Realising your value (3 shots) shot 2 updated page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Suggestion of arunsunita_gm

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After exposing Veer,they four came happily at Oberoi Mansion

A:Kaise maza chakaya na uss 8 foot ke cheapde ko

R:Haan bahut maza aaya

Shi:Dadi

Hearing it Dadi,Pinky Jhanvi ,Bhavya Shakti came to the hall

D:Kya hua puttar chilla kyun rahi ho

R:Dadi hum sabne milke bahut bada game khela,vo veer hein na vo

Ache insaan nahi the

R explains everything to all

B P was standing their folding hands. Dadi jhanvi Shakti were hearing excitedly

Om searches everywhere for his chirraiyya but doesn't see her

Om:Bhavya gauri kahan hein

P:Kyun,tumhe ab gauri kyun chahiye.tum log gauri aur bhavya ko yeh sab kyun nahi bataya

Shi:Samjha kijiye sab jaan lenge toh khatra hein

O:Aur hum gauri aur bhavya ko pareshan nahi karna chahte the

P:Acha

A:Vaise gauri hein kahan

P:Vo apne maayke gayi hein uski maa ki tabiyat kharab hein

O:Kya par usne bataya kyun nahi

P:Kyun

O: Mein uski pati hoon choti maa mein jaati uski madad karne

P:Usne bhi socha tumhe pareshaan na karoon aur agar vo call kiya bhi tumhare phone toh switched off tha na

P goes and stand in front of them

P:Tum logon ko kya laga yeh veer ko sirf tum chaaron ke vaja se pakda gaya hein.Vo toh acha hua gauri ko last time pe tum logon ka yeh saazish pata chala aur bhavya mein aur gauri banke uss veer ko bhang vale chai pilaayi varna tum log samhaal paati uss insaan ko,aur shivaay bhavya ne hi police ko inform kiya vahan aane keliye,aur tum logon ko yeh tak nahi pata the ki saumya uss veer ke saath thi.

Shi:Saumya

P:Haan saumya,humne usse bhi police ke hawale kar diya,aaye badi plan karne waale,mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi omkara,chalo rudra toh hein hi na samajh toh nahi bataya hoga lekin tum.vo bechari kitna kuch kiya tumhare liye aur tum ho key eh plans bhi isko batana zaruri nahi samjha.acha bhai hone ke saath saath acha pati bhi banna seekho. Tumhe pata bhi hein uski kya haalat hui thi yeh jaanke ki tumne usse itni badi baat chupayi ro rahi thi vo kamre mein jab mein gayi toh

Flashback

P: Mummyji ne gauri ko bulane ko kaha vo toh iss waqt kitchens hoti hein gayi kahan yeh ladki

P goes to room and see G sitting thinking something

P:Gauri mummyji bula rahi hein kuch tayyari ki baat karne

P sees G sitting without responding

P touches her shoulder

P:Gauri kya hua tabiyat teek nahi hein kya

G wipes her tears

G:Choti maa ji aap kuch kaam tha

G goes stands up but P makes her sit and sit beside her

P:Kya hua tumhe,koi problems hein kya

G:Nahi vo

P:Ro rahi thi tum?

G:Nahi hum kahan

P:Jhoot mat bol,omkara se jhagda hua kya

G nods her head in negative

P:Phir kya hua,tum mujhe bata sakte ho

G hugs P and cries.P hugs back and cares her head

P:Kya hua beti

G:Vo omkaraji bhaujai bade bhaiya aur rudy bhaiya milke veer ji ke khilaaf kuch plan kar rahe the itni din,koi bhi humein batana zaruri nahi samjha,omkaraji bhi.kyun choti maa ji,hum bhi toh unke pareshaani dur karna chahte hein na.humein laga omkaraji ab hum pe bharosa karte hein par vo bhi

P:Nahi beta aise nahi rote,aane do in logon ko

G:Nahi choti maa ji shayad hum hi galat soch rahe hoge na,koi bada kaaran hoga varna vo humse

P:Agar anika ko yeh jaanne ka haq hein toh tumhe bhi hein aisa mat socho ki tum galat ho

G:Par humein madad karne chahiye na vo humse chupaye ya na chupaye

P:Kyun madad kare

G:parivar ke baat hein na choti maa ji,isliye humne socha uss veer ko uljhake rekhna chahiye jab tak vo log vahan pahunchke kuch sapoot doonde.bhavya ko bhi batana chahiye

G goes to Veers room and hear everything and see Saumya with him. G calls Om to say but phone was switched off.

