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First of all...CONGRATULATIONS ON THE NEW THREAD!!!!🥳
It's been an amazing ride thus far and I am betting the new Thread will only take this journey to greater heights!
Secondly, WOW!
You weren't kidding when you said that a lot is going on this chapter! But you don't have to worry, it all was written flawlessly.
BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY...MURSHI!!! IT IS OFFICIAL! THE SHIP IS SAILING!!!
God! I couldn't be any happier for them!
I am so glad Advay finally knocked some sense into Murli! That conversation was hand down my favorite part of the update. Murki is a SINGH RAIZADA! Wow!
To have Advay take Murli's last name and not the other way around was B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L!! It held so much meaning. That the foundation of the their brotherhood!
MURLI AND ADVAY ARE BROTHERS! There is no way any one can convince me otherwise!!
The way you portrayed Murli's insecurities was wonderful. Because when it comes to love, we all feel a little lost, a little unsure of ourselves. That doubt of 'not being enough' echoes once we fall in the pits of love. So that was a neat touch!
Also, Advay slapping Murli because of his maths! ROFL! 😆 That was hilarious! I LOVED THAT PART! (I wouldn't mind seeing a flashback of that...Imagine Advay pulling his hair, trying to teach Murli Integration of Trignometric functions!😆)
'Buy her flowers, surprise her, it will make her day. Trust me I am speaking from experience'
Apart from this, my heart fluttered with little pesky butterflies at the way you showed how Advay and Chandini have really come a full circle. He dropped her to her first class then, and he dropped her to her first class now.
Wallah, I am not kidding, the part where he gives her a bar of chocolate and kisses her forehead, it did it for me!! BAS! THAT WAS THE END OF ME! It was so...i can't find the right word...beautiful isn't enough to describe it.
It was such a simple scene and yet it evoked such feelings of purity and warmth! It was such a pure husband-wife thing to do! So natural! I can't stop gushing over it, even after reading the whole thing twice!
Are you sure Advay is a mathematician? 11 kids in 15 years times!😆 Maybe he ignored the Biological factor of such things! Even with twins and triplets he is really pushing it😆
I liked how you hinted to Advay's darker sexual side... Chandini really has no idea what she is dealing with! That innocent soul! It will be fun to see where it all leads and whether 'intense' Advay is her cup of tea or not!
'But if you say you are ready then we can prepare you for what's to come.' Uff! BDSM coming right up!
I am not a great fan of BDSM but man, the way you write it with Advay, I am down to read the hell out of it!
All this sweetness and then BAM! 'How does it feel to have a mother?' 💔 That was sad! That was very sad...having a mother figure and yet not having a mother. 😭
Okay, I think you should sit down because I am going to blabber a lot! (I think. Sorry)
Advay wonders how she would react when Chandini finds out what she has done... well I think it's not what Chandini had done but more of what she was manipulated/cheated to do.
That being said, Chandini will most probably take the whole blame on herself. Because when your love ones are hurt, you immediately think that you are the 'Papillon' that flapped its wings and started a tornado. She will solely blame herself for their demise...for their murder!
And that's when she will wholly breakdown. Because 1) She will feel cheated that Dev hid his identity from her for so long. 2)He mistrusted her and initially plotted revenge. 3)She will think that her words caused the death of his family and 4)Her mother is a LIAR! and 5) She has blood on her hands... (points stated in no particular order)
She'll feel lost and disconnected and cheated and betrayed and guilty! 💔 And overall is not a good combination of emotions!😭
I am scared for her, sorry and sad for her!
I fear that after this revelations she will be lost for a long time before she will have to piece herself to rise and phase Indrani!
I hope she doesn't push Advay away! They will need each other...
But however the plot plays out I am sure you will do 200% justice to it!
Love,
Mehvish
❤️
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