Ashlok SS: Sirf Ek Zindagi Part 7 (Page 22) - Page 7

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Maja aageya di..🤣
Lovely update..
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lovely... shadi toh ho kar rahegi
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Lovely updates dear!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!!!!!
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hey its superb...
amazing...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Nice job sis..nice caps and messages..
I hope next will be love track...I mean real falling in love,

Actually Hindi ..little was confused add English version if possible...
Loved your effort ..to bring apt in dailogues..so needed HINDI??

Do update more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasai

Nice job sis..nice caps and messages..

I hope next will be love track...I mean real falling in love,

Actually Hindi ..little was confused add English version if possible...
Loved your effort ..to bring apt in dailogues..so needed HINDI??

Do update more.


i will try to add English translation next time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...

Thanks for the pm...

continue soon...



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Fantastic story please update soon and pm please xx
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Author's Note :I felt like sharing my views on story... This is story of No Suspense... This is story of changing relationships... How a relationship change with time and get affected by circumstances and by there own feelings... This is a story where you will see how money breaks blood relations... This is story of one complicated life indulging everything... This is story in which I am trying to convey the simplest message, we got one life live it to fullest leaving Jealousy, Greedy and Ego... We got only one life, there is second chance but not second life...

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Precap : Kalindi tries to convince Advoot not to think about business plan with Agnihotri's but fails... Niranjan and Anjali's plan to make Advoot as asset for business and make him suffer liabilities... Aastha's realization about seriousness of her and Shlok's marriage idea by their families... Sholk and Aastha decides to stop there marriage....

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Part 4:

"Jaldi kijiye, humein unke ghar jaana hai..." Kalindi quickened everyone to leave...

"Yeh dono kaha hai...???" Advoot asked coming out of room setting his cuffs...

"Yeh dono taiyaar hone mein itna daer lagate hai aur ayi bhi abhi tak nahi aayi..." Kalindi complained getting restless... She don't want to get

"Arre mein toh yahi hoon, tumhari dono betiyan hi late hai..." Ajju, Advoot's mother came out of room setting her hair...

"Aayi, mein unn dono ko bhula bhula ke tak gayi hoon..." Aastha and Sojal declined stairs while Kalindi is complaining...

"Hum late nahi aayi, aap logh jaldi taiyaar hogaye..." Aastha smiled and covered there mistake...

"Yahi bahana humesha mooh pe rehta hai..." Kalindi said taking her purse from table...

"Abb chale..." Advoot showed door...

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Agnihotri's House:

"woh logh aate honge, jaldi kijiye..." Anjali instructed servants... "Shlok utt gaya...???" She questioned Jyothi who is standing beside completely lost with phone in her hand... Anjali repeated to gain her attention...

Jyothi woke up from her phone conversation, "Ha, woh kaha utta hai, itna jaldi utt jayega toh sun rise ho na bhul jayega..."

"Aur tum humesha iss phone mein kya kart rehti ho, phone ki bahar bhi duniya hai..." Anjali smacked her head and left from there for some work...

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Shlok's Room:

"Utto Shlok woh logh aate honge..." Anjali tried to wake him up... "7 bajgaya hai Shlok... tumhe roj uttana ek kaam ki tarah hogaya hai... humein mandir jana hai" Anjali tried to wake him up...

Shloked popped his head out, "Aayi shaadi kiska hai...???" He asked in sleepy voice...

"Varad ka..."Anjali replied...

"Exactly, usse mandir jana hai, mujhe chod dijiye..." He covered himself again...

"Yeh nahi sudrega... waise bhi jab tak Aastha aake nahi uttayegi tu kaha uttega.. bachpan se toh yahi chal raha hai..." Anjali left from there...

"Iska kya matlab hai...??? Iska bhi yeh koi alag matlab na nikal de... Mein kud uttke taiyaar hojata hoon..." Shlok got up from his bed to freshen up...

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Kirloskar's reached Agnhotri's house where everything is ready... They scheduled temple today for presenting first issue of wedding card to god... They met, wished each-other with early morning pleasant smiles... They had tea-chat and got ready to leave...

"Shlok kaha hai...???" Aastha questioned...

"Woh abhi tak utta nahi hai..." Jyothi answered...

"Mein taiyaar hoon..." Their heads turned person declining stairs... Shlok wore his temple dress which was kept aside by Anjali...