So they make saumya unconscious and give bhang mixed tea to veer.

G gets call from Richa

P:Kya hua

G:Vo maa hospital mein hein,BP high hein

P:Toh tum jaao na maa ke paas

G:Arre ab vo teek hein,hum kaise jaaye itna kaam hein yahan

P:Tum iski chinta mat karo mein sab samhalungi,mujhe lagta hein tumhe jaana chahiye,sabko akal aaye un logon ki galti ka,tum jaao abhi

G:Lekin choti maa ji,omkarji ko

P:Meine kaha na jaao,koi zarurat nahi hein kisiko batane ke mein sab dekh loongi,chalo tayyar ho jaao

G leaves to Bareily

Fb ends

But Pinky hides the fact that she forced gauri to go to Bareily

P:Teek hi toh hein agar tum log baat chupa sakte ho toh vo kyun nahi,tum ne bahit galat kiya omkara,vo bechaari kya kya kiya ur saha tumhareliye, tumhe achi tarah pata hein na vo tumhari pareshaani dur karna chahte hein phir bhi tumne uski dil dukhayi,kitna bharosa karti hein vo tumhare lekin tum uski aadhe bhi nahi karte.

O looks down ashamed

P:Kuch yaad karo kaise vo tumhare saath khade the jab vo tumhare uss videos dikha rahi thi mummyji ke partys mein. Usko kya tum log ki khushi mein shaamil hone ya yahan ki kaam karne ka haq hein

P:Aur anika aur shivaay tum log,badi kehti thi na meri choti behen behen,sirf kehne se nahi usse uski ehsaas bhi dilana chahiye.tumhe pata hein kitna pareshaan tha vo tumhare uss nakli jhagda dekhe ki tum log ke beech anbandh hein,aur rudy tum,anika aur shivaay ko milane keliye usko shaamil kiya par iss mein kyun nahi,bhavya aur gauri ke saath yeh bhed bhaav kyun

D:Pinky yeh tum

P:Nahi mummyji bolne dijiye mujhe aapko bhi gauri se zyada anika pyari hein,pata hein mujhe phir bhi aap uske saath khadi rahi hein

Isliye aapko mein kuch nahi kahungi,par yeh chaaron aaj galat hein , shivaay always rights nahi ho sakte

J:Kya gauri apni ghar gayi? kisse poochke gayi

P:Mujhse poochke gayi vo

J:Vo meri bahu hein toh mujhse poochna chahiye

P:Maaf kijiye jheitani ji,vo apki bahu nahi hein,jab jhet ji ne uski sharad kiya na uss din, uss din se vo apke bahu nahi hein,yeh toh uss bachi ki badakpan hein phir bhi vo yahan vapas aayi aur aap logon ko maaf kiya.

J:Toh vo yahan vapas kyun aayege

P:Vo meri beti banke vapas aayege samjhe aap.meri beti. Teek kaha na meine Shakti ji

S:Haan pinky pehli baar tumne koi sahi baat kahi

P looks proudly at all.

