RiKara FF: Aaj Jaane ki zidd na karo (Chapter 1 to Chapter 8)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PROLOGUE

*At the railway station*

[Gauri, dressed in her wedding joda, hopped off the train that halted at Mumbai.

This was it.

There was no looking back.

She looked around for a taxi, and found two men standing besides a car and ran towards them.]

Gauri: (Getting into the car) Bhaiyya, Jaldi chalo, Hume Vikram ke ghar jaana hai

[The two men, one of whom was very built, and the other had long hair, looked at each other in confusion.]

Rudra: O, tune kuch suna?

Om: Nahi toh, Kyun?

Gauri: (Peeping out the window) Arre hum hai! Jaldi gaadi chalaayie!

Rudra: (To Om) Lagta Hai yeh hi Anika bhabhi ki bacchpan ki dost hai!

Om: (Confused) Haan, Lekin woh dulhan ke libaaz mein kyun Hai?

Rudra: Arre, Anika bhabhi ki dost Hai, unhi ki tarah over the top hogi!

Om: Haan, Chalo!

[Om stepped on the car engine, and the car roared and sped ahead.]

Gauri: Waise Mumbai mein 2 taxi driver hote Hai ka? Humaare Bareilly mein sirf 1 taxi driver hota Hai!

Om and Rudra: (Together) Taxi driver?

[The car journey was completely unknown to both of them.

Rudra and Om picked up the wrong person.

Gauri entered the wrong car.

In Anika's words:

"Bahut bada raita phail gaya!"]

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Sooo this is another story I had in my brain for some time ;)

All I'm going to say is, stay excited!!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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[The car halted in front of the Oberoi mansion, and Om and Rudra hopped off the car, while Gauri silently followed them.]

Gauri: (To herself) Vikram ka ghar itna bada hai? Isliye unke maa baap raaji nahi the! Kahaan ee mahal, aur kahaan humaara jhopda!

[Om, Rudra and Gauri entered the Oberoi mansion, and Anika rushed to the door, yearning to meet her friend.]

*At the Oberoi mansion*

Anika: Arre dekho aa gaye woh...Yeh kaun hai?!

Gauri: (To Om) Aapka naam bunty hai?

Anika: (Confused) Bunty?

Shivaay: Kya hua Anika...yeh kaun hai?

Dadi: (Shocked) Hey bhagwaan! Om! Tu kya kaand kar ke aaya hai!

Om: Kaand? Dadi, kya bol rahi hai aap!

Dadi: Rudra, tune hi kuch kiya hai na? Hey bhagwaan!

Rudra: Arre dadi, itna drama kyun kar rahe ho?! Maine kuch nahi kiya hai!

Gauri: (Confused, looking at Om) Accha toh bunty, Vikram kaha hai?

Anika: Ab yeh Vikram kaun hai?!

Gauri: Arre bunty, Didi ko bata Vikram kaun hai!

Om: Arre kisse bunty bula rahi ho?!

Gauri: Aapko! Aap hi toh bunty ho! Jo taxi chalaate Hai!

[Rudra immediately burst out laughing and almost collapsed on the floor, unable to control his laughter.

The whole family looked at each other in confusion.

What the hell was going on?!]

Shivaay:(Slapping his forehead) Ab Rudra ko Kya ho gaya hai?! Rudy, uth!

Rudra: (Laughing) Isliye kaha tha O, ki apna fashion sense badal! Isne toh Tujhe taxi driver samajh liya!

Om: (Annoyed) Shut up Rudra!

Gauri: (Confused) Samajh liya Matlab? Ee bunty nahi hai ka?!

Om: Arre, kaun bunty, kaisa bunty?! Yahaan par koi bunty nahi hai!

Gauri: Ek jhaanp mein deewar pe satt jaaye be! Vikram ko bulao phir! Hum unse baat karenge!

Om: Ajeeb ladki ho! Yahaan koi Vikram nahi rehta! Yeh Oberoi mansion hai! Na koi Vikram Hai, na koi bunty!

Gauri: (Shocked) Ka?! Toh phir aap Hume yahaan lekar kahe aaye hai?!

Om: Hume laga tum Anika bhabhi ki bacchpan ki dost ho!

Shivaay: Aisi bewakoof tum Aur Rudra hi kar sakte ho! Arre Anika ki dost dulhan ke libaaz mein kyun hogi?

Om: Wahi toh Maine kaha tha! Phir Rudy ne kaha ki woh Anika bhabhi ki tarah dramatic hogi, isliye dulhan ke libaaz mein hogi!

Dadi: Hey bhagwaan!

Shivaay: Tum aur Rudy, dono pagal ho gaye ho! Ab iss ladki ka Kya karna hai?!

