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Sana2020

@Sana2020

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Hi Mayu,

Beautiful scene! Thank you!

I honestly can't wait for this kind of scene, seeing Dev-Advay breakdown is much needed for Chandni and the audience.

I am sure it is coming, I just hope its sooner rather than later.

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Finally here she understands Dev is lost for now
And will take a lot effort to bring back
Finally she knows this is not a dilly game
That she can win by reminding him of their childhood
Finally she has an idea of the gravity of the situation

That's exactly I want chandini to realise and do dear..

But when is the question. . 😕

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing os, loved it.

Hello haily...

Thank you dear😊

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ROYALRED
Wow that superb post love it thanks for writing down

Hello dear..

I like sharing my imaginations dear.. I should thank you for taking time and reading it and also letting me you know you like it.

So thank you😊

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: srdb5
Brilliant mayu.. 👏
I loved the way you portrayed Advay's emotions so beautifully here.. I really hope tomorrow the scene turns out to be just like your os. I could actually imagine Advay's facial expressions while reading your post.. superb dear.. awesome 👍🏼

Sharda...🤗

Thanks a lot dear. Advay is really struggling with his emotions right now. Atleast he thought he had his revenge but again he had these new feelings now.

We will have a break down and when that happens we will awestruck... The scene will rock.

Imagine Advay's expressions... Thank God. Seriously bcoz when I see this in my head. I see this face.. his eyes.. I know if this happens on screen we will cry with him.but I just can't describe that in words. But may be there is no need to we all know Advay's pain and barun's emoting eyes so well that.. when I write he looks broken we can actually see him broken.😳

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: orion23
Mayu!
You slayed this!
The intensity is oozing right out!
I love how you described Dev and Advay's outburst was perfect!
👏
Speechless!

Zoya !!

Really😳

Thank you for your appreciation dear.

You comment made me so happy😃

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: deeps_92
I loved it mayu! lovely writing

Hello deeps...

Thanks a lot dear.

Glad to know you like it😊

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Fa13
Oh my...so amazingly intense imagine...Mayu 🤗
So loved it!
His emotions damn!
Beautifully u've penned there emotions...👏👏
There conversation...
Really I'm speechless.. Had read 3 times!

Hello fa..

Oh my... Iam completely flattered by your comment.

Thanks a lot dear.. encouraging words such as these are the reason I like to write here.

Really to means to lot you see my writing appreciated.thank you...

His emotions .. damn !! And barun emoting them.. damn damn!!😉

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere
Beautiful one Mayu..❤️

Thank you Antara...😛

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Sana2017
Hi Mayu,

Beautiful scene! Thank you!

I honestly can't wait for this kind of scene, seeing Dev-Advay breakdown is much needed for Chandni and the audience.
I am sure it is coming, I just hope its sooner rather than later.

Hello Sana...

Thank you..

Ofcourse the scene will happen... And every one is waiting for it. It will be great when we actually get to see this on screen. Barun and Shivani slaying it..

I hope the same dear.. just bring this soon.😳

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