Ashlok SS~ Out Of Our Hands~ {Ch 3 Updated!} (SS completed)

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

NOTE:-

This is it for the last part. I hope you guys read it and enjoyed. This was basically my first writing on Ashlok.

i really enjoyed writing this little piece.

Your comments were like cookies to me. I am so glad and gratefull to everyone who read and enjoyed.

Please do leave your comments for the last part too.

For my other works:-

There is an upcoming FF, the links to which are:-

Ashlok FF Love Finds Its Way

Do buddy me for my upcoming projects.

Love you all.

A special Thank You list for all the great readers.

😳

Edited by LazyLad - 11 years ago

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Many Many thanks to:-

meerab147

Pveenat

pt311288

Girl54,

shalinikanagu,

, Serviana,

goolab

vghh

SHINYSHREYA

roshanii

Love You All!😳😳

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Just read all 3 chapters...really beautiful and emotional...keep writing🤗

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Wow great ending thank you so much for posting it, hope you will write some more stories

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lechu

@-LECHU-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

thanks a lot dear...finally they united 👏

loved the story to the core

one of the best short story i have read so far...

the way you convey emotions...just awsome

"If fate decides to take a relation's bond OUT OF OUR HANDS, we can try our blood and soul against it but we can't run away from it. No matter how far we try to run we will eventually end"

these lines...its so true...and i loved those lines

keep writing more

you are really a blessed writer

lovingly

lechu

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

it was a very nice story, and it was so sweet when he read the letter. my hindi is so bad so i couldnt quite understand the last part, which is a real bummer, cause it seems to be important! I am really looking forward to your next ff, your a very talented writer.