BY HOOK OR BY CROOK OS updt part 2 pg 1 on 2-2-14

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Hey guys...hope u like this one shot..this part is dedicated to all moms...i wish all could be like her standing and understandingg their daughter and bs tjeir strenth...esp this is true in my case coz these r quite similar words my mom had spoken to me when i was 18 and i tht i had fallen for a guy and it wss love..but than god i used my beains as well ..heeded to her advice and saved my self from any kind of harm...lolthere r many wolves hiding in mask of kihd shloks to trap and play with innocent and dreamy hearts..

This os is purely from asthas pov...only astha speaks...only her thts r visualised...if i get good response to thix os i may write shloks pov as a third update.

Aayi:aastha...wke up from your fairy land..will you..u get only a sunday for us and usme be u r still sleeping...wake
Astha:ayi ssone na plz..it was so late I slept..she's still talking with closed eyes. ?.
Ayi...astha tumhe ho kya gaya hai..aajkal der tak jagti ho, khane ka hosh nahi..apne aap mein muskursti rehti ho...mai tumhari ayi hoon..aur mai samajh rahi hoon yeh kyz ho raha hai...astha we r long overdue for a talk I think...hearing all this astha woke with a jerk..
Astha: kya ayi aao bhi na..aisa kuch nahi hai...acha aap jao mai fresh hokey aati hoon..
Ayi: astha kahin tum shlok ko pasand toh nahi karne lagi...astha..turns Ll read she fumbles, hesitate s and start looking here and there...kya ayi aap bhi...aisa kuch nahi...asthz is frieghtened..sges fearing her mom now...
Aayi: smiles , pulls astha towards her and politely says...pyar karna galat nahi beta...par kis insaan se karo..yeh mayne rakhta hai...pyar aur pasand alag hoti hai astha...uss din , maine dekha tha tumhe aur shlok ko...mai manti hoon ki usne tumhe bachaya...woh purani batten bhool gaya hai...par...jiss tarah woh
tumhe dekhta hai..ek junoon...ek paheli...aisa lagta hai jaise ...woh khud ko ya tumhe kuch prove karna chaht hai...astha
aur maine dekha hai..aajkal uske naam se hi tumhara rang badal jaata hai...tumhari eyes mein mujhe aise khwaab nazar
aane lage hain..jo mujhe darr hai kahin toot gaye toh ...tumhe bahut takleef hogi...astha ...tumhe logon ki pehchaan nahi
abhi...tum bahut soft dil ki ho...mujhe darr hai beta..tumhare liye...mai nahi jaanti shlok kaisa hai...par itna zaroor jaanti
hoon...ki woh ek paheli ki tarah hai..kabhi kabhu mera dil kehta hai...woh kuch aur hai...jo tumhe nazar nahi aa
raha?..astha is very intently hearing all this...she never expected her Aayi to be so understanding and cool...to be so
caring and sensitive to her feelings...aayi aap bhi na...shlok sir bahut ache hain..aur mujhe hi galat fahmi hui thi unhe
jaanne mein...aayi woh bahut caring hai...understanding..haan thode khadoos hai...but hes good aayi...and I just like
him...
Aayi is watching the lost puppy look on asthA...she's worried for her daughter...her gut instinct is warning her of
impending heartbreak..but shd knows its too late..she's fallen in pit...now she can only pray...and stand by her...she has
a sinking feeling..something she cant point out about shlok...some danger...she says to astha" beta...I just want to tell
you that beware of ur surroundings beta...dont get lost and ignore anything...plz tread the path carefully u r walking
on...be strong...and do heed to ur mind also beta...heart may not always be right...and never do or say anything that bring
shame and guilt to ur ownself and to people who love u...face the facts and stand upto any situation...and I assure u u will
always find ur parents behind znd besides u come whatever may...I just want u to be happy...but plz think about what I
said...
Astha: ayi..dont worry...am fine and ..she hugs her ..
Thanx for understanding me...I was so freightened...but
I accept I think what I feel for shlok sir is something more...which I have never felt before...aayi thanx for being my friend
my confidante...u r my strength...thanx now I dont need to be afraid of anything...and am sure...I am not wrong about
sir...u dont need to worry...to be continued...

plzz scroll down...its continued down
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nice one.. Plz update soon 😳 😊
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That was great thank you 😊
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CONTINUED

