#4, My Heart whispers, but I cant hear..Epilogue in new Thread... - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

Lovely update... u r a blessed writer, made me cry again...😭

he felt his baby n then those mixed emotions ...loved this part

Hey, see our baby is kicking me...she smiled...

Really? Shlok was surprised...show me too...

Astha took his hand and placed it on her tummy...after few moments,, Shlok too felt baby kick...

Really...Shlok too jumped with happiness...wow...it feels so lovely...

Yup..Astha spoke holding his hand while he was still feeling baby kicks at times...suddenly he became sad removing his hand...

What Shlok? She asked...

Astha, will I see our baby? He spoke with teary eyes...

Of course Shlok...you will not only see, but will play with our baby, teach it and even marry our baby...she caressed his face pulling him for a hug...

😔



And other three laughed...Shlok, soon you are going to be papa, still so stupid...Varun chided him...

Will you tell me directly? Shlok was irritated...

Gauri is expecting...finally Varun said...

Really? Shlok jumped with joy hugging them both...

Hey I have an idea...Varun spoke suddenly ...

Bolo... Astha said...

umm...varun smiled...if you have a baby boy and we have baby girl, we will get them married...

Ya, you are right...Shlok too spoke with happiness... And if I have a baby girl and you have baby boy, even then we will get them married...

But...Astha spoke...if we both have baby girls or baby boys?

Umm...Shlok smiled naughtily...then we will ask them...we don't have any objection, if they don't mind...and he winked to Varun giving him hi five... And they shared a high laughter...



😆loved the above part ,planning the future...
not knowing the very next moment will change their life...😔
( just hope this change turns out to be a happy one in the end)

she wiped her tears and went near window, while Anjali had been inside to meet him...from there she saw Shlok resting on the bed and Anjali to signaled Shlok to see Astha telling him the situation...he looked towards Astha, gave her a fade smile signaling he is fine...Astha too smiled... he signaled her to take care of her and baby... Astha nodded in yes with teary eyes...

loved this part...❤️

doctor had told na, they may operate only in critical conditions...tell them I am in critical condition now...save my baby and Shlok...she spoke with painful smile...when doctor had also reached...

Gauri told him complete situation and they called shlok's and Astha's doctors for treatment...

As they were taking Atsha to operation theater...

We fear we will be able to save one from mother and baby...doctors discussed with each other...

While Atsha was saying to doctor...doctor, don't worry about me...save my baby...

Shlok was brought there on wheel chair, as he had listened unconsciously discussing someone and he had insisted doctor to let him meet once to Astha...

Astha...he spoke with difficulty...why?

Because I love you stupid...she smiled painfully...

But if something happens to you...Shlok caressed her face...

But you will live...Shlok promise me...you will live and give all happiness to our baby...

No...Shlok nodded in no...either we both live or...

No Shlok..Promise me... You will live...

Why do you always win from me Astha? Shlok cried badly...I love you...

I love you more...Astha spoke leaving...

Mr Agnihotri we have to take her soon...she is losing blood...saying doctor took Astha to operation theater...


😭
oh God astha is astha...
never expected she would go to such an extent...

"love" can overcome all odds...

hope to c astha well again with shlok n chotu astha

PS- its a baby girl... as shlok wished for...
hope varad n gauri dont have a baby girl too...😆 🤣



ahem ahem ...sorry let me get serious again...

beautiful story...thanx jeenia... muahhh...😊


baki saab chodo, i loved this part...

PS- its a baby girl... as shlok wished for...
hope varad n gauri dont have a baby girl too...😆 🤣


Thanks a lot dear...love you...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795




that I told for joke
no sad endings
but then I told I loved the baby kick part
now what name did you decide for the baby


sorry yaar...am really too busy today...as will be on leave for three days, so have to complete work...
you must be sleepig by now...so good night...sweet dreams...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazygul

di. iss pyaar ko main kya naam du ?? humesha sochti thi iska kya uttar hai.. aaj jvaab mil guya ... mar prem...


Mar prem
ya mar prem?
then why not to kill astha and make it really amar?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

that means this story is going to end sadly?😲😭 😭


Let's see...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
really??? so mean jeenia...i do hope she survived, happy endings are the best:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent update. So u have left it to the readers to decide abt Aastha???
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! What a cliff hanger...the whole time I was reading the chapter my heart was beating fast...you are something I tell you...leaving all of us hanging that too over the weekend 😆 Now I don't know whether it's gonna be a sad ending or a happy ending..Huh huh!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


baki saab chodo, i loved this part...

PS- its a baby girl... as shlok wished for...
hope varad n gauri dont have a baby girl too...😆 🤣


Thanks a lot dear...love you...

😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ya awesome nd so emotional.. I love the part whr astha destroyed the mirrors..
Bt pls let t b a happy endn .. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

really??? so mean jeenia...i do hope she survived, happy endings are the best:)


am so sorry dear...let's see...

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