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😲PART-12

Shlok leans on the banyan tree weeping...😭😭😭

Hours passes by...

In the night,

Security: Hello, Sir this is not your house...It's time to close the park...Please leave...😑😑

Shlok gets up and walks, Shlok's wallet falls and he is about to pick it...

Security: Hari oh madam, should I give a special invitation for you ...? Please leave the park...😑😑

Shlok hears the security's voice...

He turns towards him...

He couldn't believe his eyes...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Shlok: Aastha...( He rushed to her...)😊😊😊

Aastha was shocked to see Shlok there...😲😲😲

Aastha : Shlok...😭😭😭

They both hugged each other... (Aastha longed for it...😳😳...She longed for Shlok's comfort...😳😳...She wished that this moment could stop like this...😳😳...)

Security: Hey, hello... baki romance continue in your home...Leave now...😑😑

They both parted from each other...😳😳

Shlok dragged Aastha out of the park...😑😑😑

Shlok: pagal hoga kiya...How can you do this...😑😑...? How stupid you are...😲😲...?

Aastha: tum bhi kam nahi thi...how could you ever imagine to divorce me...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...?

Shlok: from when will you start to use your brain...😑😑...? you must have asked for explanation to me...? How could you ever imagine that I would divorce you...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

You are my life...you are my breath...😭😭😭

It started raining...

Shlok took of his coat n covered it over Aastha...😳😳😳

Shlok: come will continue our argument in home...😳😳...if you get drenched you will suffer a lot...😳😳

Shlok n Aastha runs , so that they won't be drenched completely...

Aastha slips n falls down...

Aastha: Ahaaa...Shlok...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: can't you walk properly...πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

Shlok touches her ankle...😲😲

Aastha: ahaa...dard hora hai...😲😲

Shlok lifts her n walks ...😳😳

Aastha splashes rain water on Shlok's face...😳😳😳

Aastha: Shlok tume yaad hai...how you used to tease me when we were kids...you always called me "MOTI-PAGLI"...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Shlok smiled hearing all this...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Throughout their way...Aastha kept on talking...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Finally they reached home...

Shlok: atleast now...close your mouth FM Radio...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...see my ears are bleeding...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Wait I'll bring balm to apply on ankle...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: balm...why...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: You have a sprain in your ankle na...?😲😲

Aastha: Oh...actually...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...Nothing happened to me...I was very tired...I couldn't walk so...I ... I .acted like that...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...n moreover you need to get punishment for making me cry for all these 10 days na...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...?

Shlok: tum...Drama Queen...😑😑

He chased her... Aastha started to run...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Finally Shlok caught her and both slipped on the sofa...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Shlok: Aastha ...(he caresses her cheeks...) I...I ...love you...😳

Aastha : I love you too...(Aastha kissed his cheeks n hugged him...)😳

After few years...

Shlok's cabin...

Shlok N Aastha were discussing something seriously...

Mary knocks the door...: Excuse me Sir...

Shlok: Come in...

Mary: Thank God...Mam even you are here...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: Why what happened...?😲😲

Mary: Mam, this is the limit Mam...I cant tolerate it anymore...day by day it is getting worser...

Aastha understood what she was talking... She gave a cold stare to Shlok...😑😑

Shlok couldn't meet her eyes...He bent down acting as though doing some work...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: Dont worry, Mary...I'll take care from now on...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha dragged Shlok to home...

Aastha was pacing North, South, East,West...😑😑😑

Shlok continued his work in his laptop...

Aastha: That's the limit...😳😳

Shlok: Kya hua...? for this small matter why are you getting angry.. see my beautiful wife's cheeks become red...(Shlok tries to touch her cheeks...😳😳..)

Aastha pushes his hands...😑😑

Aastha: Not today...Today nobody can save him...😑😑

(They hear the sound of opening the door...)

A small boy crawled near the sofa...hiding from Aastha's vision...

Aastha: Ruko...😑😑

Ashwin: aaj...meri band baajati jodeenga...Aastha...πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

Ashwin turns towards Aastha...