[The whole family engaged themselves in a huge argument, and afraid Gauri slowly walked away and sat on the chair, trying to get a grip of herself.

If this wasn't Vikram's house then where was she?

Who were these people?

Where was Vikram? Her Vikram?

Anika and Dadi immediately noticed Gauri sitting in the corner, in fear and rushed towards her side and sat besides her.

Soon enough, the argument fizzled down and everyone stood around Gauri, as she narrated her story.]

Dadi: (To Gauri) Puttar, tu kaun hai? Tumhaara naam Kya hai? Tumhaara ghar kaha hai, Aur tum yeh dulhan ke libaaz mein kyun ho?

Gauri: (Scared) H-h-Humaara naam Gauri Hai. Gauri Kumari Sharma. Hum Bareilly ke rehne waale hai, aur kuch ghante pehle apne shaadi se bhaagkar Mumbai aaye hai, Vikram se shaadi karne.

Om: Vikram kaun hai?

Gauri: Woh jisse hum pyaar Karte Hai. Hum bacchpan ke dost hua Karte the, aur jaise jaise bade ho gaye, Waise Waise dosti pyaar mein badal gayi.

5 Saal pehle unka khaandaan bahut ameer ho gaya, Aur woh yahaan Mumbai mein rehne lage.

Lekin Unke parivaar aur mere parivaar ke beech bahut dushmani hai, Aur isliye hum ek dusre se shaadi nahi kar paaye. Humse jabardasti shaadi karwa rahe the, aur phir Vikram aur Maine tay kiya ki hum bhaag kar shaadi karenge

Om: Toh Vikram Hai Kahaan?

Gauri: (Tearing up) Wahi toh Hume nahi pata! Pata nahi iss bade sheher mein kaise dhoondenge unhe! Kuch samajh nahi aa raha! Aisi phasi hoon ki waapis Bareilly chali bhi gayi, toh woh log mere tukde-tukde kar denge!

Rudra: Accha aapke paas Vikram ka number toh hoga? Ya address?

Gauri: Number...N-Nahi, Vikram ne kaha tha ki mujhe ghar pe phone chod dena chahiye taaki mere ghar waale kabhi mujhe dhoond na paaye!

Dadi: Puttar, tere ghar waale itne pareshaan honge na? Itne dukh mein honge!

Gauri: Nahi Dadi, humaare gharwaale sirf Hume bech rahe the! Aur jiss shaks se humaari shaadi ho rahi thi, woh umar mein 25 Saal bada Hai! Bass humse chutkaara paana chah rahe the!

Shivaay: Accha...Tumhe Vikram ka last name pata hai?

Gauri: Unka pura naam Vikram Pandey Hai, Lekin iss sheher mein unhone alag naam rakha hai, taaki kissi ko shakh na ho ki hum Vikram ke saath hai

Om: Wow! Kya planning ki Hai! Lekin tumhaare ghar ke log? Unka Kya? Tumhaari maa? Tumhe nahi lagta tumne bewakoofi ki Hai?

Gauri: Hume nahi pata hai! Hume bass ee pata hai ki pyaar mein na koi bewakoofi hoti hai, na koi galti. Hume bhi khush rehne ka haq hai!

Shivaay: Accha O, relax! Gauri, Mumbai ki abaadi bahut badi Hai! Aise mein Vikram koi dhoondna itna mushkil hoga! Saal lag jaayenge! Tumhe uss ke baare mein aur kuch yaad Hai?

Gauri: Ek baat pata hai ki unka textile ka karobaar hai, bass!

Om: Iss information se kuch nahi milega! Arre iss sheher mein itne saare textile businesses hai!

Dadi: Accha shaant ho ja! Itna gussa kyun kar raha Hai?!

Gauri: (Getting up) Dekhiye, taqleef ke liye maafi chahte hai. Hume jaana chahiye

Anika: (Holding Gauri's hand) Ruko! Kahaan jaa rahi ho?

Gauri: Waapis Station mein, shaayad bunty waha Humaara intezaar kar raha hoga

Shivaay: (Looking at his watch) Raat ke 1 bajj gaye hai, Sab kuch bandh hoga. Iss waqt jaane ka koi Matlab nahi banta

Rudra: Toh phir Kya karein? Kaise milega Vikram?

Shivaay: Jab tak Vikram nahi milta, tab tak Gauri issi ghar mein rahegi. Yeh humaari zimmedaari hai

Pinky: Oh my mata, Shivaay! Kissi anjaan ladki ko aise ghar mein entry nahi dete! Especially jab kissi village ki ho!

