Story 3--T & T Tales!(Rikara) PART 3-pg11-Completed

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: GinniAARAFAN
Wow

Thank you😊

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ...deepzz...
Lizzie this is too good.
Interesting and intriguing(horror +thriller) combo👏
Please post the completed story once the contest is over.
Thanks.

Thank you so much

I have not written more. Maybe I ll post a summary when things end

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow..
Is really fantastic..and really surprising plot...

Thought rikara lost their closed ones..

Thus story is veryy interesting..

Exciting for next updates..

Super work...
LavSriya

Thank you so much 😊

Hopefully got the mystery right 😛

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Ms.Lizzie

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#24

Originally posted by: Khidki

Writer 1- Mz.Lizzie
An all-rounder writer of the Ishqbaaz Forum!

That is so kind of you

Thank you so much

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

You've given me chills girl. Completely unexpected - but sneaky thing... when I read about the accident I thought about the prompt and was like, oh yeah... the lady's pregnant...

This was of course a really innovative take on the prompt - how do you come up with these brainwaves. I loved it. You've given a lot of scope to form a great story to the next writer.

Brilliant job!😃

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Wow! That was so damn intriguing! Two deaths, death of a mother and an unborn child, due to Gauri! Very interesting!

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Ms.Lizzie

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#27

Originally posted by: kashishsr
You've given me chills girl. Completely unexpected - but sneaky thing... when I read about the accident I thought about the prompt and was like, oh yeah... the lady's pregnant...
This was of course a really innovative take on the prompt - how do you come up with these brainwaves. I loved it. You've given a lot of scope to form a great story to the next writer.

Brilliant job!😃

Thank you so much

It's my first time trying something in this genre

Yes, I have consciously left many doors open for whoever is going to continue it. 😊

The prompt : 2 dead mother and unborn child is what help me conceive whole idea...

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Ms.Lizzie

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#28

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Wow! That was so damn intriguing! Two deaths, death of a mother and an unborn child, due to Gauri! Very interesting!

Thank you so much 😊

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Ms.Lizzie

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#29

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t
Amazing!!
Loved it..

Thank you 😊

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Krishi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Lizzie this was brilliant.

As I kept reading it, things became easier to read but suddenly you dropped bomb after bomb and now my brain's running overtime.

You've ended it at such a fantastic point (note the sarcasm because the reader in me is going crazy!). You kept on going and before ending, last 2-3 sentences, you changed almost everything that you wrote? How amazing is that considering the essence wasn't lost on bit and the elements of mystery are still well balanced.

I'll read it a few more times, please :)

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