Jagraata 4 - a place to capture the memories of ipk3 - Page 95

SP is also to be majorly blamed
they gave the same title and same name to the lead guy
they gave the show at prime time
they were greed for trp from the start
they meddled in the plot
they brought in neeta lulla and mika Singh uselessly

right from the point they brought PP the show went downhill
we didn't get AdNi love story at all
PP Sasha and her dad so many useless characters were there

shifting the story from Allahabad to Mumbai was also a wrong decision
poor Miku track was totally scrapped
we lost out on AdVeer scenes

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Saito, here's a pic from the scene... not best edit but at least the same pic. You can ask neelum, she's damn good with edits or sarah@Zajendo for a pic... both are masters at the game.

In regards with the idea for your FF... just sharing a thought that came to my mind... could not be a best seller theme... yet wanna share whatever I can.

Indrani Conspires against Advay's father... sends Shakun to Advay's father to seduce him... he refuses... she starts undressing herself and he feels too ashamed to look at her and runs away from there hiding his face... Chandni sees him running.

Indrani brings a crying half undressed Shakun to the villagers and claims that Mahant tried to molest her sister...she plays on "ek aurat ko nyaay dilaao".( bring justice to a woman)...They ask how can you claim that it was him... Shakun says, Chandni has seen it... Villagers ask Chandni and she says she saw Mahantji running from the room hiding his face.

Advay's mother is shocked to hear the villagers... Mahant is unable to prove his innocence...she for a moment disbelieves her husband and prepares a pyre and jumps in... Mahant is beaten up to death by the villagers.

Paap ka ansh bhi mar jaana chaahiye.(the sinner's son is also evil... he should also die).. claims Ranjit (Kajal's husband)... that moment, Chiku is forced to run away with Miku.

Indrani tricks Chandni saying" Dev bhookha hoga, use khaane ke liye bula lo" ( Dev must be hungry, let's invite him for food"... Chandni thinks she is being kind and takes her to dev's hiding place.

Dev knows that his father would never ever do such a thing. His father has been teaching him good morals day in and day out. He hates Chandni for maligning his father's name.

Check out if you could mold this theme in your FF. No pressure from my end... Ignore it completely, if the theme is not good.

Love

Neha

Thnx Neha for the pic. Actually this one is in my list but i wanted something like the one in this link but i cant merge them

http://detectiveconan96.wikia.com/wiki/File:151198902943169.gif

This pic is not the way i wished for

Regarding ur idea for the ff. I really like it but I wont go the Mahant way again as Im already facing problems in my ff. I'm thinking a bit more on the lines of business betrayal or crime thriller.

will this line work?

I agree with all ur points Priya

I thought of an idea for an FF and its actually an inspiration from a japanese story.
The story is similar to beauty and the beast way
but in this story the Beast was actually a beast and both the boy and the girl lived in different era similar to the modern era and the old era. The girl used to time travel to the boys era to help him in his mission.
In a way this story is similar to Harry Potter's world but without magic of course but there are creatures in it.

I just need ur opinion
Do you want me to write the way i kind of explained (Completely fairy tale/ fantasy story)
or i can write it in a crime thriller way too but it will be complicated

Originally posted by: saito

I agree with all ur points Priya

thanks dear
we lost out on a lot

business betrayal or crime thriller will be a great idea

I like the fantasy option more but you can write what you are more comfortable with. it's totally your choice

Priyu, this is in reply to your comment on Barun''s decision thread.