Aastha: phir sey...shuru hogi ..tumhari badmaashi...😑😑...(Every week...complaint from each teacher...) I'm fed up of it...yeh sab sekaya maine tumhe...😑😑

Aastha sees his dress ...full of dirt...

Aastha: kya haal banayi raka apne aapko...😑😑...? started to work...in any railway station...putting coal into the engine...

Ashwin: Nahi...Aasthu ...wo (Aastha gave an angry stare...😑😑...)

Ashwin: sorry...sorry...Aayi...wo actually I slipped and fell on the road...so only I got stained...πŸ€”

Nahi...Aayi...nahi...wo joot bolraye...

Ashwin: aagayi...meri ...pareshaani...πŸ˜•πŸ˜²πŸ˜²

Ashwini: aapko...pata hai.Aayi...aaj isne kya kiya...😲😲

Ashwin sighed not to tell anything...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwini turned her face...: wo Aayi... aaj Ashwin aur Rahul dada ek doosrey sey lad rehe they...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwin: wah.wah...apne Dada ko...😑😑...naam sey bularathey...aur uss Rahul ku Dada kehhaithey...😲😲

Aastha stared at him again...Ashwin looked at Shlok for help...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwin came to Shlok: yeh kya hai Shlok...aapne yeh hi toh kahatha...dont worry if any problem occurs I'll care of Aastha...😲😲...n now you are standing still...

Aastha turned towards Shlok... Shlok couldn't manage...😲😲😲

Shlok: wo...Aastha ...chod na...he is still a kid...πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

Aastha: If he is a kid...he must behave like a kid...not like this...Today we have to sort this...until he behaves properly I wont talk to him...😑😑

Ashwini: mey bhi...😑😑

Ashwin makes a sad face...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: Aastha ...what is this...? for small mistakes...you will punish him like this...😲😲

Aastha: Stop it ...Shlok...you are the one who is spoiling him...😑😑...n for saving him everytime...even you must be punished...No dinner for you today...😑😑

Shlok: Kya...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha:come on Ashwini...let us go...

They leave...

Shlok n Ashwin stare at each other..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Shlok lifted Ashwin...

Ashwin: Dont worry...Baba...Aayi ka gussa...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...todhi der mey thandi hogayi...

Shlok: it happens only in your case...akhir tum uski laadla toh hai...πŸ˜‰

Ashwin: Baba...dont worry... I'll be relieved from Ashwini's bakwaas for some days...πŸ˜†...n even you said that you are fed up of Aayi's boring khana...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...you will get to eat good food...

Shlok: ya .you are right...(both giggled...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...n stopped seeing Aastha n Ashwini staring at them...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...)

Aastha: what did you tell now...😑😑...? boring khana...😑😑

Ashwini: aap dada...what did you say...? bakwaas...😑😑

Shlok n Ashwin: Nahi.nahi...hum toh masak kareyhai thi...

Aastha: acha...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...(Aastha took the pillow from the sofa...)

Shlok: Aastha...nahi...😲😲😲...( Shlok drops Ashwin...n runs from Aastha...)

Ashwini pinched Ashwin's ears: Ahaa...chodo Choti...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwini: what did you tell...?😑😑

Ashwin: sorry.sorry...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...(They both stopped seeing Aastha n Shlok...) (They started laughing...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...) Even now they fight n argue like us...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Finally Shlok n Aastha settled in the sofa...

Ashwin n Ashwini hugged them...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

HENCE, THE KING AND QUEEN LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH THEIR PRINCE AND PRINCESS...πŸ˜›

Hope you liked it...

Do comment how the story was...

Your comments only will encourage me to try more...

Thank you for bearing my mistakes...

Thanks in advance for your comments...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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No words... What an end?? The last line was awesome.. Loved it!! Pls come back with another..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww the ending ws so sweeet putting coal in engine, ashwin asking shlok he hd said he'l take care of astha hilarious n cutee🀣⭐️ keep writngπŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice SS, it was really wonderful, write more you have the talent😊
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Originally posted by: Harshraaj

😲PART-12

Shlok leans on the banyan tree weeping...😭😭😭

Hours passes by...

