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Tose Naina Jabse Mile...Since My Eyes met Yours ...Part 9 Truth out

Haldi...

Gauri was dressed in a beautiful yellow attire.

Om was lost in her beauty.He took haldi paste in his hand and put it on her face sensually.She felt a strange sensation passing through her body.

Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum
Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum

Gauri pasted haldi on Om's cheek romantically.

Jo na keh sake tum

Jo na keh sake hum

Suddenly she rubbed her cheek with his surprising Om.They had a sensual haldi moment.Both were lost in each other.

Jo na keh sake tum

Jo na keh sake hum

Gauri moved towards his ear and whispered:I love you Omkaraji.

Kehne lagi
Dono se wo
Khamoshiyaan... O Saathiya

Om was surprised at looked at Gauri.

Om:Gauri!

She was blushing:I realized that I too love you Omkaraji.

Om was very happy:My biggest wish was to hear these magical words from you.I feel complete now.

She smiled.

Kehne lagi
Dono se wo
Khamoshiyaan... O Saathiya

They both came closer sensually and with burning passion rubbed each others cheek again and again ad got into a passionate embrace.

Saathiya... Saathiya
Saathiya... Saathiya
Saathiya... Saathiya
Saathiya... Saathiya(IB song)

The wedding day...

Gauri went out to meet Kaali Thakur secretly.Tej was observing her secretly.

Tej:I know where you are going Gauri.You thought yiu can fool us forever?Now this what I can do.

Jhanvi went to Gauri's room to give her the wedding jewellery.

Jhanvi:Where is Gauri?

Anika came:Even I am searching for Gauri.She has to be take to the beauty parlour.But she is not see anywhere here.

All of them came.

Shakti:What?Gauri is missing?

Om:What are you all saying?Gauri can't be missing.

Gauri's mother:Noo...Did Kaali Thakur kidnap her?

All got scared.

Shivay:What nonsense!If Kaali thakur had entered our compound we must have known it.He cat kidnap Gauri silently.She must be here itself.Look again.
Anika:We searched Shivay..but...

Pinky:I agree with Shivay.Gauri must be here .
Shakti:But where?

Kalyani:I think like Billu said we should look properly.

Soumya:Actually Anika di and I searched for Gauri bhabhi in every corner.

Rudra:If Gauri bhabhi is not here where can she go?

Tej:I know where she has gone.I saw her stepping out of the house.

Om:Dad...you know where Gauri went?Thank God..Gauri is safe.

Gauri's mom:Where is my daughter then?

Tej:Gauri has gone to meet Kaali Thakur.

All were shocked.

Gauri's mom:That means Kaali kidnapped my daughter?

She started crying.

Om:No...this can't happen.

All were scared and upset.

Tej:Don't worry.Kaali Thakur won't harm Gauri.Gauri is safe.Gauri went there on her own.No one kidnapped her.

Kalyani:What are you saying Tej?

Shivay:Why should Gauri go to see Kaali?

Gauri's mom:Gauri won't go there like that.She always wanted to escape from Kaali.

Tej:I pity you for not knowing your daughter's true colour.She has hidden her real face from you also.

Gauri's mom:What do you mean?

Tej told them what Abhishek told him about Gauri's real intentions.
All were shocked.

Om:No..I won't believe it.
Jhanvi:Tej..what is this?You only told me that the Private detective said nothing bad about Gauri and everything is normal about Gauri.

Tej:Yes.But there was more into it which I was unaware of it.

The others said:We can't believe it.Gauri can't be fake.

Shivay:Gauri saved my life.If she was heartless she would not have done that.

Anika and Pinky:Gauri was genuine when she saved Shivay.

Om:Sorry dad.I trust Gauri.

Tej:I know that no one will believe me.But now itself we can see her true colour.Come with me to Kaali Thakur's cave.

Om:Ok.I will come with you.But not because I don't trust Gauri,but to prove that Gauri is right and you are misguided by your private detective.

