You Before Me ~ From Miss Fernandes to Mrs. Oberoi // Shivika FF

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00 | PROLOGUE


"One Espresso for me and for the lady..."


"One cold coffee and please make it extra sweet."


"Well, How can you prefer your drink so sweet? "


"Just like how you prefer your drink - bitter. "


" By the way, do you realize that we aren't like our drinks ? "


" What do you mean ? "


"I mean I prefer my drink bitter but personality wise I'm sweet while you like your drinks sweet but you are..."


" Bitter ! So, You mean our drinks don't reflect our personalities and are very contrast ? "


" Exactly, my point. Isn't that weird ?"


" I don't think so."


Two individuals who are like chalk and cheese embark on a journey of falling in love but will their journey ever reach it's destination when barriers like caste and class differences, society views pops up and the biggest hurdle he has to face is that the female protagonist does not buy the concept of love and marriage. Will love ever happen? And even if it does, will their wedding bells ever ring?


Read on to know more about this journey...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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01 | A NOT-SO GOOD MORNING


Disclaimer : This story will contain words of different languages especially the words of Konkani (An Indo-European language) though translations will be mentioned.


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" This girl will never let me live in peace. She had to reach school at 10 and it's already quarter to 9. Get out of your bed, Chedi."


Annika whined as her mother's yellings reached her ears which broke her peaceful slumber. " Subhah Subhah shuru hogayi Madonna." Murmuring she got out of her bed and walked into the washroom to freshen up and get ready.


Around 30 minutes later, She walked out of her room all ready for the day dressed in a yellow cotton tunic and green embroidered trousers with a brown tote bag in her hand. Green Meenakari earrings were adorning her ears while her mint kolhapuri chappals made her feet look a little more gorgeous.


She was on the last step of the staircase which led to the living room when she heard her mother yelling out some curses to her from the dining table.
" This girl will make my life an living hell, She is already 30 minutes late but madam is still sleeping chintos hi naah (she is not worried only). She's gonna loose her job if this continues to happen."


She walked towards the dining table to see her family gathered there for breakfast with her mother serving them breakfast but still continuing to curse her while her father and her sisters ignoring her mother's rants and continued to have their breakfast as this wasn't her a new thing, it was their everyday morning routine to hear her mother rant about her or anything else.


Shaking her head in disbelief, she silently walked towards her mother and back hugged her startling her in process. Before her mother could utter anything, Annika forcefully stuffed chappati in her mother's mouth,
" Not-so good morning dad, Ri and
Shaant Lady Mogambo, Shaant. Finally time for you to visit a neuropsychologist has arrived because I think you are suffering from amnesia or else so easily you wouldn't have forgotten that today is Saturday and I have an off today."


" Oh my god, So you mean to says that I have lost my minds ? Chedi, That's how you talk to your mother ? You shameless girls." As soon as she finished munching on the chappatti, Her mother got out of Annika's hold and started hitting her with spatula as well as started reprimanding Annika on her behaviour.


Annika looked towards her father and her sister for an escape but they put their hands up making Annika to huff in anger. " Ouch ! Mama, Stop it. You know what ? It's useless explaining anything to you. Subhah subhah mood kharab kar diya, I can't stand you now even for a minute, I am going out and I'll have my breakfast there only. Byeee Mogambo, Bye Dad, Bye Ri. " Annika quickly caught hold of the spatula and threw it away, she then walked towards Dad and sister, hugged them and rushed out of the house wavying a bye.


" Chedi so, Where are you goings ? And that too with whom ? " Screamed her mother running behind her while her dad and her sister followed both of them but all they heard Annika screaming from her car that she was going to meet their son-in-law.


" Son-in-law ? Has she really gones to meet hims? " Squealed Annika's mother happily as she started daydreaming about her daughter's wedding.


" Back to the Earth, Pinky. Do you really think she's gone to meet your so called son-in-law ? She was just fooling, I'm damn sure she's gone to a cafe with her tab to complete her pending orders as well as sip on some coffee. "
Annika's father chuckled and clarified Annika's words as well as informed her about their daughter's whereabouts as he knew his daughter very well.


" That Chedi so, how many times have I told her not to eat outside food ? But has she ever listened to mes ? No, all she does is waste moneys on cafes and other faltu things." Rambled Pinky as she stormed inside the house.


