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Posted: 8 years ago
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now we know they are taking our feedback seriously lets suggest some changes that we want.

My first would be a new scriptwriter.
They can retain Harneet but a new writer is needed.

P.S. I know it's their show and they know best but still we can suggest coz I want the best for Barun.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yep please do suggest a new Screenplay writer like Gautam or ved raj who can handle our Advni more seriously and can focus on individual progress of the characters as well.
Now they are listening so we can give our suggestions as well.
Please do tweet this to Gul Khan.
They are changing the look so that means they are listening so can we have dealt with this aspect as well.
It would be awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think they made so many changes already..
It's a very big thing that they edited the jump I mean after showng in precap.

They changed costumes
They cutdown on rabba ve
They groomed Batu.. we liked him, but few people had problems with his previous look
Editing improved
Background score in past episodes raised no eyebrows
Everyone getting good screen space

I think they are really working hard to impress Every one.


So I think we should appalude them for effort. That being said I would suggest the following..

I will really like to see Gautam hedge writing

Focus on advay pain .. not just flash back.. barun is great actor..blet him emote the feelings.

Focus on chandini fears.. it works for trp point too.. they need to emphasize FL

keep the episodes linked.. just don't throw random scenes..

Utilise veer , Shikha..Meghna .. Murali.. Shilpa I think there is real scope for some light hearted tracks here.. which again imp for trps
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First and foremost more and more of AdVeer
I would love it if makers show us more AdVeer and explore the brothers' track

More of revenge track needs to be shown.

Also Advay should make an attempt to search for Miku which he hasn't done so far

I am more or less happy with AdVni

I am also looking forward to Shikha and Veer love story

And makers need to give us some lighter scenes like a scene where Murli and Veer both are irritating Advay...Murli and Veer need to interact 😆

Characters should be utilized so that we get a well balanced show

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thy already tone dwn advay's dark ckt i thnk.Barun said its totaly out n out dark ckt.bt after tht 'bina dupatte k tum aur v achi lagti ho' scn thy tone dwn a bit.
Proper revenge trk ll strt after mrg thts 4 sure.so i wnt b4 thy strt it thy shd focus on AdVeer trk.bros trk hs a v gd potential.thy shd explore it.i wnt adveer work on ths revenge 2gethr.
Aftr tht advni,shiveer,chandu's past,advni's mu clear,advay's turmoil-guilt,the actual truth(lk ths sequal) many thngs r left 2explore.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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We need a new script writer/(s) apart from Harneer
We need some more AdVeer scenes
We need more Advay Indrani scenes
We need Adni conversations and interactions
Some Murshi scenes will also be good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayukatta

I think they made so many changes already..

It's a very big thing that they edited the jump I mean after showng in precap.

They changed costumes
They cutdown on rabba ve
They groomed Batu.. we liked him, but few people had problems with his previous look
Editing improved
Background score in past episodes raised no eyebrows
Everyone getting good screen space

I think they are really working hard to impress Every one.


So I think we should appalude them for effort. That being said I would suggest the following..

I will really like to see Gautam hedge writing

Focus on advay pain .. not just flash back.. barun is great actor..blet him emote the feelings.

Focus on chandini fears.. it works for trp point too.. they need to emphasize FL

keep the episodes linked.. just don't throw random scenes..

Utilise veer , Shikha..Meghna .. Murali.. Shilpa I think there is real scope for some light hearted tracks here.. which again imp for trps


Excellent suggestions
Some MurShi scenes will be good too
Also Advay more of past can be shown
And something about Chandni kidnapper
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Thy already tone dwn advay's dark ckt i thnk.Barun said its totaly out n out dark ckt.bt after tht 'bina dupatte k tum aur v achi lagti ho' scn thy tone dwn a bit.
Proper revenge trk ll strt after mrg thts 4 sure.so i wnt b4 thy strt it thy shd focus on AdVeer trk.bros trk hs a v gd potential.thy shd explore it.i wnt adveer work on ths revenge 2gethr.
Aftr tht advni,shiveer,chandu's past,advni's mu clear,advay's turmoil-guilt,the actual truth(lk ths sequal) many thngs r left 2explore.


They should reunite AdVeer before Adni revenge track
They also need to expose Indrani face before all
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
1) New screenplay writer.
It looks like they have hired someone from cartoon network who while writing for a revenge show cant help himself. Alas making the show kiddish.
2) New stylist.
This is very urgent. The clothes and makeup just kills the mood.
3) Editor.
The show is already too dramtic and this fellow makes it worse.
4) Director
No need to change but he needs to work more, some scenes are very poorly directed.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Agree with everything you said they just need someone else for screenplay and writer

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