A Paean l Thank you, Pg3 l For Saba, Pg6 l For Sona, Pg7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aashiyaana hain Naya Yahan
Chaahatein hain Purani Hamari
Humsafar hai kuch Anjaane
Aur hai kayi Jaane Pehchaane

Saamne hai Raahein kuch Advay si
Bilkul Uss shaks ke Jaise
Jo hai Auron se Alag
Aur Jiska hai Besabri se Intezaar hum Sab Ko

Laayega saath vo Chandani se Ujwal ek Duniya
Lekin honge jisske Andhere Saayon mein Dard ke Dariye
Hain nahin vo Anagha
Na hai karta vo Ailaan hone ka

Isska Usse de Ilzaam
Ya karein Intezaar Samajhne ka Usse
Hai ye ghadi Hamare Vishwas ke Imtihaan ki
Kya hum itni asaani se Iss pyaar se Muh mod Lenge

A small token of love for our new forum and a big hello to all of the forumwasis here.

~ Ruchi



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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Wah wah kya baaat👏
Its beautifully written bravo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Hello ruchi glad you are here 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Very nice poem Ruchi . thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Laayega saath vo Chandani se Ujwal ek Duniya
Lekin honge jisske Andhere Saayon mein Dard ke Dariye


These lines stole my heart! ❤️
Beautifully written, Ruchi. The first literary creation on this new forum, I think, and an amazing one at that.
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whoa!!! What a writing!!! That depicts the whole scenario!! Well done!! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's beautiful!!
So apt and meaningful, loved it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so beautifully u have written👏

welcome to the forum 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. I mean, seriously..wow 👏

That's one brillliant welcome, Ruchi (I learnt that name from the comments ;) )

And yesh! 🤗

Congos and to the new journey!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Annddd Ruchi is here!

welcome 🤗

this is so beautiful Ruchi... ❤️

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