" Well, to be away from your non-stop bakwaas is the reason why she wastes her money on cafes." Annika's sister mumbled quietly and chuckled which was only audible to her father who chuckled along with her while Pinky angrily glared at the father-daughter duo as she knew her younger daughter must have said something against her only.


" Enough of your kee-kee you twos, Go and finish your breakfast nows." Pinky screamed angrily which made both the father-daughter to immediately run to the dining table.


While on the other hand, ' Baal-Baal bach gayi.' thought Annika and sighed in relief as she finally succeeded in escaping from the torturous lectures of her Lady Mogambo. She was driving to her friend's place when her stomach grumbled due to hunger, so she immediately drove to the nearest Starbucks.


Finding her isolated corner in Starbucks, she sat down with her tab to complete some pending assignments of hers not before ordering her favourite cold coffee and murgh katti roll.


She was busy completing her assignment whilst sipping on her coffee as well as munching on the roll when a loud bang on the table startled her, it made her lift up her head from the tab to see a young girl sitting in front of her with an enraged expression on her face.


" What the hell ! Pri, you scared me. Couldn't you just settle down like a normal homosapien and not like a crazy monkey and wait, what's with these murderous looks you are giving me as if I have made a mistake ? " Annika questioned the angry friend of hers who looked on towards Annika much more angrily with this question of hers.


" Mistake ? You have committed a crime, the crime of making me wait for you from morning at my place. I like an idiot was waiting for you to come over and share something important even after reminding you in the night to not to forget to come over but nahi madam as usual apni Mogambo se lad ke aagayi bina breakfast kiye and then the hunger alarm started ringing which made madam as usual drove to Starbucks, right ? " She questioned Annika angrily where as Annika quitely gulped her coffee in her fear seeing her Pri's anger. " Listen Pri, Your didi is very sorry. It actually slipped out of my mind that I had to come over to your place. I'm so sorry baba, I promise I won't make this mis- I mean commit this crime again." Holding both her hears Annika apologized with a puppy face which as always melted her younger sister's anger.


" Didi, Your cute antics and puppy face always melts my anger but next time this won't work if you do something like this again." She warned Annika who in return sheepishly smiled as she knew that next time also these antics itself will only pacify her anger.


" So Miss Priyanka Oberoi, What was the urgent work you had with me that made you call me at 2 in the night and inform me to come over in the morning ? " Questioned Annika with raised eyebrows. A nervous Priyanka fidgeted with her fingers not knowing on how to answer this question while Annika looked on waiting for Priyanka's reply.


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02 | Googly par Googly

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" WAIT ! WHATTT ? YOU ARE GETTING MARRIED ? "
Annika couldn't help but keep her mouth open and eyes widen in shock. She f**king just couldn't believe it that Priyanka Singh Oberoi aka her Pri was getting married. There were so many reasons which made this news shocking or you can say too surprising for Annika to digest,
Reason (1) - Priyanka was too young according to her to get married, She was just four years younger to her, She's just 24 man...
Reason (2) - This news gives her Mogambo chances of annoying her with the topic of her marriage.
Reason (3) - She had no clue that her Pri had an boyfriend.
Reason (4) - Wait ! Enough of reasons, It's time for Annika to know more about this sudden marriage.


" I hope you are not forced to get married, if you are then do tell me without any hesitation. Main uss aadmi ki duniya hila dungi aur waise kon hai woh kameena ? " Annika questioned angrily as she caught hold of Priyanka's hands in hers trying to reassure her.


" Relax Didi, Have you forgotten Priyanka Singh Oberoi ko koyi kabhi force nahi kar sakta ? This marriage is not forced on me, It's actually an love marriage! " Priyanka assured Annika with her words but instead of these words assuring her, it provided Annika another shock.


" Kyaaa ? Love Marriage ? How ? When ? What ? Where ? Tera toh koyi boyfriend bhi nahi tha phir love marriage? " a confused Annika questioned Priyanka in one breath. " Calm down di, I'll tell you everything, just relax. The guy who proposed me for marriage is another than RV and you toh very well know RV..." Said Priyanka to an bewildered Annika, she then continued to tell her about how RV proposed her, how their families came to know about it and got happier with the news then met to finalize the wedding. RV aka Ranveer Shergill was Priyanka's childhood friend and her first love, Annika and RV were good friends too because of Priyanka. Annika always admired RV for the person he is and also due to his career because he is an Assistant Commissioner of Police and always told Priyanka that he was the perfect guy for her.