"Aaj toh chamatkar hogaya hai, Shlok Agnihotri temple jaa raha hai... I am sure baghwaan kudh welcome karne aayege..." Aastha teased, before Shlok could react Anjali stopped them, she doesn't want to get late because of their war...

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Niranjan, Anjali, Avoot, Kalindi, Ajju and Jyothi were travelling SUV... Shlok, Aastha, Sojal and Varad in second car...

"Anjali, aap woh saadi toh nahi bhule...???" Anjali checked with Niranjan's question...

"Lagte hai mein ne table pe hi chod diya... Woh saadi matarani ki pairon pe rakh kar Sojal ko dene wale te..." Anjali worried at her mistake...

"Tension matt lo Anjali, Shlok hai na..." Kalindi calmed her down...

Advoot called Shlok and informed him to go back to Agnihotri's Mansion to bring saree... Sojal and Varad shifted their car as they have to reach temple with their parents... Aastha went back with Shlok as she forgot her phone on drawing table...

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Agnihotri Mansion:

Shlok and Aastha entered house... Shlok collected saree and Aastha her mobile... Aastha reached dining table to stop her urge to water as she is feeling thirsty... She poured down water in glass from jar but before she could take sip, she remembered Kalindi's words Paani ka ek boond bhi matt peena, hum jis mandir mein jaa rahe hai waha ka Prasad khali paet khana se pura zindagi khushiyon se bar jata hai...'

Aastha placed glass down on table... Controlling her thirst she turned to leave... She saw opening his chocolate bar to eat... "Shlok rukho..." Aastha ran to him... She grabbed chocolate from his hands... "Tum yeh kya kar rahe ho, mandir jaane se pehle kuch nahi khana hai, aur tum yeh chocolate kha rahe ho..."

"Aastha tumhe pata hai mein inn sab pe vishwas nahi rakhta hoon, so chup chaap chocolate waapass do..." He took step forward to snatch his chocolate back, Aastha took her step backward...

"Mein ne subha se paani tak piya nahi, aur tum mere saamne chocolate khaoge... Huh... sapne mein... Aur kaunsa insaan subha subha chocolate khata hai...???" She moved back as Shlok is movig his steps forward...

"Tum advertisements nahi dekti ho kya...??? Tumne suna nahi... Feeling Hungry, go grab a snickers..." There play of moving front and back continued as Aastha is hiding his chocolate...

After few steps Aastha hit herself to Sofa behind her... She lost her balance... She held Shlok for support but both couldn't balance themselves... Aastha fell back pulling Shlok with her... Aastha became salad leaf between couch and Shlok... Their eyes met...

Shlok could see something new in her eyes... He is watching her from childhood but he was never lost in her eyes before... He never observed her eyes... There is some magic in those bouncy eyes which can hold person with her till his last breath... He pulled himself out of trance with struggling movement of Aastha to herself up... He got up and so her... Aastha showed him chocolate and thought of escaping from there... Shlok held loose end of her saree to stop her, but by mistake pinned saree was torn...

Aastha held her breath with her saree in his hands... His eyes popped out realizing what he did... He released loose end from his hands... He saw not Aastha's unmovable reaction... He held loose end and wrapped it around her from back turning his face to other-side... He whispered Sorry which brought a slight smile in the corner of her lips... Aastha moved her steps into a room to set her saree... After ten minutes they left from there...

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Temple:

Aastha and Shlok reached with saree on time... All prayed together... They presented wedding card and saree... Priest did all rituals and asked Sojal and Varad to make 11 rounds around temple... Shlok and Aastha also accompanied them...

Niranjan handed over a file to priest... He asked priest to keep that file near Matarani's feet to take blessings...

"Yeh kaunsa file hai Niranjan...???" Advoot questioned...

"Mein kal jiss business ke bare mein baat kar raha tha, usi ka kuch planned papers hai... Aaj investors se meeting hai.. Iss liye mein chahta hoon ki yeh successful ho" Niranjan replied...

"Mein bhi ussi business ke bare mein kuch baat karna chahta hoon..." Advoot said... Kalindi face fell, she don't want this to happen but she is not able to stop it...

"Ha zaroor, ghar jaane ke baad aaram se baat karenge..." Niranjan passed smile to Anjali.. Anjali reflected same...

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Pre-cap: Business plan... Swati's Entry... Aastha's jealousy..

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago
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Wonderful Update, loved reading it. It's so nice Aastha and Sojal are sisters. Update soon. Thanks for the PM.

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