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Posted: 8 years ago
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SEAMLESS SANCTUARY - A POEM

Fear me not

For I have lived in hell

Fear me not

For I don't kiss and tell

Hear me not

For I don't yell out loud

Hear me not

For I don't make a sound

See me not

For I'm not there at all

See me not

For I am clear for all

Know no bounds

Know no sight

Know no sounds

Know no plight

For I am that I am

You always knew

For I'll be what I'll be

It's nothing new


P.S. Which chararacter/relationship do you think this poem suits the best?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful poem
IS this on Advay / Dev ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I can only think of Advay.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Do not ask me to remember,
or try to make me understand,
Let me rest and know you're with me,
Kiss my cheek and hold my hand.

I'm confused beyond your concept,
I am sad and sick and lost,
All I know is that I need you
to be with me at all cost,

Do not lose your patience with me.
Do not scold, or curse, or cry,
I can't help the way I'm living,
Can't be different though I try.

Just remember that I need you,
That the best of me is gone,
Please don't fail to stand beside me,
Love me till my life is done."


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P.S. Poem by Owen Darnell
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: albmum14

"Do not ask me to remember,
or try to make me understand,
Let me rest and know you're with me,
Kiss my cheek and hold my hand.


I'm confused beyond your concept,
I am sad and sick and lost,
All I know is that I need you
to be with me at all cost,

Do not lose your patience with me.
Do not scold, or curse, or cry,
I can't help the way I'm living,
Can't be different though I try.

Just remember that I need you,
That the best of me is gone,
Please don't fail to stand beside me,
Love me till my life is done."


Is this how the other person replies?


P.S. Poem by Owen Darnell


This is a lovely poem

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