" Oh bete ki ! Itna sabh kuch hua aur tu mujhe abh bol rahi ho woh bhi ek hafte baad ? Though I like your choice because RV was always your Mr. Perfect according to me and it turned to be true but still you hid this from me, Not fair !" Annika questioned angrily and turned her face away from Priyanka, Priyanka sighed as she knew Annika's anger was justified though they never met frequently but Annika was very close to her, she always guided her, her every secret from her first boyfriend to her first kiss was known to her. Annika always helped her in hiding about her school boyfriends from her overprotective family and always stopped her from committing anything wrong just like an elder sister that she never had.


Priyanka got out of her seat and walked towards the counter. She returned back with a red velvet cheesecake and placed it on the table forwarding it towards Annika. " Di, I'm sorry but woh actually tension mai aur phir aap bhi toh yaha nahi thi, so I wanted to inform you everything face to face not on the phone. I'm sorry dil se. Accept your favorite red velvet as a token of apology, please." Priyanka apologized making Annika grin widely as soon as the red velvet cheesecake came into her sight. Annika immediately took the cheesecake in her hand and like a cake monster, attacked the cheesecake. " It..It's oo..okay, Pri" Annika managed to say while devouring her favorite cheesecake like a kid, Priyanka chuckled on her antics. The scene looked too cute according to Priyanka, so she secretly captured it in her phone.


" Tujhe chahiye ? " Annika asked showing Priyanka the plate which wasn't even 50% empty. " Kya Di, Aap ek cheesecake bhi complete nahi kar sakti? I don't know when this habit of yours not completing your food will disappear." Priyanka said as she snatched the plate and started eating the remaining cheesecake. "Yaar Pri, I don't think this habit will ever disappear. You know right, how difficult it is for me to even finish an ice cream scoop ? " Said Annika as she started packing her tab in her bag, so that they could leave as by then even Priyanka finished eating the cheesecake.


They both walked out of Starbucks, Annika got into the driver seat of her car while Priyanka sat in the passenger seat. Even after having her own personalised car and chauffeur, Priyanka loved travelling with Annika, so Annika always dropped her home with Priyanka's chauffeur and bodyguard following them from behind.


" Oh Shoot ! Di, Aapko manane ke chakkar mai main baat toh bolna bhul gayi. You have to design my pre-wedding ceremonies and wedding cards as well as plan my wedding. "
Priyanka informed suddenly which shocked Annika that she stopped the car with a jerk and it resulted in both Priyanka and Annika banging their heads on the dashboard.
" Pri, Aaj toh tu googly par googly phek rahi hai. Are you crazyyy ? You want me to plan the wedding of THE OBEROI'S ONLY DAUGHTER. Screw dila hogaya hai tera kya ? " Annika screamed angrily rubbing her forehead which was paining due to the dash, she was exaggerating the matter just like always when ever Priyanka talks about Annika planning an Oberoi's function . " Oh come on di, Stop overreacting as usual, You promised me last time that you will plan my wedding and come on, stop underestimating yourself. The Fairy Godmother is actually a very famous event management company than you actually think. Come on 94.4k people follow your event management page. At least for your promise sake, say Yes." Priyanka pleaded making the famous ' Oberoi puppy face ' that Annika had to relent to her demand.


" Yipeee, Thank you so much. So see you tomorrow at Oberoi mansion for lunch, The family wants to meet you to discuss about the wedding. Now, I need to go, Ta-ta bye bye " Priyanka happily squealed and hugged Annika tightly, she then rushed out of the car as they were already outside the Oberoi mansion.


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03 | Sunday - The Funday

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It was Sunday Morning which meant it was Annika's day; her favorite day of week, well who doesn't love sundays ? Everyone loves Sundays (not counting the 'foolish' exceptionals though).


There was a time when Annika hated sundays to the core and the reason was that on sundays, she had to wake up early to go for sunday school classes which she was not fond of attending due to arrogant classmates she had but sunday school classes should never be skipped or bunked making Annika loathe sundays more. But now things were different as now there was no sunday school, no arrogant classmates, no waking up early.