J:Ohh stop it pinky achanak se itna pyar gauri keliye

P:Achanak se nahi jhetaniji,jab vo mujhe bachane keliye uss borders paar kiya na tab se vo meri laadli hein. Haan meine kuch nahi kaha uss din jab jheitji sharad kar rahe the kyunki vo apki ghar ke maamle the,lekin agar omkara usse shivay ke paas nahi le jate na toh mein usse apni hisse mein rekhne keliye tayyar thi.poochiye Shakti ji se ki meine unse yeh baat kahi ya nahi

Shakti nods

P:Toh sawal jawab ho gaya toh mein chalti hoon,mujhe tum logon ke iss jhooti khushi mein shaamil nahi hona hein

D:Kahan jaa rahi ho pinky

P:Apni beti ke paas bareily jaa rahi hoon,usse meri zarurat hein

O:Choti maa mein bhi

P:Koi zarurat nahi hein , yahan beitke aur plannings karo,khabardaar koi bhi aaya toh vahan,uss bachi ko thodi shanthi toh de do

D:Toh kya vo vapas nahi aayege

P:Aayege na mummyji jab bhavya aur rudra ke shaadi tayy hogi na tab mein usse leke aa jaungi, khushi mein shaamil hone ka haq hein na usse toh kyun nahi

A:Par maa vo

P:Meine kaha na

Shi:Ek minute Mrs Oberoi apko kya laga aapka kehna hum maan jayege

P:Soch lo shivaay agar tum log vahan nazar aaye na toh mein usse kahin dur le jaoge aur vo shaadi keliye bhi nahi aayege

Shi looks shocked at P.

P:Maa hoon mein tumhari, aur agar koi fancy dresses mujhe bareily mein nazar aaye na toh khaan ke neeche baja dungi mein sabki.

S:Pinky mein bhi tumhari saath aa rahi hoon

P nods

P: (Mein bhi toh dekhoon yeh log gauri ko manane keliye kya karege)

All stands their rooted.B goes to her room angrily.Rudra follows her.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well written. I was actually surprised that Pinky actually support Gauri. Please update soon
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I'm so suprised at this one.
It is a suprise to see Pinky.

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surprised seeing Pinky's concern for Gauri..
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i will always like a scene like this
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Thank u for ur response. Hope u like this part too.

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S:Pinky mein bhi tumhari saath aa raha hoon

P nods

P: (Mein bhi toh dekhoon yeh log gauri ko manane keliye kya karege)

All stands their rooted.B goes to her room angrily.Rudra follows her.

O goes to the room and sits there keeping hands on his head

O:Yeh kya kiya om tumne phir se uska dil dukhaya.Bechari bahut dukhi hogi.ab kya kare

Shivay Anika comes to Om

Shi:Om tum chintha mat karo hum gauri se maafi maang lenge

O:Phir se uska dil dukhaya mein shivaay.mein har baar aise hi karta hoon

A:Sirf tum nahi om hum sab galat kiya hein lekin dekho na khushi ke baat yeh hein ki maa ne kaise gauri ka saath diya.

O:Vo mujhse naraz hokar agar pichle baar ke tarah gaya toh

S:Nahi om aisa mat soch

R and B comes

R:Aur choti maa ne kaha na vo aayege vapas jab humare shaadi tayy hoge toh aap chinta mat kijiye

S:I think v should go to Bareily

O:Nahi shivay hum risk nahi le sakte choti maa ji ne kaha na vo humein vahan nahi dekhna chahte hum kuch aur sochte hein usse manane.aur bhavya we are sorry hum log aage se aise nahi karenge,we promise

B: Sach bataye bhaiya humein bhi bahut dukh hua ab bhi hein,lekin ab uske upar baat karke koi fayda nahi na.gauri babhi bhi bahut upset the,sach bataye toh hum aur pinky maa bilkul tayyar nahi the apke madad karne ke,lekin babhi ne humein samjhaya ki aise nahi karte

O smiles

O:Meri chirraiya hein hi samajhdar

Pinky and Shakti reaches Gauris home

G opens the door

G:Arre choti maa ji aap

P hugs G. Shakti too hugs G

P:Maa kaisi hein tumhari

G:Teek hein kal discharge karege unhe,humne kaha na vo teek hein aap log kyun takleef ki

S:Iss mein takleef ki kya baat hein beta,apni beti ki madad kar rahe hein hum

P:Aur nahi toh kya

G:Hum toh kal aane wale the vapas

P:Koi zarurat nahi

G:Kyun

P:Tum beito mujhe tumse talks karni hein

P explains what all happened in OM.G looks wide eyed

G:Yeh kya kiya aap ne choti maa ji

P:Kyun

G:Arre itni bade samasya banane ke kya zarurat thi.haan humein bura laga gussa bhi aa rahe hein phir bhi,un logon ko kitna bura laga hoga