Shivaay: Mom, kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap? Gauri issi ghar mein rahegi

Gauri: Nahi bhaiyya, hum khud jaayenge. Bunty station par hi hoga, hum bata rahe Hai! Humaara dil keh raha hai! Hum chalte hai, dhanyawaad---

Shivaay: Accha Tumhaari tassali ke liye, Om Tumhe Station le jaayega, Lekin agar woh bunty nahi mila, toh tum Om ke saath ghar waapis aaogi, theek hai?

Om: (Annoyed) Main kyun jaaon? Rudy, tu ja!

Gauri: Koi baat nahi, hum rickshaw le lenge

Dadi: Om, chup chaap Gauri ko le ja!

[Gauri silently followed Om, and sat in the car, as he drove along towards the railway station.

Om was annoyed by her presence.

Annoyed because he thought she was selfish for deceiving her family.

Gauri, on the other hand, hated how rude Om was to her, and simply couldn't stand him.]

*In the car*

Gauri: Aur kitna waqt lagega?

Om: Main bhagwaan nahi hoon! Mujhe Kya pata!

Gauri: Aapka dimaag kharab ho gaya Hai ka? Matlab hume jaante bhi nahi Hai, Aur iss lehje mein baat kar rahe hai!

Om: Shukar Hai tum jaisi khudgarz ladki ko nahi jaanta! Jo kissi Aur ke liye, apne hi parivaar ko dhoka de rahi hai!

Gauri: Dekhiye, aap humaare baare mein kuch nahi jaante! Bhalai issi mein hogi ki aap zubaan par lagaam lagaayie!

Om: Main kuch jaanta bhi nahi chahta! Bhaagkar shaadi karna itni sharm ki baat hai, pata Hai?

Gauri: Arre humaari jindagi Hai! Humaara faisla Hai! Aap taang mat adaayie! Gaadi chalaayie Jaldi, Hume bunty se Milna Hai!

[A few minutes later, the car stopped at the railway station, and Gauri immediately stepped out, whilst trying her best to not trip because of her heavy lehenga.

The station was deserted and completely empty, and Gauri walked around, while screaming for bunty's name.]

Gauri: (Screaming) Bunty! Bunty! Hum hai! Gauri!

[But Gauri's screams didn't help.

No one responded.

Gauri immediately collapsed on the floor, crying her heart out at what her life had now come to.

She left her family, left Bareilly and risked her life to come to Mumbai, but fate played such a sick joke on her.

She wanted Vikram by her side.

She left everything just for Vikram.

Where was Vikram? Would she ever find Vikram?

Gauri slowly wiped her tears and slowly got up, despite wearing a heavy lehenga. But her tired feet quickly gave up and she lost her balance and almost fell face first, on the hard ground, until she felt someone's arms catch her.

She looked up to find herself in Om's arms, as he carefully secured her in his arms.

Gauri slowly got up and walked towards the car, before Om and Gauri drove back home.]

*At the Oberoi mansion*

Om: Kona-Kona chaan Mara, lekin wahaan par koi nahi tha

Gauri: (Crying) Hume samajh nahi aa raha ki ab hum ka karenge? Kahaan dhoondenge Vikram ko? Ka hoga Humaara?

Om: Yeh sab ghar se bhagne se pehle sochna chahiye tha! Kisne kaha tumse ki bhaag kar shaadi karne ka idea accha hai?!

Shivaay: Enough! O, calm down! Gauri, tum tension mat lo, hum Vikram ko dhoondenge! Usse apni dulhania se milwaayenge!

Dadi: Accha bacchon, ab Sab so jao. Anika, Gauri ko kamra dikha de, Aur kuch kapde bhi

[Anika took Gauri to a room and gave her some clothes.

Gauri felt incredibly awkward at the Oberoi mansion.

How could she just stay here? She was an unwanted guest!

After helping Gauri settle, Anika returned to her room, and found Shivaay pacing up and down the room.]

*In Shivaay and Anika's room*

Anika: Shivaay, aap toh kissi par bhi bharosa karne se pehle hazaar baar sochte hai! Phir iss Gauri par vishwaas? Woh bhi itni Jaldi?

Shivaay: Mujhe Priyanka ki yaad dila rahi thi, Anika. Wahi Hansi, wahi nazaakat. Mujhe pata Hai woh sach keh rahi Hai, uski aankhon mein dekha Hai. Pata nahi kyun, Lekin mujhe lagta hai ki yeh humaare family ka bahut eham hissa banegi!

Anika: Woh Sab toh theek hai, Shivaay, lekin Vikram ko dhoondenge kaise?