It was 30 minutes past 8 and Annika stood in front of her vanity combing her tresses. She was getting ready to attend the Sunday Mass, she was dressed in a white cotton kurta which had sky blue prints on it, she paired a matching sky blue duppatta and palazzo with it. Leaving her wavy tresses open after removing all the knots, she put on a pair of silver floral jhumkas. Annika applied a bit of concealer under her eyes to hide her dark circles which were evident due to her insomnia, added a little kohl to her eyes and moisturized her lips with tinted lip balm. Annika was not an avid user of cosmetics though you would find different types of makeup stored in a vanity which are mostly gifts given to her( which are rarely touched). Adorning her feet with the comfy white slider flats that she got from H&M, she walked out all ready for Sunday not before carrying her brown tote bag.


The remaining members of her family had already attended the 8AM mass at their local church and were currently at her aunt's place. She sat inside her car and drove to the Basilica of our Lady of the Mount which was 45 minutes away from her place.


The Basilica of our Lady of the Mount more commonly known as Mount Mary Church was Annika's favourite place in the entire Mumbai. Whenever, she needed some answers or some peace, she visited this church as it never left her empty-handed. Today, Annika needed none neither an answer nor some peace but God knows why, she felt like coming here today as if Mumma Mary was calling her to visit the Basilica.


She luckily reached on time for mass as luckily there wasn't much traffic. After hearing the whole mass, she walked out of the church, crossed the road and climbed up the stairs to the oratory of our Lady of Fatima which is located opposite the Basilica.


She lighted up a candle and placed it infront of the statue. She joined her hands in prayer, ' Mamma, Thank you for all that you have given me. I have everything in my life, a family, friends, stable career and even her umm... You have provided me things which I never expected I would hold possession of and I'm thankful for them though but still, I don't know why I feel that something is missing as if a piece of my life jigsaw puzzle cannot be found. Why do I think that today the reason you called me here is to indicate that soon I'm gonna find that missing jigsaw puzzle piece. I don't know what the missing piece is but whatever it is, I promise to accept it whole heartedly. I don't know if what I'm thinking is right or not but if I'm right then provide me with a sign.'


Annika was still praying when few marigolds fell upon her from above (from the statue) which suprised her as it made her realize that indeed what she was thinking was actually true. But then her mind chided her by making her conclude this couldn't be a sign but just a mere coincidence and these flowers must have flown down only due to the wind.


Concluding her prayers whilst doing the sign of the cross, Annika walked down the stairs to her car. Sitting in her car, she zoomed down the hill towards the Oberoi Mansion which was 10 minutes away from the Basilica.


She walked inside the mansion after smiling warmly at her favourite Khannaji who in return gave Annika a wider grin as his favorite person had come to the mansion. When she neared the living room, she heard someone singing.


Aaj Blue Hai Paani Paani
Paani Paani Paani Paani
Aur Din Bhi Sunny Sunny
Sunny Sunny Sunny Sunny
Aa Jao On The Beach,
Yaara Photo Meri Kheench
Phooti Kismat Hogi Teri
Gar Tune Yeh Baat Na Maani


Oho..Oho..Oho..Oho..
Oho..Oho..Oho..Oho..


She walked in to see Rudra: Priyanka's twin singing loudly while Priyanka, Saumya; Rudra's best friend and Omkara; Priyanka's elder brother cheering him.


" Aapka shabd hai O, Aap ko O se gaana ghanna hai." She heard Rudra saying this to his grandmother and parents who were sitting infront of him on the sofa. She checked her watch to realize that it was time for the Oberoi's bonding time, the time where every Sunday they have discussions or play games and today the bonding time is being spent by playing antakshari.


" Come on, Sing fast or you guys will loose. Tick - Tick 1..."
She walked further inside to see Priyanka saying this to the opposite team that is the elders. She seen that the elders needed some help as they looked helpless as they couldn't recall any songs that start with O.