P:Kyun un logon ne toh nahi socha na tumhe bura lag sakta hein toh tum kyun soch rahi ho

G:choti maa ji vo

P:Yeh teenon bte kaise bahu leke aaye hein, in teenon ko bas pyar jatana aata hein haq keliye ladna nahi,mujhe achi tarah pata hein vaha bhavya maan gaye hoge lekin tum itna aasani se mat manna

G:Par

P:Koi par var nahi tum itne ache ho isliye vo aise baar baar tumhare dil dukhate hein ab bas bahut ho gaya,mein keh rahi hoon na tum un logon se baat

Gauri gets Omkaras call

G:Omkaraji ka phone hein

P:Kaato

G:Ji?

P:Meine kaha phone kaato,tum kisike bhi phone nahi utaoge samjhi tum.itna sab kuch karke bade aaye phone karnewala

G:Lekin unhone yahan aane ko bhi kaha na

P:Marungi ek agar un logon ka sides liya toh

The phone get cut

Om pouts:Guys phone nahi utaya

Shi:Koi baat nahi mein try karta hoon vo apne bade bhaiya ka phone zarur utayege

Shi calls

G:Choti maa ji bade bhaiya

P takes the phone and cut it

All laughs

A:Shivaay apka call usne kaat diya

G gasps:yeh kya kiya aap ne bechare bade bhaiya

P:Chup koi bechara vechara nahi hein,tum meri baat ko samjho,itna jaldi mat maano,tumhe mere kasam un logon ka koi call mat utana samjhi

G nods

P:Meri beti ka dil dukhaya na vo bhi toh samjhe

G gets teary eyes

P:Kya hua

G hugs P

G:Humein na acha lag raha hein apke yeh gussa dekhe

P smiles and hugs back

G:Acha batayiye karna kya hein

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R:Ab kya kare chulbul babhi ko manane

A:Idea

The next day Gauri opens the door and see Khanna

G:Khanna ji aap

Kh:Good morning maam

G:Aap humein wish karne aaye hein

O Shi A R B were hearing the conversation on phone

Shi:Offo stupid phool de do usse

Kh makes the head set right and gives the flower

Kh:Maam yeh apke liye,shivaay sir anika maam om baba rudy baba ne bheja hein

G takes it and goes to say something and see P staring at her behind Kh

G:Kya laga apko iss phool bhejne se sab teek hoga,aap isse vapas le jayiye,humein koi phool vool nahi chahiye

All become sad especially Om

Kh:Maam vo apke liye phone hein Om baba ke

G:Omkaraji line pe hein

Kh:Ji

G takes the phone and cuts it

G:Nahi baat karna humein kisise,ab aap yahan tak aa hi gaye toh chai peeke jayiye

G turns and smiles

O calls again

O:Kya hua khanna

Kh:Vo sir gauri maam ne phone kata

G comes with tea

G:Lijiye

Kh:Apki maa kasie hein maam

G:Aaj discharge ho jayege

Kh:Agar apko kuch madad chahiye toh

P:Khanna hum dono hein na yahan madad karne toh koi aur ke kya zarurat hein,kyun gauri

G:Haan pinky maa, vaise bhi humare madad karne vahan kaun hein, dadi toh yahan aa nahi sakte, bhavya toh shaadi ke preparation mein busy hoge, phir hum kaise apni saasu maa se kaam karva sakte hein

Kh:Vo shivaay sir anika maam

G:Kya baat kar rahe hein unhe koi nayi planning nahi karni hein kya

Kh:Planning?

G:Ohh apko bhi nahi bataya,Shukar hein humein laga vo sirf humein hi kuch nahi batate apko bhi nahi batate,vahi toh aap ko bhi nahi pata hoga isliye rehne dijiye

All look very sad knowing how hurt Gauri was.