Shivaay: Anika, iss duniya ka koi kaam nahi hai jo Shivaay Singh Oberoi nahi kar sakta! Vikram milega! Aur hum khud Gauri ka haath, uske haath mein rakhenge!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys! This song is the (un)official song of this book! So do give it a listen! It's by favourite singer Arijit Singh <3 I love this song so so much, and came up with the story while listening to this!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jrqbhYsDg8


It's quite important for this book!


Okayyy back to the story!

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*The next morning*

[Gauri woke up at around 7 in the morning, earlier than the rest of the family, and after freshening up, headed downstairs, to get a breathe of fresh air. She walked around the main hall, and then walked to the kitchen to get a glass of water.

She was about to take a sip, when she saw a tall man dressed in a black track suit, wearing a hood over his head, walking on the lawn. ]

Gauri: (Confused) Ee kaun hai? Aur subah-subah ghar ke baahar? Hey bhagwaan kahi ee chor toh nahi hai?

[Gauri tried her best to look at the face of the man, was simply unable to, and was convinced that a thief was planning to enter the house.]

Gauri: (To herself) Chor? Woh bhi Gauri Kumari Sharma ke hote hue! Hum bhi dekhte hai kisme itni himmat hai!

[Gauri's eyes followed the tall man, and then she saw him walk towards the house entrance. Gauri had to act fast!]

Gauri: (To herself) Ee toh ghar ki taraf hi aa raha hai, Gauri! Jaldi dimaag chala!

[Gauri's eyes then fell on the broom laying near the dustbin, and she instantly knew what to do! She picked up the broom and slowly walked and stood behind the door, waiting to pounce on the thief the moment he entered.

As the shadow of the man moved closer and closer, Gauri gradually raised the broom in her hand, ready to attack.

The moment the man's feet entered the house, Gauri hit the man's tall torso with the broom, making him fall.]

Gauri: (Hitting the man) Chor! Chor! Chor! Bhaiyya! Dadi! Chor aa gaya! Chor!

Gauri Kumari Sharma ke saamne chori karoge? Ab dekhna, phir se chori karne ke kaabil nahi chodenge!

Shivaay: (Running downstairs) Kya hua?! Security! Security! Khanna! Iss waqt Chor?

Rudra: (Removing thief's hood) Yeh security waale so rahe hai kya? Rukiye Gauri didi, main iss Chor ko seedha karunga---O?!

[Poor Gauri.

If only she knew that the 'thief' was none other than Om!

Gauri immediately dropped the broom and gasped in embarrassment.

How could she be so wrong?!]

Gauri: (To herself) Gayi bhains paani mein!

Shivaay: (Rushing towards Om) Om, tum theek toh ho? God, I hope it's not serious!

Om: (Angrily looking at Gauri) Aur nahi maarna? Maaro! Maaro!

Gauri: (Embarrassed) Woh...H-hume laga ki chor aa gaya tha...Sorry!

Shivaay: It's okay Gauri, tumne jaanboojhkar nahi kiya tha, it's alright!

Om: (Getting up) No it's not...Aaah!! It's not alright! Aafat kahiki!

Gauri: Shukar hai humne jhaadu ka istemaal kiya...Hum toh chaku lene waale the!

Om: (Shocked) Chaku?! Are you mad?

Rudra: Waise Gauri didi, aap Bareilly mein police ka kaam karti thi kya?

Gauri: (Giggling) Arre nahi, Rudra bhaiyya! Lekin hum apne ilaake ke pehredaar the! Ek baar, humaari dukaan se mithai ki 2 kg chori ho gayi thi!

Rudra: Phir aapne kya kiya?

Gauri: Arre ek jhaanp mein deewar pe sataa diya!

Rudra: Jhaanp? Woh kya hota hai?

Gauri: (Showing her palm) Arre jhaanp ka matlab nahi pata? Thappad!

Rudra: (Laughing) O, tu aaj bahut lucky hai! Warna teri haalat isse bhi badtar hoti!

Om: (Angrily) Rudra, tu bhi isski tarah pagal ho gaya hai! Uff! Ja rahaan hoon!

*Om leaves*

Gauri: Rudra bhaiyya, ek baat poochein?

Rudra: Didi, Rudra nahi, Rudy bulao! Aur poochiye!

Gauri: Ee humesha se sadu hai ka? Matlab, kal bhi itne gusse mein the ki hume darr tha ki kahi yeh hume na kha jaayein!

Rudra: (Laughing) Arre nahi! Inka aaj kal 'Angry young man' waala mood chal raha hai, isliye!

Gauri: Accha!

*At breakfast*

Gauri: (To Shivaay) Bhaiyya, hum soch rahe the ki hum aaj bhi station ke chakkar kaatenge, shaayad bunty mil jaayein?