Oye Oye Oye Oye,
Oye O O Va, Oye O O Va
Oye Oye Oye Oye,
Oye O O Va, Oye O O Va


Gajar Ne Kiya Hai Ishara, Ghadi Bhar Ka Hai Khel Sara
Gajar Ne Kiya Hai Ishara, Ghadi Bhar Ka Hai Khel Sara
Tamashaye Ban Jayenge Khud Tamasha
Badal Jayega Ye Nazara, Ha Badal Jayega Ye Nazara
Gajar Ne Kiya Hai Ishara


Oye Oye Oye Oye,
Oye O O Va, Oye O O Va
Oye Oye Oye Oye,
Oye O O Va, Oye O O Va


The Oberoi family turned towards the door to see Annika singing and walking towards them with a smile. " Rudra and team, your word is Va, come on now sing a song from va. " spoke Annika as she winked at him and sat near Dadi aka Kalyani Singh Oberoi, the matriarch of this house.


" Ayeee Di, This is cheating ! Aap aise Daadi aur team ki help nahi kar sakta hai. Aur waise bhi Va se koyi song bhi nahi hai." Cribbed Rudra like a kid whose chocolate was stolen making the Oberoi family and Annika to chuckle.
" Chup kar kotya, koyi cheating nahi hui. Dekh Tere team mai chaar members hai aur humare mai teen the, abh humare team ki chauti member yani meri Annika ne gaaya toh kaise huhi cheating ? Tum log haar gaye toh hum par cheating ka charge laga raha hai, kotya. "
Said Daadi hugging Annika making Rudra shut his mouth as she was right as Annika was always in the team of the elders than the youngsters.
She was everyone's favourite in the family but the elders adored her more.


" Waise Annika, How did you know about this song ? This song is an old song. " Questioned Jhanvi; Priyanka, Onkara and Rudra's mother while Annika smiled in return and was going to answer but Priyanka beat that to her and answered her mom's query.


" Arrey Mom, aapko pata nahi ? Annika di iss zaamne ki nahi par aapke zaamne se hai. She belongs to your generation, the retro Annika. "
Said Priyanka mischievously making Annika throw a cushion at her on her answer. " Aunty, It's just that I prefer old bollywood retro music more than the latest ones, hence I have knowledge about these songs." Said Annika making the elders to smile as Annika was nothing like her generation women are, she is so different from everyone, her likes and dislikes vary so much from their kids and is more like theirs is the main reason she is adored more by the elders.


" So, as decided you guys are the loosing team and are going to prepare the lunch as punishment. " said Tej with a smirk making the youngsters whine. " If you guys don't mind, Can I help you guys in cooking ? " questioned Annika feeling guilty as due to her, the youngsters lost. " Of course, you are most welcome Annika didi." Chirped Rudra thinking that the punishment will become more easier with Annika's help. " Chup kar koteya, Annika puttar teri help ki koyi zaroorat inhe. Tu yaha humare saath beth aur thode ghape mar." Said Daadi pulling Annika by her hand and making Annika next to her.
" Yes Annika, Daadi is right. You sit here while we OBros and OSiss prepare the Sunday special lunch." Said Omkara dragging a cribbing Rudra inside the kitchen with a chuckling Priyanka and Saumya following them.


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04 | A Fight between the best friends ?

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" So Annika, How was your trip to Jaipur ? " Jhanvi questioned her as she along with her husband, Tej and her mother-in-law settled down at the dinning table for lunch.


" Oh ! It was Khidkitod. The wedding happened peacefully and happily that too without any major mishaps." reminisced Annika as she remembered her a week long trip to Jaipur for a destination wedding that her event management company had planned.


" That's good to hear. Due to business issues, we weren't able to attend the wedding of Mehtas but I'm glad that we can attend the reception which is happening next week in Mumbai." Said Tej as he smiled warmly at Annika who was no less than a daughter to him.


" Oh ! I forgot to mention, I got gifts for all of you from Jaipur. Hope you like them," said Annika as she removed few boxes from her hand bag, " Uncle, for you I got customized made Mojris as I know your obsession for shoes while Aunty, for you I got an Lehariya saree as you love collecting different types of sarees and Daadi, for you I got you an pair of Meenakari jewellery set as I know how you love Meenakari jewellery just like me." Annika addressed them as she passed on the gifts to each of them. The elders couldn't help but just bless this daughter of theirs with a big smile, even after being strictly told not to buy any type of gifts for them, she does not fail in getting gifts for them from every trip of hers.


" Accha, I'll just go and give Pri and others their gifts." Said Annika as got up from her chair and walked towards the kitchen.