Kh drinks tea and goes back

Gauri's mother got discharged

Om calls Gauris mother.

Gm:Damaadji kaise hein aap

Om:Aap batayiye aap kaise hein

Gm:Teek hoon daamadji humne gauri se kaha bhi tha jaane keliye lekin vo mante hi nahi

O:Arre apki khayal bhi toh rakhna hein na, toh rehen dijiye usse vahan

Gm:Aur pinkyji aur Shakti bhai sahib bhi bahut madad kar rahe hein

O smiles

Gm:Lijiye gauri aa gaye baat kijiye

G:Kaun maa

Gm:Daamad ji

G looks at P.P nods to take the call

G:Hello

O gets relieved after hearing her voice

O:Kaise ho tum

G:Hum teek hein

O:Khaana khaya tumne

G:Hmmm

G gets teary eyed

O:Gauri vo mein,I m sorry.meine nahi socha tumhe itna bura lagega, I just

G:Vo humein kuch kaam hein baad mein baat karege aap se

G cuts the call,goes to room and cries

G: Kaise soch liye aap ne ki humein bura nahi lagega,choti maa ji teek hi kaha un logon ko dikhana hi padega kaise lagta hein jab akela mehsoos hota hein apnon ke beech mein

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P:Gauri humein kal vapas jaana hein OM,bhavya aur rudra ke shaadi tayy ho gaye.10 din baad hein

G:Arre waah yeh toh bahut ache baat hein hum maa ko batake aate hein

Gm:Maaf kijiye pinkyji lekin hum shaadi mein nahi aa sakenge vo tabiyat

P:Arre koi baat nahi hum samaj sakte hein

G P S returns to OM

All waits for Gauri eagerly

G comes and hugs B happily:Badaai ho bhavya,hum bahut khush hein

R goes to G.G just smiles at R

G:Mubarak ho rudy bhaiya

R felt little sad but doesn't show it

Shi comes and side hugs G

Shi:Kaise ho tum gauri maa kaise hein

G:Vo teek hein bade bhaiya

Anika goes to speak to Gauri

G:hum zara kamre mein chalte hein vo kaam hein na

A too feels bad.

Shi:Vo bahut naraz hein

B:Naraz se zyada vo hurt hein bhaiya

G goes to room and see Om sitting on the bed

Om sees G, comes to her and hug her and cries

G was stunned and dnt know wat to do

O:Mujhe pata hein tum mujhse bahut naraz hein aur mujhse baat tak nahi karna chahte,I deserve this,I deserve more than this, but thank u so much tum vapas aaya, mujhse baat bhi nahi karoge tum toh bhi chalega please dobara mujhe aise akele mat chodke jaana mein darr gaya tha, ajeeb se becheini tha mujhe, khabrahat tha I thot I ll loose myself

G too cries but doesn't say anything

O stand straight and kisses G's forehead

O:I love you and I m sorry,I promise I ll make it up to you.tum fresh ho jaao

O wipes his tears smiles and goes.

G closes the door and cries

G:Jitna bhi naaraz rahein hum apko kabhi chotke nahi jaa sakte lekin saza toh zarur milege apko

G gets fresh and goes to hall and see all gathered there.

Dadi:Aao puttar hum sab tumhara hi intezar kar rahe the

G:Humara?

D:Kyun ghar ke sadasya ho tum, toh koi ghar ki koi baat kahoge toh tum bhi jaanna chahiye na

G nods and stand beside Pinky

D:Toh batao kaun ladke vale kaun ladki vale

A:Mein rudy ke side

A goes and stand beside R and do hifi

Jhanvi:Mein ofcourse Rudra ke side

D: Pinky tum

S:hum dono bhavya ke side

P smiles happily and side hugs B

Shi:Mein toh apni behen ke side pe hoon

Shi goes beside B.

Before Om could say G says

G:Hum bhi apni behen ke side

A R looks each other and gets sad.