Om: (Sarcastically) Haan, Haan, bunty ke paas aur koi kaam nahi hoga na! Station par tumhaara intezaar karne ke siwaai!

[Gauri looked at Om in annoyance, rolled her eyes at him, making him even more angry.]

Gauri: (To herself) Khadoos!

Shivaay: Gauri, I don't think uska koi faayda hai. Mere paas ek idea hai, kyun na hum Vikram ka sketch bana lete hai? Phir usse dhoondna thoda asaan ho jaayega, nahi?

Gauri: Haan bhaiyya, ee accha tarkeeb hai!

Shivaay: (To Om) Om, tum Vikram ka sketch banaane mein help karoge na?

Om: (Sarcastically) Of course! Lekin Shivaay, main sketch karunga kaise? kissi ne mere dono haath tod diye!

Gauri: (Innocently) Arre galti thi!

Rudra: (Whispering to Dadi) Dadi, iss Vikram ka pata nahi, lekin mujhe Om aur Gauri ki pairing kaafi cute lag rahi hai!

Dadi: (Whispering to Rudra) Mujhe bhi! Anika aur Shivaay bhi toh aise ladh te the!

Shivaay: O! Breakfast ke baad tum Gauri ke saath baithkar sketch banao, theek hai? Mujhe meeting ke liye jaana hai, Excuse me!

Gauri: (To herself) Hey sankarji! Iss khadoos ke saath akela baithna padega?! Bacha lo!

[After breakfast, Gauri stood in the kitchen, trying to figure out how she'd go to Om's room asking him to sketch Vikram.

He hated her sight, and honestly, so did she.

But she did feel slightly bad that Om was beaten so badly! ]

Gauri: (To herself) Hum haldi doodh banaate hai! Phir shaayad unka gussa thoda kam ho jaayega aur woh Vikram ki tasveer banaayenge! Wahi karte hai!

[Gauri took a glass of haldi doodh and walked to Om's room, in hopes that he'd make Vikram's sketch.

Gauri would be lying if she said if she wasn't absolutely terrified.

She slowly knocked on the door, and after his approval, entered the room.]

Om: (Turning around) Haan toh---Tum?! Tum andar kaise aayi?!

Gauri: (Sarcastically) Khidki se! Kamaal hai, aapko wahaan darwaaz najar nahi aa raha!

Om: Dekho, aaj ka din tumne pehle hi kharaab kar diya hai, mujhe aur tang mat karo!

Gauri: Oh hello! Aap ko ka lagta hai? Ki aapke peeche padhne ke alava humaare paas aur koi kaam nahi hai? Hum bass aapko haldi doodh dene aaye the...

Om: Haldi doodh? Mujhe nahi chahiye! Kya pata, issme zeher mila diya ho!

Gauri: (Shocked) Haw! Ka bakwaas kar rahe hai aap!

Om: Bakwaas nahi, sach keh raha hoon!

Gauri: (Placing the glass on the table) Nahi ek minute, aapki humse samasya ka hai? Kal se bilqul nandi bail ki tarah vyavhaar kar rahe hai!

Om: (Confused) Nandi what?

Gauri: Nandi bail! Humaare Bareilly mein ek bail hai, jiska naam Nandi hai. Bilqul aapki tarah hai! Sadu aur khadoos!

Om: (Angry) Just shut up!

Gauri: Nahi, humaari baat puri nahi hui hai! Hum pagal hai ka, ki jaanboojkhar kissi ki pitaai kar denge? Chor ki tarah kaale kaale kapdo mein ghumne ki ka jaroorat thi? Upar se sar dhakaa tha!

Om: Accha, matlab meri galti hai! Meri galti hai ki main apne hi kapde, apne hi ghar mein pehnu, right?

Gauri: Arre humaari jagah koi aur hota, toh woh bhi sochta ki ghar mein chor aa gaya hai!

Om: Nahi, tumhaari jagah toh koi le hi nahi sakta, kyun ki normal log, aisa nahi karte!

Gauri: Aapko lagta hai ki hum pagal hai?

Om: Lagta nahi, yakeen ho gaya hai!

Gauri: Hum aapse behas karke apna samay barbaad nahi karna chahte! Aap humaare Vikram ki tasveer banaayenge ya nahi?

Om: Nahi! Ab kya karogi?

Gauri: (Angry) Haan toh theek hai! Hume bhi aapki madad ki jaroorat nahi hai! Khadoos!

Om: Kya bulaaya mujhe?

Gauri: (Loudly) Jaakar kaan ka ilaaj karwaayie phir! khadoos!

[Gauri storms out of the room, while Om is left fuming and angrier than ever!]