She walked in to see Omkara sauting something in the pan while Saumya and Priyanka were chopping vegetables and grinding the masala respectively while standing next to them was Rudra who was playing with the eggs as he tried to juggle them.


"Guys," Annika called out to them making each of them stop their respective task and look up at her,
" Here are some gifts for you that I got from Jaipur." Said Annika showing them the boxes, Rudra was the first one among the others to run and grab his gift excitedly from Annika.


" OH MY GOD !! A freaking Sapphire ring." Rudra squealed excitedly as he crushed Annika happily in a hug seeing his favourite gemstone ring that too an handcrafted one from Jaipur. Omkara opened his to find Jaipur specialties, a miniature painting made on paper and blue pottery storage jars while Priyanka and Saumya opened theirs to find two similar jaipuri handcrafted bags and traditional bandhani dupattas. Omkara smiled at Annika in gratitude while Priyanka and Saumya kissed Annika on her cheeks happily.


After keeping their gifts on one side, they got back to their previous tasks.
Annika was walking out of the kitchen when she suddenly heard,
" CRYBABY SINGH OBEROI. "


She turned to see Saumya drenched from head to toe with eggs and was glaring angrily at Rudra who was standing next to her with his head bowed down in guilt.


" How dare you Dumbell Singh Oberoi, to destroy my new dress ? I was gonna wear this dress for my date with Rizwan and you f**king spoiled it." Cried Saumya as she angrily glared at Rudra, she looked like that she was gonna strangle Rudra any moment.
Annika walked towards them to save Rudra from Saumya's wrath, she neared them to hear Rudra murmuring,
" That's the reason, I spoiled it. Now No dress, No date. Mission accomplished."


Unfortunately even Saumya heard him which made her anger reach to an another level. " YOU DID THIS PURPOSELY? HOW COULD YOU ? "
Screamed Saumya on top of her voice which made everyone present in the kitchen except Saumya to cover their ears. She took a ketchup bottle in her and squeezed it angrily which in-turn spoiled Rudra's designer white tshirt which then led to Rudra grabbing a chocolate syrup bottle and squeezed it on Saumya which further damaged her pink dress more. In a matter of few seconds, Rudra and Saumya were covered with different types of sauces, liquids and what not, currently they were pulling each other's hair like kids.


" Now, let's see how you go to meet your Rizwan looking like a pig."
Yelled Rudra as he pulled Saumya's hair. While Saumya pulled more his hair tightly and screamed, " And let's see how you meet your Tina, Mina, Pina looking like a ugly donkey."


" Stop it both of you. What's with this childishness ? Enough is Enough. Go to your room right now and get yourself cleaned. " Annika yelled on top of her voice making both of them stop in their tracks with their heads bowed down as Annika's anger was something which everyone was scared of as it was very I mean very terrifying. So without any delay, Both of them rushed to their rooms as making Annika more mad was definitely not a good idea. Annika turned to see Omkara and Priyanka cleaning the mess Rudra and Saumya had created, calming herself down she went and helped them. After cleaning the mess, she along with Priyanka and Omkara started to cook as it was already lunch time.


After 30 minutes, They were done with the dishes. After cleaning their hands, they walked towards the dinning table with the dishes and by that time even Ssumya and Rudra returned all clean, they did have a frown on their face and were scowling at each other.


" Rudra and Saumya, Stop scowling and Say sorry to each other," Annika said strictly but it made no effect on both of them as they were busy glaring at each other angrily, " I said RIGHT NOW," Annika raised her voice a bit making both of them to immediately apologize to Annika as well as to each other "Now like good children, Hug each other." To which they happily did and started chatting with each other ignoring others and forgetting about the fight.


" Annika puttar, Sirf tu in dono ko seedha kar sakti hai. Inhe jhelna toh humari bas ke baar hai." Said Daadi chuckling to Annika looking towards Rudra and Saumya who were busy gossiping. " Maa is right, only you can handle these two cartoons. Good job, Annika." Said Tej grinning, Annika chuckled and thanked both of them.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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great work... pls make shivaay's entry soon..eagerly waiting for that..
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Oh my god! Oh my god! 😃This was khidkitod.👏 I just loved this. From the title of the story to the concept to characterization to conversations to individual headings to all chapters , everything was perfect ⭐️. You are an adept writer I feel. This was fantastic. Update soon . Well written .👏
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