O:Toh mein rudy ke side

D:Chalo yeh tayy hua toh ab tayyri shuru karo

All disperse.G was about to go but Dadi stops her

D:Gauri puttar

G:Ji dadi

D:Bahut naraz hein na hum sab se

G:Arre nahi dadi yeh aap kya keh rahe hein humein bas bura laga ke vo log

D:Janti hoon puttar aur tumhara naraz hona bhi jayaz hein par tujhe pata hein yeh log bhi sharminda hein.naraz ho jaao par thodi der baad maaf bhi kar dena.pata hein tumhe vapas bulane keliye rudra ne itni jaldi shaadi keliye maan gayi

G nods and goes to kitchen.G sees B searching for eggs

G:Ande chor ab bhi yeh aadat nahi gaye kaa

B smiles

B:Acha hua aap vapas aaye pata hein humne apko kitna miss kiya,aana toh hum bhi chahte the uss din pinky maa ji ke saath par rudra ne humse maafi maangke rafa dafa kiya

G smiles

B:Apko pata hein vo log bhi apko bahut miss kiya, specially omkara bhaiya ne, vo toh teek se kisise baat bhi nahi karte the

G:Vo sab chodo tum,humne na ek acha plan banaya hein sangeet keliye surprise

B:Kya

G tells secretly to B.B gets excited hearing the plan

A:Ohhh kya secret ho rahi hein yahan

B:Babhi vo

G holds B's hand as if stopping from saying

B nods at G

B:Kuch nahi babhi vo bas

G goes to take pan and A comes in front of G

A:Apni bhaujai se baat bhi nahi karoge

G doesn't look A.

G:Hum kaun hote hein baat karne vala apko kuch kaam mein madad chahiye toh kahiye hum kar dete hein

A:Gauri sorry please aise mat raho tum

G:Kaise na rahein hum toh teek hein

A:Gauri hum tumse jaan bhujke nahi chupaye vo

G:zarurat nahi samjha na humein bolna,kyun bhaujai, apko pata hein sabse bada dukh iss baat ka laga ki aap aur rudy bhaiya humse nahi kaha, jab se aap dono ko mila na hum aap dono ko best friend mante aaye hein,koi shak hein apko iss mein, hum toh apne saare baatein aap dono se kehti hein na toh aap log kehna zaruri nahi samjha,bade bhaiya vaise bhi humein kuch nahi bolte hum samajhte hein lekin aap teenon, chalo plan mein shaamil nahi kiya kyunki hum kuch nahi kar sakte,par ek baar keh toh deti yeh sab karne vale hein aap log,itna bura nahi lagte humein.

A cries.G too cries and wipes her tears

G:Aap kehke kaa faayda

G goes from kitchen

Pinky comes to Anika

P:Bura laga ke vo tum dono ke nahi bhavya ke saath hein

A wipes her tears

P:Toh socho usse kitna bura laga hoga

A looks at P

P:Mein isliye uske sides nahi liya ki tum log alag ho jaao,isliye liya kyunki tum logon ko bhi pata chale usse kaise laga aur agar vo yeh sab nahi kehti na toh yeh baat mann hi mann rekh ke baad mein aur problems ho jaati jaise mere aur jhetaniji ke beech hui thi.Isliye mana kiya tum logon ko aane kyunki gauri ka values tum log samjho.

A nods

P:Kya ab apni devrani ko manaoge nahi

A nods happily

G sits in her room and cries.

A R comes to G's room.

G sees them and sits straight in recliner

A R looks at each other

G looks at both

A:Chal rudy shuru kar

A R do sit ups holding ears

G looks at them wide eyed

G:Yeh kaa kar rahe aap log

R:Jab tak aap humse baat nahi karenge hum aise karenge

A:Humne bahut badi galti ki apni best friend ke dil dukhake toh saza hein

G looks at both

G:Itni choti saza?

A R stops doing and sits down in front of G.