In the night,

Security: Hello, Sir this is not your house...It's time to close the park...Please leave...😑😑

Shlok gets up and walks, Shlok's wallet falls and he is about to pick it...

Security: Hari oh madam, should I give a special invitation for you ...? Please leave the park...😑😑

Shlok hears the security's voice...

He turns towards him...

He couldn't believe his eyes...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Shlok: Aastha...( He rushed to her...)😊😊😊

Aastha was shocked to see Shlok there...😲😲😲

Aastha : Shlok...😭😭😭

They both hugged each other... (Aastha longed for it...😳😳...She longed for Shlok's comfort...😳😳...She wished that this moment could stop like this...😳😳...)

Security: Hey, hello... baki romance continue in your home...Leave now...😑😑

They both parted from each other...😳😳

Shlok dragged Aastha out of the park...😑😑😑

Shlok: pagal hoga kiya...How can you do this...😑😑...? How stupid you are...😲😲...?

Aastha: tum bhi kam nahi thi...how could you ever imagine to divorce me...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...?

Shlok: from when will you start to use your brain...😑😑...? you must have asked for explanation to me...? How could you ever imagine that I would divorce you...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

You are my life...you are my breath...😭😭😭

It started raining...

Shlok took of his coat n covered it over Aastha...😳😳😳

Shlok: come will continue our argument in home...😳😳...if you get drenched you will suffer a lot...😳😳

Shlok n Aastha runs , so that they won't be drenched completely...

Aastha slips n falls down...

Aastha: Ahaaa...Shlok...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: can't you walk properly...πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

Shlok touches her ankle...😲😲

Aastha: ahaa...dard hora hai...😲😲

Shlok lifts her n walks ...😳😳

Aastha splashes rain water on Shlok's face...😳😳😳

Aastha: Shlok tume yaad hai...how you used to tease me when we were kids...you always called me "MOTI-PAGLI"...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Shlok smiled hearing all this...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Throughout their way...Aastha kept on talking...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Finally they reached home...

Shlok: atleast now...close your mouth FM Radio...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...see my ears are bleeding...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Wait I'll bring balm to apply on ankle...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: balm...why...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: You have a sprain in your ankle na...?😲😲

Aastha: Oh...actually...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...Nothing happened to me...I was very tired...I couldn't walk so...I ... I .acted like that...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...n moreover you need to get punishment for making me cry for all these 10 days na...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...?

Shlok: tum...Drama Queen...😑😑

He chased her... Aastha started to run...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Finally Shlok caught her and both slipped on the sofa...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Shlok: Aastha ...(he caresses her cheeks...) I...I ...love you...😳

Aastha : I love you too...(Aastha kissed his cheeks n hugged him...)😳

After few years...

Shlok's cabin...

Shlok N Aastha were discussing something seriously...

Mary knocks the door...: Excuse me Sir...

Shlok: Come in...

Mary: Thank God...Mam even you are here...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: Why what happened...?😲😲

Mary: Mam, this is the limit Mam...I cant tolerate it anymore...day by day it is getting worser...

Aastha understood what she was talking... She gave a cold stare to Shlok...😑😑

Shlok couldn't meet her eyes...He bent down acting as though doing some work...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha: Dont worry, Mary...I'll take care from now on...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha dragged Shlok to home...

Aastha was pacing North, South, East,West...😑😑😑

Shlok continued his work in his laptop...

Aastha: That's the limit...😳😳

Shlok: Kya hua...? for this small matter why are you getting angry.. see my beautiful wife's cheeks become red...(Shlok tries to touch her cheeks...😳😳..)

Aastha pushes his hands...😑😑

Aastha: Not today...Today nobody can save him...😑😑

(They hear the sound of opening the door...)

A small boy crawled near the sofa...hiding from Aastha's vision...

Aastha: Ruko...😑😑

Ashwin: aaj...meri band baajati jodeenga...Aastha...πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

Ashwin turns towards Aastha...

Aastha: phir sey...shuru hogi ..tumhari badmaashi...😑😑...(Every week...complaint from each teacher...) I'm fed up of it...yeh sab sekaya maine tumhe...😑😑

Aastha sees his dress ...full of dirt...

