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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ashlok OS-Game

My friend told me a short story so writing it for ashlok...

Shlok loved astha but wanted to make her jealous...one day things went terribly wrong...the next few weeks he made her jealous on purpose...

When astha asked him that whether he loves some other girl...on purpose he lied...He played with her emotions like it was a game for him..His plan was working but he had no clue that how wrong things would go...the damage his plan would do...
One night astha broke down,feeling very alone...and sad ...
With a knife in her hand ...she dialed his number ...
Shlok answered...''hello''...
Astha told him that she always loved him and hung up the phone...
Shlok sensed something wrong and rushed to her house...but he was tooo late...he found her lying in blood ...she was no more...beside her was a confession note...about her love for shlok...her obsession for shlok...
As he read the note...he knelt down and cried ...and then with the same knife he cut his wrist...to join her in the next world...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awww omgg Meerab😭😭😭 Sound like Romeo and Juliet when they killed each other, well they drank poison, but Ashlok killed themselves with a knife😲

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

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Posted: 11 years ago

What was that? Now after all those sweet romantic ones you decided to give us a heart attack or what? Was feeling really kinda down after reading the spoilers and now after this...I'm dead. Done for. Should go back and read little angel. Loved that. Thanks meerab. Thank for the PM.

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: xayeshax
Awww omgg Meerab😭😭😭 Sound like Romeo and Juliet when they killed each other, well they drank poison, but Ashlok killed themselves with a knife😲

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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

main darr guyi.. didi aapne draa diya mujhe... raam raam. raam naam lungi ab..

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anukalu
What was that? Now after all those sweet romantic ones you decided to give us a heart attack or what? Was feeling really kinda down after reading the spoilers and now after this...I'm dead. Done for. Should go back and read little angel. Loved that. Thanks meerab. Thank for the PM.

thanks dear ...yeah you should read older os's to feel good but today without getting my jeeni's update i m feeling so sad😭😭😭😭...and thats what come out in the form of words in this os just sadness...

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazygul
main darr guyi.. didi aapne draa diya mujhe... raam raam. raam naam lungi ab..

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Samia

@Sam_15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Omg meerab...didn't expect this kind of os from u. After all those sweet and romantic shots u decide to give us such a tragic and serious os It was really heart touching...reminded me of romeo and juliet 😭

Btw i loved the scene u used in ur banner for this os...it just adds to the seriousness of it :(

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...
thanks dear ...yeah you should read older os's to feel good but today without getting my jeeni's update i m feeling so sad😭...and thats what come out in the form of words in this os just sadness...

Sorry to hear that buddy. Hope your friend updates ASAP and get you out of this slump. May be you too should read your own writing.