R:Chulbul babhi aap jo saza dena hein dijiye, khaan pakdiye thappad maariye,dumbbell se bhi maariye par aise silent treatment may dijiye please.bahut badi Galti hui I promise dobara aise mein kabhi nahi karunga I promise agle baar koi bhi secret ho mein sabse pehle apko hi bataungi promise,bhavya se bhi pehle apko bataungi

A:Haan mein bhi tum mujhse chameli se maaro toh bhi chalega please humse baat karo.hum kuch bhi karne keliye tayyar hein maafi keliye please please please ek baar maaf karo

Shi too comes and bend to G holding ears.

They 3 sits like that

Shi:Sorry gauri sab meri galti hein meine hi kaha kisise mat kehna par tumhari vaja se hi veer pakda gaya na .Thank u and sorry. Chaho toh mujhe bhi maaro tum par please maaf karo

G:Yeh aap log kya kar rahe hein ut jayiye.

A:Tum saza do na kuch

G:Saza de doon

All three nods

G:Hmm aap log rukiye yahan

They three clueless looks each other

G comes back with tray after sometimes

G opens three bowls

G:bhaujai apko yeh kache ande khaana hein,rudy bhaiya yeh halwa jismein hum bahut saare shakkar aur ghee dale hein aur yeh humne raste mein liya chaat hein bade bhaiya apkeliye

All looks at each other confused

G:Agar aap log yeh khaya toh maaf karenge hum

All give a "michmichi look

P sees it from outside the room and chuckles

P:Paagal

G turns and looks at P.P shake her head and go

G:Hum jante hein aap log

G turns and get shocked seeing all three eating the dish

Eventhough they have difficulty they eat it smiling

Shi get tears in eyes as it was spicy

Shi:Kaafi tasty hein na

A gets irked drinking egg:Haan

R:Apne kitna shakkar daala iss mein bahut ache hein

G:Arre hum toh bas

They three finish it

Shi A R:Ab maaf kiya

G cries:Aap logon ne kyun khaaya yeh sab

A:Arre tumhi ne toh kaha maafi milenge,tumhari maafi keliye yeh ek baar kya sau baar hum khaa sakte hein ,hein na

G cries

All 3 goes to G worried

R:Kya hua babhi phir se galat kiya kya

G:Aap logon ko nahi pasand na yeh sab phir bhi humareliye khaaye

Shi:Humne jo dukh pahuchaya na tumhe iske saamne yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hein,we are sorry.

G hugs Shi

A R:Aur hum log

G hugs them too

R A smiles happily

R:Ab toh badhai dijiye shaadi ke

G:Kal diya na

R:Vo rukhi sukhi badhai nahi chahiye mujhe

G smiles and hugs R :Mubarak ho

R:Yeh hui na baat

G slaps R and A on arms:Agar dobara aise kiya na toh aasani se maafi nahi milega

R A nods :Kabhi nahi karenge

A:Vaise tu ne vo 8 foot ko bhang diya kaise

G:Vo

G excitedly explains the incident and all three laughs.Om comes and see all four chatting and get surprised

R:O aao itni der kyun hui

G sits normal.

G tries to go

R:Arre kahan chali aap

G:Humein kaam hein

They 3 look at O and G

Shi:Ab om ko bhi maaf kar do na

G:Nahi bade bhaiya aap inki side mat lijiye, humein inse baat nahi karni.

Shi:Par gauri

G:Humne kaha na

G goes.O looks at G going.G stops

G: Vaise inse kahiye ab yeh bhavya ke side jaaye kyunki hum ladke vale hein ab

R:Yesss

R goes shouting Bhavyas name

O:Jo hokum rani sahiba

G stares at O.O smiles lovingly at G. G goes

G: (aaye bade I ll make it up for u, teek se baat tak nahi ki iske baad,jhatadhari hippie)

O smiles.

Sh taps O shoulder

A:vo hum teenon se bahut naraz the,chalo mein aur rudy usse manaya ab tum kya karoge

O: Kuch bhi karke usse manaunga mein,meri chirraiya hein,usse dur nahi jaane dunga mein

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Cute update... loved the way everyone were trying to manaofy Gauri
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was amazing...! please continue this soon😊

It will be really nice to see jhanvi's redemption towards gauri as well
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
This was amazing...! please continue this soon

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