I couldn't beleive my mom wohld turn into a friend...a guide...I had so much love and pride for my ayi..I today I felt so relaxed and strangely clear head..now I knew I could share anything with my mom and she will be my pillar..this day was indeed great..but y was it sunday...i wanted to go to office...i was missing..him i acknwledged for the first time...talking to ayi had changed me..a big weight anx fear had lifted off me..so strange...there was shlok sir who hated her aayi..and what a kind of woman she was i knew..and here was my ayi..thanx bappa..aayi u go am coming znd we all will go fir a picnic today what say mommmy dear...kalindi just smiled and said that they woukd talk about it once shes down and her aaju is waiting for her dearly...come down fast ok..and she leaves...
Astha is back in her dreamland...those feras have unleashed a new feeling in her...it felt so right..but was it right...they were just a drill ..its not as if they had really married...but y did he chose me...does he too feel the same...the way he cares about me...the way he controls his anger , the way he beat that man...the shlok agnihotri. ? The gr8 tyrant..tore his shirt for me..some astha kirloskar. ? Am I relly meaning sometjing to him...how will I know...he doesn't ever talk...but inuske inn actions ko mai kya naam doon...nahi astha u have gone crazy..y would he ever think of u..its wrong for me to feel like this...when I heard my aaji calling..asthu u planning to finish the whole tank today kya...I said am coming ...I just ran to change...I was feeling very lighthearted...my parents were very happy spending time with me...and I was inwardly missing the khadoos...still in dillema as to y ayi tht negative about him...hes been so caring understanding these few days...mom is mistaken..she

doesnt connect with outside world...well...aanyway. .." so baba what plans for today.."beta as u say...astha phone satrtd
ringing...she without seeing disconnected the call...it again was ringing and was met same fate...astha mom was just
looking at her...who is calling astha...she a little embarassed..mom I dunno...today is my off..and am not gonna pick any
call...ayi was pretty apprehensive ..she took astha aside..." baby its shlok na...but today is ur off...y is he calling u and y
rnt u picking...u say u dontnfeel anything right..so y avoid him or its because of me u rnt picking..."
A: no mom...its
just that I think I need a break from hectic work...and I dunno whose calling...see I didn't even see the no"
Ayi: fine
beta I beleive u...but thts whats worrying me...thta as if u knew whose calling u...but plz heed to my advice"

