advni ff hurt. chapter 1 updated

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" chandini will you marry me " advay said kneeling down waiting for her to tell a yes. A yes from her , he would make her life a living hell and take revenge for everything that she did in childhood.
Chandini was confused seeing advay proposing her what could she say now? He was same man who manhandled her many times and whenever he came near her he would tell something negative and his eyes would show such intensity like she had done something wrong to him though nowadays he started to behave normally and helped her family but love and marriage how can she marry him when she loved dev, her childhood best friend for whom she waiting from years marriage is based on love and she can't make fun of it for anyone.
Advay got impatient as chandini was not replying anything she was standing like a statue what was wrong by telling a yes ? He had manhandled her first but he had said sorry and acted so good in front of her and family for this moment so that he can marry her and destroy her. Advay controlled his rage and looked at chandini and said " it's OK chandini I will wait for your answer "advay was leaving when chandini's voice stopped him .
Chandini : I can't marry you I'm sorry.
Advay was shocked and it resulted to Anger. How can someone reject him? Girls die upon his look and chandini rejected him. Not done. Advay pinned chandini to the nearest wall.
Advay : why can't you marry me chandini?
Chandini was shocked by the move of advay.
Chandini : because marriage is based on love. I don't love you.
Advay : then you can love me now. Love will eventually happen.
Chandini : I can't love you because I love some one else.
Chandini said this and pushed advay and went away.
Advay was standing like a statue hearing it. His chandini loves someone else? How come? She did not love him in childhood but he had loved her in a age when he did not understand what love was only to be hurt but now he was more hurt. She loves Someone else not done this thing hurt without any reason and another question arises in his heart does chandini remember dev as he remembers her or she has forgotten him. Love or hatred he had remembered her every time but did she?
His mind or heart everything had only thing in running betrayal of chandini again but this time it will hurt her also.
Advay had decided what he had to do He will snatch away her love who ever he is from her. chandini will become only his by hook or crook.
It's my second ff in Indian forum but first one on advni. Hope you like it.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the start
I am sure this will happen in the show too
Please carry on
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Very good start.. please continue..👏
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That was really nice
Continue please
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Interesting.. Start 👏👍🏼
Loved it!
Do continue soon dear 😳
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Chapter 1
Chandini stood crying. Life have never given happiness. Today was her marriage and her groom did not arrive and send the message that the marriage will not take place. Pratham the person whom she was going to marry declined to marry her. It was not like that she loved him but she was happy to find a person who did not care about her past and wanted to live in her present but everything ended how could she believe happiness will enter her live ever? Happiness vanished the day when her dev left her from her life. But why did it ever enter her life or gave a glance of it to her.why did Pratham declined to marry her suddenly and left her family in humiliation?. She ran up as soon as she heard about the groom thing not able to face the humiliation but her family was facing it. Why ? Was she cursed as everyone tell her? . Chandini sobbed till tears stopped to flow from her eyes.
Advay watched chandini crying he felt happy or at least tried to be but after sometime he realized chandini was shedding her tears for someone else the tears which was only his or everything was his. How dare she shed it for some one else? . Off course why not she loved that Pratham fellow isn't it? That Pratham called his chandini moonlight how dare that fellow give her names and chandini accepted his proposal that's it advay understood chandini was love with that fellow that's why she declined his proposal and accepted this one . After whatever happened was a torture for him. Pratham trying to be near chandini and her sweet smile which was meant for only him was passed to that fellow, advay acted as him it did not affect him but truly affected him to see her with some one else than him. He had tried to break the wedding but nothing was working. At last he understood that he had to take a big step other wise he would loose chandini forever. He had kidnapped Pratham and did everything. Pratham's mom was happy as she never wanted the wedding and went away and chandini went away crying leaving everyone down. All her family was facing
All the humiliation and he went up to see chandini and her condition.
Chandini was controlling the tears when advay came near her. He wiped her tears with his hands.
Advay : see you could have accepted my proposal instead of you crying here. We could have got married nor ur family could face this.
Chandini looked to advay who was mocking her for declining his proposal.
Chandini : I can't love you advay. I'm not regretting telling no to ur proposal.
That's it chandini had called her death. Advay holds her and pins her to the wall and comes close to her which sends a shiver in her spine.
Advay : I have heard enough chandini of ur love thing. Now listen I will go down and tell your mom that I am willing to marry you and then when she will ask you about ur opinion u will tell a yes. I think you understood.
Chandini : I will not do that.
Advay : so OK. I hope your family will arrange a new house for themselves as ur no will cost them thrown out of this house.
Chandini : u will not do that.
Advay : I will chandini you know that very well. So I expect a yes from you.
Chandini was verge of crying but she controlled. If marrying advay will save her family from humiliation she will do that after all she did not have a opinion.
Chandini : yes I will marry you.
Advay left her after hearing it. The yes from her brought a peace in his heart. He was leaving Down to announce the marriage decision to her mom when her voice stopped him.
Chandini : you win Mr advay singh raizada. U wanted me you have me.
Advay smirked hearing it but the smirk also disappeared Hearing the next words.
Chandini : but you will have only body not my soul. I will never love you. My body may belong you not my soul. I will never be urs completely hear it. I will go down talk to my mom about marriage. Don't need to worry.
Chandini went down leaving advay alone angrily.
Advay could not come away with her thoughts. Her words surrounded him.
Advay : chandini u will belong to me only no one else that to completely I will make sure you know that. Let our marriage get over.
Precap : marriage completed. Advay possessiveness to grow more. Pratham returns.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful start
Love his possessiveness
I am sure he will make her change her mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start. Loved it.
Continue soon please.
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Loved reading your story. Interesting start. Please continue soon.
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Interesting update loved it so much.

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