Imagine this... #destiny ( following adni confrontation)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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He stood there listening to her words .

'You won , but it better to loose rather than breaking hearts and relations.'

That's right chandini ! That's what iam doing breaking hearts and relations. That's why I wanted to win. I want you to know how to feels when someone breaks your heart and takes away your relations.

'By seeing you I can say that u r alone.'

He remembers the days he spent being alone. Lonely. Crying . Remembering his parents and brother.

'You know why there is no one in your destiny, bcoz God knows you dont deserve any'

How many times he blames himself for what happened with his parents. He didn't save them. He couldn't help them. If he gave more thought back then he could have stopped it. It is his fault that they are not alive. No! His mind cried. It's her fault. She is responsible for it.

' baatha Nahi tumhe illzam de Kar kya povunga,
Nahi Diya tho khud ki nazzaramo mein gunegar ban javunga'

He closed his eyes.she continued..

'even of God showed mercy and gave you someone , you would throw them right out of your life!'

He remembers throwing miku from the train.

'Enough!!' he shouted. He couldn't take it any more. He couldn't hold his emotions any more.He opened his eyes. They are full of anger. No not anger it's more than that. It's like a volcano just erupted inside him.

He moves suddenly , grabbing chandini by herb shoulders and pinning her to the pillar. Her tear stricken face showed no remorse. It's determined. ' he deserves this ! ' she thought.

She looked him in the eye. Agony . Pain. Anger. All masked by warning. He titled his head slightly. ' don't you dare' he didn't say the words out loud. There is no need to. His eyes said it all.

She opened her mouth. He tightened his grip before she can utter anything. Closed his eyes.

' get a grip on yourself, this isn't the time. ' he told himself.

She knows she crossed the line but she is not backing . ' say it advay! Say what ever you want to say . Say why you hate me . Say what I did to you. Say everything and let's end this. Why do u give so much pain to me and to your self.' she thought.

He took a deep breath. His thoughts running wild. It's like living all that again. All the pain , fresh , as everything happened just now. He curled his hand into a fist and hit the pillar just above her shoulder. Hard. The fairy lights broke, cutting his skin. He didn't mind.
' this feels better' he thought. Chandini saw the blood and looked at his face. Concern in her eyes.

He opened his eyes slowly. ' Don't worry about me , Chandini.' he said mocking sweetness. His words dipped in hate .

' I won't be alone for much longer. We are getting married right. You know why there is no one else in my destiny ? Bcoz you are my destiny!' he steps back .

She is stunned. Her head falls in despair. She is exhausted by all these emotions. She closes her eyes. And a silent tear falls.

He catches the tear on his palm.she raises her head confused.

' Don't waste these now ,chandini. Save them for after marriage' he says looking at her. Folding his fingers. He nods his head as good bye and walks away from her.

She stands there by the pillar, looking at him going away and wonders what made him like this. His eyes filled with pain. She can never forget them.

' you are my destiny ' his words echoed.

So people what do u think. Iam so eager to know what happens next. I mean advay can't just leave her when she saying all that. He have to react right.

In the above scenario I want advay to be so dangerous that.

He is not someone who gave you sweet sleepless nights rather he is your wide awakening nightmare.

Bus dhak dhak hona Chahiye.

Hope u like it. Always a pleasure to known what u actually felt. So drop your comments.thankyou😊



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ChitraGS thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh Wow, this is too good yaar ,
I hope something similar to this happens tomorrow. Tho i don't think he is going to grab her and pin her to the wall , as that is not how Advay reacts I think. but lets see you never know.
I really loved the bit where he says "I am alone cause you are my destiny", That was simply too good,
I hope he says those lines to her tomorrow,
Lets see , can't wait for tomorrow even more now

thanks for the OS tho , loved it !! ❤️

Cheers
Chitra
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Oh Wow, this is too good yaar ,

I hope something similar to this happens tomorrow. Tho i don't think he is going to grab her and pin her to the wall , as that is not how Advay reacts I think. but lets see you never know.
I really loved the bit where he says "I am alone cause you are my destiny", That was simply too good,
I hope he says those lines to her tomorrow,
Lets see , can't wait for tomorrow even more now

thanks for the OS tho , loved it !! ❤️

Cheers
Chitra


Thank you Chitra.
I know advay won't easily loose his cool. Calculative super hero we have.

But chandu are really painful this time. I want him to be vunerable.lets see what we get. What may it be it's going to be barun scene for sure.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh!! That's super good, would love to watch something similar like this... But what we expect that thing don't happen at all...
But going by the promo I can expect a vulnerable Advay...I badly want to see it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful i hope smething happens like that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. I loved this imagine. This is what Advay and Chandni's relationship is.
They are bonded by their love, but there is so much heartache and pain. This showed in Advay's reaction. Makes me want to read more.
Loved this mayu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes he will again mention that she is his destiny
He will give her some scathing reply
He will have a fire in his eyes and words now
Dev in him will again be buried for a long time
She does not know what she did with her words
The caring side will disappear for a long time now
She has brought upon her own destruction
Apna pair kulhadi pe rakh diya usne
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That, indeed is a really very good take, Mayu!

The inner conflict and the ruffling of his ever open wounds...that's bang on.

Now, will Advay react so? May be, may be not. That man is always on super controlled grip.

But again, when it hits the bull's eyes, specially when one was' expecting it to, there are chances one might lose the grip over themselves. Specially when the blow come from the ones you may claim to hate, but know that you've once loved dearly.

What I loved is the way Advay reacted at the end. HE promises of hate, pain, torment and agony. And he..is gonna drag her to the very core of his hell - his home ground since the past 16 years.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

Oh!! That's super good, would love to watch something similar like this... But what we expect that thing don't happen at all...
But going by the promo I can expect a vulnerable Advay...I badly want to see it...


Thank you 😊
Iam glad u liked it.
Just once it's ok for him to be vunerable.
Let's see what we get.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Channa_mereyaa

Beautiful i hope smething happens like that


Thank you😊

I hope the same dear.

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