Astha...beta we have to cancel our plans today...we have to go at our firends today...they have teej
celebrations...would u like to come with us" asked avdoot
A; baba u all go I will be fine...but plz dont be late from there
aap log wahaan jaatey ho toh wahin ke ho jaatey ho...ok then...the phone rings again and astha seeing her moms
expressions just switches off the phone...astha is all alone in house now thinking about her feelings...I think I shld rest a
while...I am so confused..he just doesnt let me breathe. ?.how do I think..I won't pick up his call...not at all...if he feels
something he should come clean...again she's on a recalling spree...all ashlok moments...my heart is running a
marathon...its as if I can feel his gaze even now..i can feel his presence. ?.am I truly in love...kya pyar aisa hota
ha.l
Kal raat jo hua..shlok sir was about to kill that guy...unhone jo kaha kya woh sach tha par fif jis tarah unhone
mujhe danta.darr lagta hai mujhe apni feelings se..jitna unse door jana chahti hoon utna hi woh paas az jatey hain..than
god unhe nahi pata aaj mera off hai..k...continued plzz scroll down
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Jis tarah woh mere paas aa rahe they...unhone jo mujhse fere liye..I couldn't stand that and face him..my emotions were too haywire..kya karti mai I had to run from there I had no choice...koi help me plz..when he comes near me my heart seems to jump..it seems he can hear it all clear and loud...I just lose all senses...he has been calling md sinse I ran away..lbut I dont have courage to face him..plz help me.li dunno how he gonna react knowing I have an off...thanx god I told mangesh sir am going out of station today.atleast shlok will no and he won't pester ke for once...the door bell is ringing...
Omg..y I feel like..is it sir here..no what the hell..didn't mAngesh sir said..him am going out..what do I do now..lrt me check
Hell its shlok sir and hes raging..omg hes looking so furious.., no I won't open the door..let him keep standing there..the bell kedps shrilling.ajd then she hears his loud angry growl.."astha either u open or u will regret it...I know u r inside..dont u dare astha" astha had to open the door..she frighteningly..opens and shlok enters inside ragingly...he just pins her up..how dare u astha...runaway from me..u take I am not letting that no way..do u know how mAdly I was worried when u left yest night..goddammit..it was just mock feras..dont u rem what happened last time. ? And then hell u ignore my calls..u think I wouldnt no what u r upto...dont u ever try to runaway from me again..ever means ever..and u better understand that...y did u run away from me...he wzs raging like a tiger unkeashing its fury...I for first time felt fear...from him..i tried to read him but couldn't...he looked so concerned and yet something I tht was amiss..I just had to stop him the way he was shouting at the topof his voice...whole colony would gather here...bappa thanx ki no one is in the house...I just covered his mouth with my palms and pleading him to stop shouting...and realised what I did done..lthis was too intimate...his expressions changed all of a sudden...I was fumbling now..getting nervous..I could see care , possesiveness and something fiery in his eyes to which my body was reacting volatiley...I was weakening in my knees..I could feel my whole body warming up and sensations at places..I dont dare recall...abruptly I removed my hands..and just asked him to leave anc that I accepted hix sorry...suddenly I was pushed towards the sofa...I couldnt fathom..was too stunned at his act...he bent over mr completely...I could see his eyes burning holes in my body..yes that ws..too intimidating..we were just too close..breath to breath..I was lost in that moment and finally I gave in.lmy lips opened and eyes closed on its own accord...inviting him...he just growled..."enough..I just cant control anymore" and he kissed me...it was my firstever kiss...it felt like I was in heaven...he bit hard on my lips..but strangely this pain was blissfull..my lips were swollen..I was on fire..burning furnace..I gave it back to him all from my soul..we were ravishing each other liie two wildznimalz about to mate...I knew it I was lost completely...I had bartered mysoul to him..but in return of what...blood was thrumming in my ears...when we were over each other I dont remember...his lipx were tastiest thing I ever had znd it was not enough..I was getting wilder by the min...hungry for more...wanting more..his kiss was too ferocious..angry, scorching, passionate, raw, possessive, claiming and maddening...we both were unable to stop..I felt it was eternity and we were still rythming our tounges...they were battling out their own war..when he pushed me hard...very hard...I couldnt understand whatvwss happening...I stood up bewildered..he had his back to me..I couldn't seehis face...he was straighting his shirt..and hairs I had messed up bad..and then I realised my state..I too sstraightened my dress..my top..just thinking of tge way his hzndx were roaming on me made me blush hard..he was not yet facing me..i knew he loved me...he was so good and understanding..he knew not to cross his boundary..such z decent man..I knew I had sunk in too deep tobever get out..I had given my heart and soul to him...I just went and hugged him from behind...shlok...I forgive u..u dont have to shy away...I think I love u and when u r in love..its sometimes uncontrollable..he ws still silent not answering...and then he turned...I tht he would look happy just as I had dreamt..that he was as much in love with me as I was...but I was shocked st the look on his face...I retreated behind in shock..fear..he was indeed the devil..he was smirking so evilly giving me creepy feeling...it feltbas if he was gloating...he was mocking me...I just couldnt feel anything anymore..I wss numb..he glared at me...haha astha u really think I shlok loves you..r u outta ur mind...girls..see it proves how stupid they r.bloody emotional fools...see I finally made u accept..u love me...lol..u love me...see u love shlok whom what u once said doesnt have z single good quality...that I was good for nothing..right u refused me..my marriage proposal citing I wasn't fit and worthy of you..u making a mockery of my baba and me in public. ? U who never wanted to even acknowledge my presense..and now love ..u kissed the same shlok so maddeningly..I must say though u r a brilliant kisser..and I enjoyed it to core..and if not for me stopping..u would have happily slept wigh md too...yes astha krloskar..what u were telling..u accept my apology. ? For what sweatheart...I never apologized forvanything..yupp for anything..even for kissing u...u know u girls r worth nothing...just toys to play with...and u think u r capable as men..ur speceies is damn weak astha...and I have proved itvtoday...u hurt me, my ego, my baba image..and that day itself I had decided I would teach u a lesson..which u would rem life long...u hurt me, I hurt u, hisaab barabar sweetheart...I feel so light today...I had warned u ..dont mess with me...u dont no what I am..how does it feel being ditched astha...atleast I spared u from public humiliation...but whats a better revenge than this feeling that u were ready to fall on me all by urself...as to u know I sould have easily slept with u and ruined u compketely all with ur own willingness...but u know u r not worth shlok...u r not worth my night honey...feel just lucky enough that u have been kissed by shlok...end of part one...

So guys how was it..plz share ur views..and there is one mord part to this os...plz like and comment...I dunno how its come out though...I hope u all liked it..and plz what do u think shld happen in story now...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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Guys after a long time me updating this os. Have a read hope u like it and plz do comment on it. This time I have tried to not create any gramattical errors but if still if u find any plz ignore it coz typing from mobile is very very difficult. I just hope u like it and enjoy...if u have any questions regarding future or past or even present of this storyline plz feel free to ask or u can even suggest or ask for ideas what u wish to see in this story line...so here goes the next part. BUT BEFORE MOVING ON ACTUALLY THIS WAS A ONE SHOT SO ITS ACTUALLY COMPLETE...BUT IF U GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINIE THEN DO WRITE IT AND I WOULD MAKE IT AN SS.
PART2