Gauri: (To herself) Badi aayi Haldi doodh dene! Hum khood hi Vikram ko dhoondenge!

[Gauri was headed to leave, until she bumped into Rudra on the way.]


(Continued in next chapter)

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Hope you guys like where this is going! I totally understand if you're taking some time to like it, but I promise, the story is really interesting!

Thank you for reading!

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CHAPTER 3:

RECAP:

[Gauri storms out of the room, while Om is left fuming and angrier than ever!]

Gauri: (To herself) Badi aayi Haldi doodh dene! Hum khood hi Vikram ko dhoondenge!

[Gauri was headed to leave, until she bumped into Rudra on the way.]

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Rudra: Arre, Gauri didi, aap kahaan ja rahi hai?

Gauri: Rudy bhaiyya...woh...vikram ko dhoondne

Rudra: Akele? O ne Vikram ki tasveer bana li kya?

Gauri: (Annoyed) Arre nahi Rudy bhaiyya! Itne khadoos hai ki hum ka bole! Pata nahi humse ka dushmani hai!

Rudra: (Laughing) Aap dono itne cute ho! Chalo, main O ko bata deta hoon, chalo!

[Rudra walked to Om's room while Gauri silently followed.]

*At Om's room*

Rudra: O, Vikram ka sketch nahi banaana hai Kya?

Om: Rudy, main Vikram se shaadi kar raha hoon Kya?

Gauri: (Annoyed) Dekha! Itne tevar dikha rahe hai! Oh mister, hum mare nahi jaa rahe Hai! Vikram ki tasveer ka bandobast khud kar lenge!

Rudra: Tum dono ko kissi daily soap mein hona chahiye tha!

Om: Shut up Rudra!

Gauri: Rudy bhaiyya, hum ja rahe Hai, Vikram ko dhoondne!

Rudra: Didi, Vikram koi halwa nahi hai, jo kahin par bhi mil jaayega! Mumbai ki abaadi jaante ho?

Gauri: (Tearing up) Toh phir ka karein? Hume kuch samajh nahi aa raha! Itne ghabraye hue honge woh! Hum jald unke paas jaana chahte hai, hum iss ghar mein kab tak rahenge?

*Jhanvi enters*

Jhanvi: Jab tak Vikram nahi milta, Gauri. Tum tension mat lo, Vikram mil jaayega

Gauri: (Crying) Kaise milenge maa ji? Na asli naam jaanti hoon, na uska pata...ka karoon?

Jhanvi: Gauri, tum Om ko Vikram ki description batao, Aur woh usse sketch kar lega, theek hai?

Om:Mom Lekin---

Jhanvi: Om, tum uski help karoge, main keh rahi hoon!

*Jhanvi leaves*

Om: (Pulling out paper) Vikram ka description batao, Jaldi! Mujhe Aur bhi bahut kaam hai

Gauri: Haan toh humne kaha tha na ki Hume aapki madad ki jaroorat nahi hai!

Rudra: Arre bass karo aap dono! Didi, Vikram ka skin tone kaisa Hain?

Gauri: Gehua

[Gauri rattled Vikram's description, whilst Om sketched a picture of Vikram.

After an hour or so, the sketch was done.]

Gauri: (Smiling) Haan! Haan! Ee Vikram Hai! Humaare Vikram!

Rudra: Wah Kya baat hai! Maanna padega, Banda kaafi handsome hai!

Gauri: (Blushing) Woh toh hai...

Rudra: Aap toh pehle se Sharma rahi hai! Accha ek kaam Karte Hai, aaj aap Aur Om south Bombay ke chakkar kaat lo! Tab tak main Vikram ki tasveer police commissioner ko bhejta hoon! I'm sure woh humaari help kar paayenge!

Gauri and Om: (Looking at each other) Nahi! Isske saath toh Bilqul bhi nahi!

Rudra: Toh phir theek hai! Yahi par baitho, Aur phir Vikram ki kissi Aur se shaadi ho jaayegi!

Gauri: Accha, theek hai!

Om: (Rolling his eyes) Main ready hokar aata hoon

[Soon enough, Om and Gauri were in the same car, and boy, was it awkward!

But Gauri wasn't fine with this hatred and anger spewing between them. She had to break the ice and set things straight!]

*In the car*

Gauri: Dekhiye, hum jaante hai ki aap Hume pasand nahi karte, Aur aap Hume bahut hi khudgarz ladki samajhte Hai, Lekin aap humaara ateet nahi jaante. Jahaan se hum aaye hai, wahaan par aurat ko sirf cheez maana jaata hai. Hum Vikram se bahut mohabbat Karte Hai, aur itni door isliye aaye hai Kyun ki hum khush rehab chahte hai!