Tej thought:May God give strength to Om to see Gauri's true face.

Gauri reached Kaali Thakur's house.

Kaali:Welcome Gauri.We are near our destination.Congrats to you for accomplishing our plan successfully.

Now let us discuss our next plan.

Gauri:No need.I don't want to hear your next plan as I am not interested in it.

Kaali:Means?

Gauri:Means I can't betray Omkara as I love him.I can't betray the family which loves me a lot.I can't break their trust in me.

Kaali was angry:So I was right about you.You betrayed me.

Gauri:No,I was not betraying you purposefully.Even without my knowledge I fell in love with Omkaraji.His pure love ad innocence made me fall in love with him.His family gave me so much of love that I realized that I am blessed to have them.

Kaali:Stop it.You think after betraying me you can live with them happily?No way.I will let them know that you are none other than a con girl who was cheating them.Then they will kick you out and hand over you to the police.The rest of the life you will suffer in the jail.You want that or live a luxurious life hearing my orders?

They did not know that The whole Oberoi family was standing outside overhearing their conversation.

They were shocked and shattered knowing that their Gauri whom they trusted the most was betraying them.Their eyes were covered with tears.Omkara was shattered.Gauri's mom could'nt bear her daughter's hidden face which she failed to know despite of being her mother.

Gauri:You don't have to threaten me Kaali Thakur.I myself will tell Omkara and family about my real identity.Let them put me in the jail.But still I won't betray them.Living in the jail is better than betraying such nice people.I will not cheat them anymore as I love them.

The tears of Oberois shone now knowing that Gauri's love for them was not fake,but true.Even Tej became emotional hearing it.

Gauri :So good bye Kaali Thakur.Now onwards there is no connection between us.Our ways are different.I realized my mistake and I will walk only on the good path.

Suddenly Kaali held her closer squeezing her beck angrily rolling his red agry eyes on her:You think you ca easily leave me and go.I won't let you go that easily.

Om got scared:I am worried about Gauri's safety.Will Kaali harm Gauri?I think I need to go inside.

Shivay:You are right Om.You need to go inside and see what's happening over there.

Tej:I will ring up the police.

Tej rang up the police and called them there.

Gauri scratched Kaali and pushed him.

Gauri:I knew that you will behave this way.Evil people like you cannot tolerate anyone turning good.So I am not shocked about your current reaction.But I don't care.I am leaving.

Gauri turned to go.Suddenly Kaali took a gun screaming at Gauri.

Kaali pointed the gun at Gauri:Gauriii

Gauri got scared.

Kaali shot Gauri.

The scream of Gauri was heard.

Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 6 years ago

#62

Gauri.. change of heart... going to cost her

from kali...

nice update

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Moumina

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Posted: 6 years ago

#63

Awesome...

Finally Gauri... Loved it very much

Update soon

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Srivalli

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Nice update!!

Thanx for d pm:)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

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amazing update! thanks for the pm!

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#66

Fantastic Chapter

The way Gauri cried as she knows she is cheating OM

but she also chose OM and his family instead of money

now she has decided she will tell Kaali her decision

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Mansi

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Emotional update😭Haldi of RiKara was hot☺️Oh no Gauri is not to be found and all are worried for her😒Tej told them she went to meet Kaali and is betraying them😲They refused to believe😲Now they went to Kaali's place to find truth...Gauri arrived there and told she won't work with him henceforth😊But he didn't accept defeat and tortured her😡Gauri's love for Om and his family made their eyes tearful😭Pics❤️

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himani_692

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Finally read it dear super job 👏OMG what a twist 😲well I too had doubt on gauri but when investigator said everything fine I too believed that but the twist super loved it rikara scenes were so beautiful😳 family scenes were adorable omkara proposing gauri awww that was so cute gauri scared the poor guy but later said yes for marriage thought she didn't love him but now she started feeling for him and decided to end it all with kaali but the family came to know the truth kaali shot gauri hope she is safe the tattoo scene was cute awww haldi and mehendi scene was hot 😳loving it waiting for next part eagerly update soon

Edited by himani_rosid - 6 years ago

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Taahir

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Beautiful Chapter

The proposal of Om to Gauri was beautiful

their scenes were just lovely

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Jasmine

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Thanks a lot my dear friends 4 lovely comments

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Tose Naina Jabse Mile...Since My Eyes met Yours ...Part 10 Separation

Dedicated to priyazzxx-who guessed almost who got shot.