Aastha: kya haal banayi raka apne aapko...😑😑...? started to work...in any railway station...putting coal into the engine...

Ashwin: Nahi...Aasthu ...wo (Aastha gave an angry stare...😑😑...)

Ashwin: sorry...sorry...Aayi...wo actually I slipped and fell on the road...so only I got stained...πŸ€”

Nahi...Aayi...nahi...wo joot bolraye...

Ashwin: aagayi...meri ...pareshaani...πŸ˜•πŸ˜²πŸ˜²

Ashwini: aapko...pata hai.Aayi...aaj isne kya kiya...😲😲

Ashwin sighed not to tell anything...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwini turned her face...: wo Aayi... aaj Ashwin aur Rahul dada ek doosrey sey lad rehe they...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwin: wah.wah...apne Dada ko...😑😑...naam sey bularathey...aur uss Rahul ku Dada kehhaithey...😲😲

Aastha stared at him again...Ashwin looked at Shlok for help...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwin came to Shlok: yeh kya hai Shlok...aapne yeh hi toh kahatha...dont worry if any problem occurs I'll care of Aastha...😲😲...n now you are standing still...

Aastha turned towards Shlok... Shlok couldn't manage...😲😲😲

Shlok: wo...Aastha ...chod na...he is still a kid...πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±

Aastha: If he is a kid...he must behave like a kid...not like this...Today we have to sort this...until he behaves properly I wont talk to him...😑😑

Ashwini: mey bhi...😑😑

Ashwin makes a sad face...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Shlok: Aastha ...what is this...? for small mistakes...you will punish him like this...😲😲

Aastha: Stop it ...Shlok...you are the one who is spoiling him...😑😑...n for saving him everytime...even you must be punished...No dinner for you today...😑😑

Shlok: Kya...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Aastha:come on Ashwini...let us go...

They leave...

Shlok n Ashwin stare at each other..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Shlok lifted Ashwin...

Ashwin: Dont worry...Baba...Aayi ka gussa...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...todhi der mey thandi hogayi...

Shlok: it happens only in your case...akhir tum uski laadla toh hai...πŸ˜‰

Ashwin: Baba...dont worry... I'll be relieved from Ashwini's bakwaas for some days...πŸ˜†...n even you said that you are fed up of Aayi's boring khana...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...you will get to eat good food...

Shlok: ya .you are right...(both giggled...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...n stopped seeing Aastha n Ashwini staring at them...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...)

Aastha: what did you tell now...😑😑...? boring khana...😑😑

Ashwini: aap dada...what did you say...? bakwaas...😑😑

Shlok n Ashwin: Nahi.nahi...hum toh masak kareyhai thi...

Aastha: acha...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...(Aastha took the pillow from the sofa...)

Shlok: Aastha...nahi...😲😲😲...( Shlok drops Ashwin...n runs from Aastha...)

Ashwini pinched Ashwin's ears: Ahaa...chodo Choti...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ashwini: what did you tell...?😑😑

Ashwin: sorry.sorry...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...(They both stopped seeing Aastha n Shlok...) (They started laughing...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...) Even now they fight n argue like us...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

Finally Shlok n Aastha settled in the sofa...

Ashwin n Ashwini hugged them...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

HENCE, THE KING AND QUEEN LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH THEIR PRINCE AND PRINCESS...πŸ˜›

Hope you liked it...

Do comment how the story was...

Your comments only will encourage me to try more...

Thank you for bearing my mistakes...

Thanks in advance for your comments...

i was on the verge of tears reading the last part.oh!how beautifully u write!!hats offπŸ‘hope to see more from u,and very soonπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yaar... loved it... nyc ending...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a journey ended of two people. from point of just frnds to beautiful.. family love it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
ok so both of dem were in the same park idiots
nd finally dey confessed their love
nd dey had twins who were xerox copy of their parents hahah
such a sweet nd cute story
thanks for this story
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part 11

awesome updAte
where is astha
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part 11

awesome updAte
where is astha.

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