Colors of the Tempest - Advay (Updated Pg, 5)

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: archana.mh17
Res @ 3am. See how much I lau you AC. :'D

That was unreal. Sheesh. It's like a 1080p HD quality peek into Advay's brain & I'm shook. (I'm also sleepy, so I'll come back tomorrow to elaborate because geez this needs elaboration or what). That's one hell of a write up, R. A little crazy, a lot edgy, very messy, but burning with restlessness. Will unres in the day.

LOOOL, doc and I wake up at 7:30 from pagerduty and see you are already online. Jeez, don't we ever sleep? At this rate we'd all be gemBs. 😆 😆

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mayukatta
This adds souch depth to the character..
They show us the FB so many times...
But I think the days he spent planning this... Just a glimpse of them would have added so much depth to the character...
It's not just about what happened that day... But also how he felt after that day
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Thanks a lot, trouble is at the moment they are spending much time in showcasing events, it'd be great if they slower the pace and focus for a bit on the characters as you said. Hopefully, it gets better with time, it's been only two weeks.

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

This is breathtaking.. Hope you are gonna continue this

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Channa_mereyaa
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Ye lia behen 🤗

Oouiii, Sona mona pona. 🤗

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .MyriadOfHues.

Lia behen is baaack

This is fantastic behen! I so wish they had shown more about Advay's professional life which would be an occasion to see him interact with other people and know more about his own psychology.

Do write more behen 😳

Nimu 🤗

I had been wanting to post something since long, but kaam-kaaj, naukri shaukri and the daily grind 😭

Thanks a lot sis and true. Let Sobti portray the many facets of Advay, this character is so twisted, so intriguing. There's so much scope to carve a genius out of it for Sobti. Harneet behen, sun rahi ho?

Edited by cineraria - 8 years ago

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petrichor.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

This is amazing! You're amazing! ⭐️

Just what would be totally perfect to show in the show. Hopefully something on this lines is shown. If not, I'll keep your take in my mind and keep revisiting it for better clarity on Advay's character!

Beautiful! Love it!

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Anna92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

It is amazing, can we make a petition to Gul to include you too in her team😛

Edited by arshiforeveru - 8 years ago

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Priyanka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: cineraria

Oouiii, Sona mona pona. 🤗

u r always awesome ria.loved reading .pls write more here 🤗

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Christi109
Loved it !! Amazing start. Your narrative is mind blowing. I hope you continue it. Keen to know what happens next.bookmaking it !!!!!

Thank you so much. Although, I had thought of it more as a one shot but as long as Advay tends to be a gift that keeps on giving...

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cineraria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ms.carefree444
This! This is what is needed in the show. The depth to his charactert to understand him, empathise with him. And you have written so beautifully, drawn him out so perfectly! I got shivers just reading about his perspective-it's scary and I loved it.
There's heaven and there's hell. He's already in hell, he chooses to take them all along with him. And among them all, taking her to hell would be the most delicious. The rest of them were puppets of greed but she was his, precious, envious friend. And like hell he needed friends, in hell

Also his understanding about good and bad and total disregard for grey was awesome too. It shows he's driven to extremity in his pain so much so that he's ready to blame a 8 year old girl. His morals are all skewed.He really needs a shrink!
Looking forward to reading more from you.

Thank you, thank you so much. I really hope to write more and I really hope that once the temple and dwar is sorted out we get some character moments instead of monologues. This show has so much potential, it hurts to see that not being fully used.

PS: I see fellow Sherlock fan there. 😃

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