Om: Tumhe kuch Saabit karne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Mujhe koi farak nahi padta!

Gauri: Acchi baat hai! Farak nahi padhna chahiye! Lekin badtameezi se baat karni ki bhi ka jaroorat hai? Itna gussa kyun aa raha hai hum par?

Om: Kyun ki tum ek matlabi ladki ho!

Gauri: Aapko agar sacchai bata bhi de, tab bhi aap humaari baat nahi maanenge! Chodiye!

Om: (To himself) Pata nahi Kahaan phansa hoon!

[Om and Gauri scanned the whole of south Bombay, trying to find Vikram, but all their efforts were in vain! They even informed the police station, but they were yet to respond.

What was Gauri going to do? How would she find Vikram?

Gauri was tired, but most importantly sad. She missed Bareilly, her mother, and most importantly, Vikram.

She sacrificed far too much, and if she couldn't find Vikram, then where would she go? She couldn't go back to Bareilly. They would kill her.

She couldn't live at the Oberoi mansion for long either.

What could she possibly do?

That night, Gauri sat on her bed crying, whilst looking at Vikram's picture.]

Gauri: (Crying at Vikram's photo) Kahaan hai aap? Kyun shankarji phir se hum dono ke beech nayi samasya khadi kar rahi Hai?

[Just then, there was a gentle knock on the door, and Anika entered. Gauri quickly wiped her tears, but Anika immediately knew she was crying.]

Anika: (Consoling Gauri) Gauri! Kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Gauri: (Crying) K-kuch nahi didi, b-bass, Vikram...

Anika: Vikram mil jaayega, Gauri, bahut jald mil jaayega! Tum tension mat lo!

[Just then, Om who was passing through heard both their voices and decided to eavesdrop into their conversation.]

Gauri: Hume pata hai, ki aap sab hume bahut besharam Aur matlabi ladki samajhte hai, lekin hum vaada Karte Hai ki hum bahut jald yahaan se chale jaayenge!

Anika: Chup! Pagal ladki! Pyaar karna koi paap nahi hota Hai, Gauri!

Gauri: (Crying) Didi, Vikram bahut acche insaan Hai! Nek, imaandaar, acche dil ke! Bahut pyaar Karte Hai humse!

Anika: Toh tum tension kyun Le rahi ho? S Accha pyaar kabhi dhoka nahi deta, Gauri!

Gauri: (Crying) Jaanti hoon, Didi! Hum bahut mohabbat karte Hai unse! Khood se bhi jyaada bharosa Hai unn par!

Anika: Toh phir ro kyun rahi ho, baba!

Gauri: (Crying) Hum badi mushkil se bhaag paayein hai, didi! Ghar mein sirf ma jaanti thi ki hum bhaag rahe Hai, Aur woh bhi chahti thi ki hum Vikram se shaadi karein!

Anika: Oh! Chalo shukar hai! Ma ko toh bataakar aayi ho!

Gauri: Haan didi, Isliye Vikram ko dhoondna bahut jaroori hai! Jab woh milenge, tab hum shaadi ke baad Ma ko apne paas la sakte hai! Warna Bareilly mein unka bahut bura haal hota!

Anika: (Wiping Gauri's tears) Vikram mil jaayega, zaroor milega! Accha ab Rona band karo, Chalo, khaane ke liye aa jao

Gauri: A-abhi aate hai, aap chaliye!

[As Om overheard this, he had come to realize that Gauri was indeed saying the truth, and he felt slightly bad about the way he spoke to her.

He was slightly happy that at least Gauri's mother knew about her whereabouts, and he immediately understood how important it was to find Vikram.

Not for Gauri, but for her mothers' safety!

Om knew what he had to do next.

He would find Vikram.

At any cost.]

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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
CHAPTER 4:

*The next day*

Gauri: (To Shivaay) Bhaiyya, police commissioner ka phone aaya? Koi khabar mili?

Shivaay: Nahi, Gauri. Apparently Mumbai ke records mein Vikram Pandey naam ke bahut saare aadmi hai, lekin uski tasveer humaare tasveer se nahi mil rahi

Gauri: Toh ab?

Shivaay: Ab Hume bass intezaar karna hoga. Gauri, Vikram ke koi rishtedaar honge na? Bareilly mein? Unse Vikram ka pataa pooch sakti ho?

Gauri: Agar pooch paate toh jaroor pochte, Lekin jaise hi woh humaari awaaj sunenge, phone kaat denge. Bahut nafrat Karte Hai humse!

Anika: Toh kyun na hum unka pappu banaakar Vikram ka pataa jaan lein?

