Rikara: To Serve and to Protect | Part 12 - Pg 36 |05/18/2018|

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Farri25
INTERESTING ! Waiting for more...😃

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sreekailas
Awww.. This was such a wonderful thing to read.. The way you portrayed each characters to be beautiful n loving in itself ihas given me a sense of calmness.. Eagerly waiting to read more of this..

That is very kind of you. Thank you! 😊

The Oberois are nice people. The power that they hold has not gone to their head. They are complicated though. The upcoming updates will bring these complications out.

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Neetu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

What an interesting start! I'm intrigued. But why do I have this sneaky feeling that everything isn't as hunky dory as it seems? Or maybe I've just been watching too many thriller shows.

Really excited to read more. Do continue soon!

Cheers,

Neet

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OoViVioO

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow! Very interesting...Can't wait to read more.

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

I really loved the way you've penned down each character..

Reading Omkara as a policeman is something I'm eagerly looking forward to..

Both are ready to marry each other..

It's interesting..

Waiting for the next part..

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aayushi1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This is a very fresh and intriguing concept!!...

I'm waiting for this story...

Update soon!😊

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devildiva21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

A very interesting concept and start...
can't wait to read what happens to RiKara now that they both have agreed for the marriage
Continue Soon

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Aww this was lovely

A different take

continue soon

Do pm me when you update

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: RestlessWriter
What an interesting start! I'm intrigued. But why do I have this sneaky feeling that everything isn't as hunky dory as it seems? Or maybe I've just been watching too many thriller shows.

Really excited to read more. Do continue soon!

Cheers,

Neet

Thank you 😊

You guessed right. Not everything is as perfect as it seems. More about the complexities in the upcoming updates😛

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
I love the concept
Very different from read of the stories

Your wanting style is also very good

So looking forward for this story now

Thank you Lizzie.😊

Have always had this outline of an idea in mind and wanted to pen it down for long. Finally got a chance to do it.

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: OoViVioO
Wow! Very interesting...Can't wait to read more.

Thank you. Glad you found it interesting!

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
I really loved the way you've penned down each character..
Reading Omkara as a policeman is something I'm eagerly looking forward to..
Both are ready to marry each other..
It's interesting..
Waiting for the next part..

Thank you😊 Glad you liked it.

Om and Gauri still have a long way to go before getting married. The next part will be up in a few minutes.