ashlok ss ..my crush❤️ part 9 pg 19 updated :)

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Loved da update
Continue soon
Can u plz make it slightly longer

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

guys tom is school aaj holiday thaaa so updating one more part for u guys thnks for the lovee...

part 3 :

the historyclass started...

they started reading about acient history...aastha started reading to divert her attention from mr shlok...who totally NOT INTERSTED in studies was checking out the girls of the class...

aastha noticed him and frowned and got angry...

aastha:cheee tum ladke naa flirtt...

shlok:ms whatever madam... aap ke class ke ladkiyan na bahut hot hain sivaaye ek ko chod kee...

aastha (giving a what the look )..

he suudenly came a bit close to her...making her blush and shiver...he slowly whisperd in her ear

shlok:ms aasthaa...

she got angryyy...but her anger reduced seeing his hypnotising eyes...they both were lost when they were disturbed by the sound of the bell...aastha was relieved and got up quickly to avoid his gaze...

everyone went for lunch...

in the dinning roomm...

gauri and aastha in the line to collect lunch...

gauri:toh kaisaa raha??

aastha:kyaaa...

gauri:cummon aaastha tujhe pata hai mr shlo..

aastha cut her frm betwwenn..

aastha:stop it gauri mujhe us flirt ke baare mein baat nahi karni...pata hain kitnaaa besharam hai aur...

gauri:ab kon baat kar raha haii...shlo oh sorry mr flirt ke baare meinn...

they both went and sat ...gauri was as usual irritating aasthaa...and eattiingg...as she was a bigg foodiee...

gauri:mujhe na ice cream bahut pasand haii...and especially choclate flavour...yummm..

aastha :i hate chocolate flavourr...

they both were shocked to see mr hotty cuming towards them...gaurii smiledd aastha shivered by that familar deo smell...

shlok:waise gauri mujhe bhi chlocolate flavour bahut pasand hai...and he winked at aastha,..

waise main yahaaa tumhee ..he luked at aastha i mean aap dono ko kal ke football match ke liye invite karne aaya tha...

gauri:wooww aap football bhi khelte hain...

shlok:yaa i luv football ...so see u guyss

gauri:ha haaa humm zarror aayenge aap boolayee aur hum na aaye aisa ho hi nahi saktaaa...

aastha:(whispered with frown look) :maskaa queen ...

shlok:ok so see u ...he got up and started cuming towards aastha..she froze...

he slowly removed a peice of rice frm her hair and threw it..

aastha:madam apna gussa inn chawalo par kyun nikaltii hoonn...and left ...

gauri started laughing...and aastha shouted and asked her to be quiet...

gauri:kal toh football match mein bahut mazaa ayeegaaa😊...

so guys how was it??...tom maybe by evening or n8 i can updateee...😊

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
Loved da update
Continue soon
Can u plz make it slightly longer

ok dearr ...ty and i just read it next update will be a bit longer...(sorry am not gud at writing longg posts) i will try but ty😛

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice update thank you, things are getting interesting

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nice update. Shlok, even though a flirt but cute. Will be waiting for the next update.

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Read all of them in a go! And I loved them. Teenage romance is so cool. Do pm me when you update dear.

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Anukalu
Nice update. Shlok, even though a flirt but cute. Will be waiting for the next update.

yeah the next update should be good

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12
awww meeeraabbb dearrr tyyy sweetyyy

welcome dear😳

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12
ok dearr ...ty and i just read it next update will be a bit longer...(sorry am not gud at writing longg posts) i will try but ty😛

Thanks
Jst read ur update
Such a sweet update