Kaali shot Gauri.But before the bullet pierced Gauri ,Omkara came in front of her taking the bullet onto himself.

Gauri screamed:Omkaraji!

Om fell in her arms.

All other Oberois came there crying calling out Om's name.

Gauri was shocked to see all of them there.

Shivay called ambulance.All were crying.

Gauri looked at Om painfully:So you knew that I am a fraud.Then why did you save me risking your life Omkaraji?

Om:Because I love you and my love is true.I can even given up my life for you Gauri.

Gauri wept bitterly.

Gauri:Why do you love me so much Omkaraji?I don't deserve your love.

Kaali laughed insanely.

Kaali:The person for whom you cheated me is dying.Now what will you do?This is your worst punishment.You deserve it.

Gauri cried.

Gauri:I won't let you go away like that Omkaraji.

Om:Gauri...I don't know whether what you told Kaali Thakur is true or not.I don't know whether you were lying or saying truth that you love me.But my love is true.That's why I gave up my life for you.But if your love is not true just understand that sometimes love can be so dangerous that it can take off my life.

Gauri was crying bitterly.
Om: Agar Tumhara Ishq Jutha Tha na Gauri toh Samajh lena ishq Jaan leta hai, aur agar Tumhara Ishq Sacha tha toh Omkara iss Mohobbat Mein Jaan Deta Hai"
Gauri: Apke Ishq mein toh itni takkat thi ki Juthi Mohobbat Ko Bhi Sacha Kar De, Mera Iishq Kab Tak Jutha Rehta
(Dialogue courtesy to Piyali)
Om closed his eyes.

Gauri cried:Omkaraji...
Ambulance and police arrived at the same time.Kaali tried to escape but he was caught by the cops.Omkara was taken to the hospital by ambulance.

Omkara's surgery was going on.Gauri was weeping and praying.

Gauri:Sankarji..please don't punish the innocent Omkaraji for the sin I did.

Omkara's surgery got over.

The doctor:We did our maximum.Only when he gains consciousness we can confirm that he is alright.

All were tensed.

Gauri:Dr..please let me sit near Omkaraji for some time.It's a request.

Kalyani:Why Gauri?Now what else you have to do?Though not purposefully indirectly you became the reason for Om's condition.

Jhanvi cried:Why did you do this to us Gauri?If you had'nt done cheating my Om would not have been in this condition.

Shivay:Never thought that even when you were sweet and helpful to us your mind was full of poison.

Gauri:Shivay bhaiyya..please trust me.

Shivay felt upset.

Anika:We know that you changed for good.But now it's too late Gauri.

Shivay:If Om was'nt in this condition we might have appreciated your change in heart and accepted you.But now we are reminded of your betrayal seeing Om in this condition.

Pinky roared:Gauri!

Shakti:Pinky..control yourself.

Pinky:Shaktiji,I am telling you in advance..please don't correct my English today.I want to speak out without any interruption.

Pinky stared at Gauri:Gauri...

Shivay pulled her away:Maa..come...

Pinky:Let me speak Shivay.

Shivay:There is no point in talking now Maa.

Pinky burst into tears hugging him.

Rudra:I don't feel like calling you bhabhi now.I don't even feel like seeing your face.Sorry.

Soumya:If you had'nt come to our lives our life would have been so beautiful.

Gauri cried:I know I was wrong.But please...I really changed.I love Omkaraji a lot.Please let me see him.

Doctor:Are you Gauri?

Gauri:Yes.

