GLUE. A one shot on Astha and Shlok. - Page 5

Originally posted by: hemvb

awesome one shot...may be you would consider extend it into some more parts ;)

good luck...do keep writing, you are really good at it

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Oh. My. God. Naina! This is the first time I think I've read anything from you before but I have to say - it is probably one of the best OS's I've read in my life! Even though it was inspired by the show - the way you described it added a whole new dimension to the whole scene! Your writing skills are honestly phenomenal! Like maybe you should consider writing a book? 😆 I would buy it for sure. :)

The level of detail was wonderful - not too little and not so much that you get confused in the words. It was PERFECT!

And your extension to the scene was BEAUTIFUL!

Yep, the joke is on Shlok and his plan did royally backfire!

Honestly looking forward to read more from you. Hope you will write something more soon and when you do, please pm me! 😃

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome..

Originally posted by: kshows_fangirl

OMG!! It is great to see you here!! I love and am addicted to your FF Masterclass on Arnav and Khushi!! My username b/4 was nikita59 and I have commented on ur FF b/4, but I haven't gotten the time to read as much as b/4. But, this weekend I have a lot of catching up to do with ur FF!! I recommend your FF to everyone I know.

This OS was written beautifully! You have portrayed their thoughts and emotions on that scene of Maha Episode...!

P.S..I recommend you to publish your FF Masterclass! It is so addicting!! Also, if and when u do get time, please do write an FF/OS on Astha/Shlok..Thanks! 😊

wow is the word...the way u expressed that scene through ur words.. mind blowing...beautifully written...not to forget your addition to it...i guess it was better than the real confession!!