon😊

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