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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

oh dat was such a sweet nd cute update

love the happy ending

thanks for such a wonderful os

u r a nice writer

keep writing

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

amazing amazing truly amazing...👏. i got tears in my eyes reading that one🤗... its wonderful meerab...🥳 emotions were flowing to me... shlok and astha and their love is so pure.. and its a baby girl.. awwee...☺️. loved it sweety...😊

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

it was so romantic with full ashlok n their luv.loved d sentence u wrote "I love you, not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you."
it was unique.this time they made really luv.loved d thing that shlok wrote diary abt his luv 4 aastha,not 4 swati.loved d ending.they hve a daughter.I doubt if NA got angry seeing a girl instead of a boy

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
amazing amazing truly amazing...👏. i got tears in my eyes reading that one🤗... its wonderful meerab...🥳 emotions were flowing to me... shlok and astha and their love is so pure.. and its a baby girl.. awwee...☺️. loved it sweety...😊

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
oh dat was such a sweet nd cute update
love the happy ending
thanks for such a wonderful os
u r a nice writer
keep writing

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
it was so romantic with full ashlok n their luv.loved d sentence u wrote "I love you, not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you."
it was unique.this time they made really luv.loved d thing that shlok wrote diary abt his luv 4 aastha,not 4 swati.loved d ending.they hve a daughter.I doubt if NA got angry seeing a girl instead of a boy

don't worry about NA ...when ashlok are happy...he can do nothing😆😆😆😆😆