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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: petrichor.

This is beautiful! You've penned down the inner conflict Advay is facing well. Looking forward to more of your writing :)

Thank you so much. Means a lot. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: .Screwtape.

Making her a servant girl was a smart move.

Advay's struggle was depicted well.

Thank you! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Channa_mereyaa

Just got time to cmnt.really loved it 😃

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Really beautiful !! Keep going...would love to read more :)


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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
this is really good... keep writing more 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is just wonderful
You have portrayed his conflict so well
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
wow perfectly sketched work
loved the way Advay's inner conflict has been depicted gorgeous work by u

pls continue writing more

jen😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ultimatevikku7

Really beautiful !! Keep going...would love to read more :)



Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Harshada! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _TheJoker-

this is really good... keep writing more👍🏼

Thank you! :")

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