Shivika OS: Goodbye *ch1 updated*

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey hey hey... Peeps... Thinking of writing an OS based on today's story and my imagination. Bohut zor se balti bhar bhar ke concepts aarahe hai... If i see a good response,then i will write it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yes please. Would love to read something good related to the leap 😊
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ch1.

Breaking news flashing on the tv screens:

Famous businessman Shivaay Singh Oberoi suffers from a massive heart attack. He has been kept under life support in ICU. Doctors' are trying to keep his condition stable. Spokesperson of the family will keep us updated about his condition.

"Khush toh ho na tum sab log Shivaay ki halat dekhke?" Prithviraj entered speaking.

"Dadaji..aap kab aaye?" OmRu spoke and went towards and bent to take his blessings..

Prithviraj pushed OmRu really hard. Due to sudden force,they fell down on the floor. Gauri and Bhavya went to their respective husbands' and made them stand.

Omkara and Rudra were about to speak when Dadaji's voice roared in the whole mansion.

"Mat bulao mujhe Dadaji. Tumdono ke mooh se accha nahi lagta yeh shabd.. Lagta hai ki,mano,koi mera zor se gala daba raha hai..."

"Yeh kya bolrahe hai aap?? Aapko pata bhi hai ki yaha kya hua??? Humare Tej ko mar dala Shivaay ne... Humare bete ko mar dala usne.. Omkara aur Rudra ko anath kardiya... Jahnvi ke manng ka sindoor cheen liya usne... Nikaal diya usse iss ghar se aur dil se... Aisi baddua di hai ki woh humare saamne kabhi nahi ayega..." Dadi replied in tears and anger.

"Kalyaaani..." Dadaji shouted at Daadi...

Everyone gasped in fear,seeing Dadaji seething in anger.

"Tum logo ko toh aadhi adhuri sach sunne ki aur vishwas karne ki aadat hogayi hai!!! Tej ka khoon Shivaay ne nahi kiya thha... Kisine bhi nahi kiya thha... Tej zinda hai..." Dadaji replied loudly..

Everyone went shocked after this revelation.

"Yeh kya bakwas kar rahe hai aap,Dadaji?" Rudra asked,not believing his words.

Dadaji went and slapped Rudra really hard...

"Abhi bhi teri itni umar nahi huyi hai ke tu Prithviraj Singh Oberoi se saboot mange sach ko sabit karne keliye.. Tere baap ka bhi baap hu main.. Agar mujhse battameezi ki toh anjaam bohut bura hoga..."

"Khanna..." Dadaji called.

"Ji Dadaji.." Khanna replied.

Dadaji signed him to bring the proofs and Tej,as well.

Everyone looked towards the door in shock as Khanna entered with Tej,who looked hale and hearty but with a shame and guilt ridden expression on his face.

Dadaji asked Khanna to play the recordings of what actually transpired between Tej and Shivaay,that led to this entire fiasco.

In that video,it was revealed that how Tej planned everything,starting from framing Shivaay in a fake murder case with Mohit,till him staging his own murder.

As the truth unfolded infront of everyone,Dadi,OmRu,Jahnvi,Gauri,Bhavya and Priyanka went in shock.. They couldnt believe that Tej could devise such a heinous plan... They became blind for Tej to such a limit that they resorted to insult their eldest brother and father like figure,Shivaay..

OmRu and Daadi were feeling really guilty for their behaviour with Shivaay.. They were repenting for their words..

"Ab pachtane se kya fayda... Tum sab ne jo paap kiya hai na,woh maafi mangne ke bhi layak nahi... Shivu ne yeh sab apne parivaar,apne dono bhaiyo ko bachane keliye yeh sab kiya... 5 saalo tak jail mein raha.. Tum sab ki nafrat sehta raha,yeh jaante huye bhi ke woh dil ka mareez hai.. Koi bhi chot pohuchane wali baat bhi uske jaan keliye khatarnaak hosakti hai,par uski bhi tum sabne parwa nahi ki..."

"Aur mere baaki do potey... Shabbash!!! Kitni acchi acchi baatein boli hai tum dono ne.. Kitna dukh pohcha hoga usse.. kitna roya hoga woh... Tum dono jaise namakharam poto aur Tej jaisa beta hone ke bajaye agar Shivaay jaisa ek beta hota,toh tab bhi main seena taan ke bolta,ke,Shivaay mera beta hai... mera beta..." Dadaji replied in tears..

Suddenly,his phone rang.. It was from Khanna..

"Haan.. Thik hai.. andar aajao.."

Khanna comes in after a while with their family lawyer.

"Laiye.. Mujhe woh papers dijiye.."

The lawyer hands over the papers to Dadaji and leaves..

"Yeh kya hai,Dadaji?" Gauri asks slowly..

"Puttarji.. Yahaan pe teen kagaazat hai... Ek main hai mere share ke property papers jo main Shivaay aur Annika puttarji ke naam kar raha hu..

Dusre paper mein yeh hai ki,Shivu ne apne saari properties,shares aur paisa including OmRu ke shares jo usne khareeda thha,sab OmRu ke naam pe transfer karwa diya hai.. Sirf ek bungalow ke sivaaye,jo usne Annika puttarji aur unke aane wale baccho keliye khareeda hai..

Aur..yeh teesri paper... Restriction orders hai tum sab keliye... Taaki tum log Shivaay aur Annika puttarji se na milsako... Agar tum mein se kisine bhi iss order ko nahi mana,toh bohut bura hoga."

While Dadaji was leaving,he stopped on his tracks and said with a sad smile,

" Sahi kehte hai sab... Ravaan toh kayi saare hote hai.. par.. Ram.. sirf ek hi hota hai... Agar iss ghar ke Ram ko kuch bhi hua,toh woh din yeh Prithviraj Singh Oberoi sabse saare rishte naate torh dega... Aur main apne zabaan ki bohut pakka hu..."

And Dadaji went away,leaving everyone repenting for their deeds.

Precap: What will happen to Shivaay??

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