Doctor:We will let you see him only because even in slumber he was uttering your name.

Gauri became very emotional.

Tej:See..my son loves you madly.Why didnt you see his love before Gauri?If so this would'nt have happened.Now after happening this much what is the use of changing?

Gauri wept.

The doctor led her to ICU near Omkara.

Gauri sat near Omkara gazing at him tearfully.Her tear drops fell on his hand and it started moving slightly which she was unaware of it.

Gauri:I know that I don't deserve pardon from you as I broke your trust.But trust me Omkaraji..though my intention to enter your life was bad unknowingly I started loving you,.

To be frank your love was so powerful that it turned my emotionless feeling for you into love.Please don't doubt my love for you.I really love you Omkaraji.

Her tears flowed down falling on his cheek.

Saathiya... Saathiya...

Nurse:Time is over.Please go out.

Gauri went out looking at Omkara once.

Pinky:Did you see how Om is?You are a bad luck for him.If your love for him is true just leave from his life.

Gauri's heart was pierced paining her brutally.

Tej:I also feel that.

Gauri looked at others.All were painfully silent.

Gauri burst into tears.

Gauri:Yes I love Omkaraji from the bottom of my life.It's true that I am responsible for his present state.Just because I love him and want him to be like before I am leaving from his life.Because my presence ca only give him pain.But please forgive me if possible.

She folded her hands pleading for pardon.Everyone looked at her tearfully.

Gauri walked away crying.On the way she saw her mother.

Gauri:Maa!

She slapped Gauri.

She:Even If God had told me that my Gauri is bad I would not have believed it.I trusted you that much.But I myself saw your truth Gauri.You made me realize that my upbringing was so bad that you became greedy for money.I am ashamed of the fact that my daughter is a con girl.

Gauri wept:When the money lenders troubled us a lot mercilessly I thought money is the most powerful thing and such wrong ways can produce a big amount of money which can be thrown at their faces.

Her mother:Though we had financial problem we had a peaceful life...we had self respect.But you forgot everything Gauri.You did'nt even think once about your mother.

Gauri shed tears:Sorry Maa.Please forgive me.I really changed.I left theft and robbery.

Gauri fell at her feet.Her mother lost her control and hugged Gauri crying.

Her mother:If a mother can't forgive her child who will forgive her?

Gauri:Thank you Maa.Atleast you understood me.

Her mother wept silently.

Gauri:Maa..I am leaving.

She was shocked:Why?Where?

Gauri:It will be better if I leave this place.I am a bad omen for everyone.So I should leave.Don't worry.I will live and living without my Omkaraji would be the biggest punishment I deserve for the crimes I did.

Her mother:I will come with you.

Gauri:No Maa.You should not support a daughter like me.Omkaraji considers you as his another mother.So be with him.

Gauri kissed her forehead and walked off leaving her in tears.

Omkara regained consciousness.All were happy.They all were around him.His eyes looked for Gauri.

Om:Where is Gauri?

Tej:Now also you are thinking about that girl?

Pinky:Gauri cheated you Om.

Shakti:It's Gauri cheated you.

Pinky:Shaktiji..when I am emotional don't correct my English.

Tej:Om..because of her you got shot.

Om:It was not because of Gauri that I got shot.It was Kaali Thakur who shot me.Gauri went against Kaali for my love knowing that he can even harm her.Then why should I hate her?

Shivay:Om!

Om:Shivay...you tell me.Don't you know that Gauri is not impure like before?Does'nt she love me sincerely?

Shivay was silent.

Om:Anika bhabhi..you tell me...can you deny that Gauri loves me?You both considered Gauri as a sister.Right?Don't you trust her love for me?

Anika wept silently.Shivay's eyes were wet.

Rudra:Om..relax...we all know that she loves you.But...

Om:Tell me where Gauri is.
Om looked at Kalyani:Dadi...why are you silent?Why are you not saying anything?
Kalyani shed tears silently not able to open her mouth.