It was thundering outside. Her parents had not yet come back. She was silent,shocked and gloomy...staring through the window of her room towards the black clouds which were ready to unleash any time now...astha was so lost in her thts that she didn't even see the arrival of her parents...her mind was as gloomy and thundering as the clouds outside...it was a very dark night exactly like her mind...she didn't hear the doorbell.. Either...staring at the dark nightmarish night...she was lost when a continuous shrill awoke her from her reverie... She saw her parents then. She ran to open the door. She was unable to face anyone...so she just ran away without even seeing anyone.. Her parents kept on calling her name but she didn't heed. They were shocked at her strange behavior but let it go and went on to sleep except kalindi...who had been quite all this while..she silently went to change.
Astha was still looking at the clouds ."y aren't these bloody clouds breaking..y ain't its raining..I just want to get lost in that sound...I can't even face myself now. Darn what a fool I have made of myself. Really girls r so weak. Shlok is right. I have lost all my self respect. Ayi was so right. But what do I do now? I have become a laughing stock now. How easily he trapped me. The way he was evilly smirking, the way he told am not worth him how dare he.? I really am a fool to fall for him. And look at my foolish heart...even after seeing the beastly truth..hearing it out it still is feeling the same for him. Why ? Why me god? Why I had to learn the meaning of love from him only? Y still am hoping that he does feel for me..that all his care, his possessive ness ain't fake. I surely had glimpsed something in his eyes for me...how can I be so blind to believe all of this. He's broken me , my soul is hurt..and yet my stupid heart is singing, hoping, loving him...o god! Please help me..show me the way...plz help me cry god .."
Suddenly astha felt a hand on her sholdier..it was her mom kalindi. She blankly looked back at kalindi and feihgned sleepiness. Kalindi stopped her going to her bed. She gave her a coffee mug in her hand and with one in her own pulled her towards out in the balcony.
" Astha! Beta look at the moon out there... Can u see it? Astha was surprised at the question? Ayi its thundering and black out there..how can anyone see the moon? Its covered with clouds".
K-" beta, so if the weather is such how can anyone say that the moon is there at all..may be the darkness and clouds have eaten away the moon"
A-" Ayi, of course no one can eat away the moon. No one has that power. Once the cloud breaks the sky will be clear. And the moon will shine brightly. As for the place well obviously even though its dark and gloomy still the moonlight is filtering through the darkness.. Nobody can control it. Neither the clouds can stop it nor the winds can move it and that's the real strength and beauty of it".
Kalindi was silent for few moments. She took a sip from her mug and turned to stare towards her daughter.
Astha was still puzzled at her ayi..still wondering y her ayi was asking silly questions and y was she silently watching her. She looked questioningly towards her looking for clarification. As it is she was feeling rotten, angry weak all at same time and uncomfortable with probing eyes of her ayi. How could she tell her that not heeding to her ayi had brought her where..she was stuck in a pit with no way out. Fearing her mom she waited for what was next to come.
K- beta, exactly. This is what love is all about. U just have to have faith in urself. Its very easy to differentiate between fakeness and trueness. Just as the shine and light of moon can't be stopped from spreading so is the fragrance and feeling of love. Hate and love both r a feeling quite passionate. When they mix up its very difficult to tell. Love can't be caged . How much ever one may hide it does find a way to come out in any for. Its just that we have to wait for right time for the clouds to move away and show the clear moon and that happens only when all clouds full of water is unleashed in the form of rain. Sometimes..we need to feel our loss to become victorious. Love is one such thing which is built on patience and trust. It can never be weakness. Rather we should make it our strength. Astha believe in itself. Ask ur self ..if its truly love..make it ur pride and strength not ur weakness. If u truly believe that there is even a hint of love from shook side..which u surely must have felt at any one moment even..then fight back. Break these clouds of ego bring out his clean hidden heart which if even for a moment made u feel that it was really beating for u go for it Darling. Get back ur love..stop being gloomy..if its urs no one can stop it from running to you...
By hook or by crook" u r my daughter..I know u don't just fancy him..u love him..ur eyes ur face says it all..and I know u r hurt coz something has happened when we were out but I will ask u nothing accept just one thing either move on..or move on to fight for ur love..I am with u always"
A was stumped hearing all this..her mind cleared of all confusions..she hugged her mom and said yes momby hook or crook I will get my love back...and suddenly the clouds opened up and unleashed all the rain making the moon shine clearly soon ..

To be continued

Edited by dreamyjennice - 11 years ago
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NYC update..luvd astha's thoughts abt shlok's feeling twrds her..😊
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R...

Yr Back🤗 missd u😭 😳
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plzzz pm me the nxt part... :)
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Originally posted by: Sofna

R...

Yr Back🤗 missd u😭 😳

I am still missing u sof...we couldnt even chat...I have bonded with u ...really missing u..I hope u like this os..

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