AShlok SS: Love and Deception Chp 1 pg 6

Shru

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First of all Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum and this is my first writing here. Please bare with me and my writing. I'm hoping to update as soon as possible (everything depends upon the respond).

If I get at least few likes and feedback I'll post the chapter 1 soon.. that's a promise😉

SS: Love & Deception

Index...

Prologue : Below

Character Sketch

Chapter 1

Note: I don't own the Character's they are absolutely fictional. I only own my writings that are fantsy based. They aren't related entirely with someone's or anyone's personal life in particular. Some parts could be inspired by my own life, if I happened to be inspired by someone else's life I would definitely mention it.

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Shru

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Prologue

Been waiting for you, since I got here. I ensure, to have faith in him even though the world would say anything against him.' She thought.

I don't give a D-A-M-N, what the people around me are saying but my heart says you're not that type. I love you, and you love me I know that's the true story.

Will wait for you till you don't arrive, I'll wait for you minutes and hours without doubting on you for a second...

Until my soul reaches the outerspace I'll be yours and only yours. Though we couldn't be complete yet. Faith is all I have, love is all I'll carry forward, with a tear drop of sadness in my heart and a slight curve on my lips.

Being ditched is not an issue, but why would I be ditched is my question to my mind' she once again asked.

He wont come' explained everyone.

His father looked more depressed on him than me' she spoke to her mind again.

All my inner voices spoke at once, while people started whispering, which slowly spread all cross the venue'

Sitting here in a brides costume without a groom is embarrassing my family, there's definitely something wrong, but what is that I have to find out.'

While the priest once again repeated Please call the groom, the auspicious time soon would be over'

My soul empowered my body and I held his picture tightly next to my heart and walked around the fire. While everyone whispered loudly This girl has lost it'

She has gone mad'

I think the guy cheated her'

This is what you get for loving a rich lad'

I heard it all yet, unheard. With a tear rolling down from the corner of my eyes, eventually falling in the fire..

Here I wait for answers, but more than answers I wait for him.

Him to arrive and tell, It wasn't deception but a misunderstanding'

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Please ignore my grammatical mistakes, and hit like and comment please😆

Shru😳

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samiya.059

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Finally...u decided to write something...!!!!
How much I missed ur stories...only I can tell..though u owe me an update of saans..he he..am not gonna leave unless u update that one...
coming to the update..
It was amazing and fantastic as always...!!!!
The prologue is so interesting...the concept is amazing...!!!!
Liked how u described the fight btw asthas heart and mind..while the brain wants her to see the obvious and believe that shlok deceived her...her heart is not willing to believe...it has full faith on its conquerer..!!!!
I hope he comes there soon..so her faith doesn't shatter...!!!
brilliantly written..!!!
P.S..the edit hasn't come out well.
my editing software is not working..:P

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