Gauri: (Confused) Pappu? Matlab?

Anika: Matlab ki main unhe phone karke yeh kahungi ki main income tax ki officer hoon, aur phir Vikram ka ataa-pataa pooch lungi!

Rudra: Kya baat hai bhabhi!

Gauri: Idea accha hai lekin...

Anika: Lekin?

Gauri: Humaare paas Vikram ke gharwaalo ka number nahi hai

Shivaay: Oh god! Ab kya?

Gauri: Wahi toh Hume samajh nahi aa raha!

Shivaay: Main commissioner sahib se kahunga ki woh Mumbai ke har police station ko alert karein, Vikram ka pata Milna chahiye, woh bhi bahut jald

Gauri: Ji, theek hai.

Shivaay: Accha, Mujhe office ke liye nikalna hai, excuse me! Gauri, kuch bhi ho, mujhe call karna, theek hai?

Gauri: Ji bhaiyya

*Shivaay leaves*

Anika: Gauri, main abhi aati hoon, Dadi bula rahi hai

Gauri: Ji didi, aap jaayie, hum Vikram ko dhoondne ke liye nikal jaate hai

Anika: Accha ruko, main driver saath bhejungi

Gauri: Arre nahi Didi, hum rickshaw se chale jaayenge, aap kyun khamakha taqleef le rahi hai?

Anika: Arre, issme taqleef ki Kya baat hai? Ruko main driver ko---

Om: (Interrupting Anika) Bhabhi mainGauri ke saath chalunga

Gauri: (Confused) Ji?

Anika: Accha theek hai!

[As Anika left, Gauri looked at Om in a confused manner.

What suddenly happened to him?

Why was he so willing to help Gauri, out of the blue? ]

Om: (Looking at Gauri) Tumhe taiyaar nahi hona Hai Kya?

Gauri: Taiyaar? Kiss liye?

Om: Vikram ko dhoondne! Main gaadi mein tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon, Jaldi aa jaana

*Om leaves*

Gauri: (To herself) Inhe achaanak se ka ho gaya hai? Khair, Tujhe Kya? Tujhe toh sirf Vikram ko dhoondna Hai!

[Gauri quickly changed and headed downstairs, before walking towards the car and sitting inside.

As she sat inside, Om pulled out a huge sheet of paper and opened it.]

Gauri: (Confused) Ee ka hai?

Om: Maine yeh kal raat banaya tha. Iss map mein hum woh jagah mark karenge, jahaan hum gaye hai, taaki Vikram tak asaani se pahunch sake. For starters, I think Hume waapis railway station ke paas jaana chahiye, shaayad wahaan bunty ka kuch pata ho? Jab bunty mil jaayega tab Vikram asaani se---

Gauri: (Shocked) Ka ho gaya hai aapko? Achaanak humaari madad kyun karna chah rahe Hai?

Om: Kya Matlab?

Gauri: Matlab kal tak toh humaare baare mein anaap-shanaap bakk rahe the; aur ab achaanak humaari madad karna chahte hai? Ka hua?

Om: (Looking away) Kuch bhi toh nahi...

Gauri: Aap humse nazarein kyun chupa rahe Hai?

Om: Dekho...I'm sorry

Gauri: (Confused) Hum kuch samjhe nahi...

Om: (Apologetic) umhaare baare mein kuch jaane bina galat raay bana di thi...I...Mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai...Maine tumhaare saath bahut badtameezi ki, I'm sorry

Gauri: (Surprised) Ek din mein itna badlaav? Aisa ka jaan liya aapne?

Om: Woh...Kal raat maine tumhaari aur bhabhi ki baat sunn li thi aur---

Gauri: Aap kaana-foosi kar rahe the?

Om: Nahi, main tumhaare room se guar raha tha aur tumhaari awaaz aayi toh...

Gauri: (Looking away) Toh isliye maafi maang rahe hai?

Om: (Adorably) Nahi...Main sach mein maafi maang raha hoon...Maine jo kuch bhi kaha, uske liye I'm sorry

Gauri: Koi baat nahi...kar diya maaf

[It was quite shocking.

How both of them immediately turned a new leaf, in just 5 minutes.

Just yesterday, they couldn't look eye to eye, but now, they just started being civil to one another!]

Om: Accha, tumne kabhi bunty ko pehle dekha hai? Woh shakal se kaise dikhta hai?

Gauri: Nahi...Bunty toh Mumbai ka hi hai, isliye hum kabhi usse mile hi nahi

Om: Accha, tumne kaha tha ki woh taxi driver hai na?

Gauri: Haan...lekin kaunsi taxi chalaata hai, o nahi pata

Om: Accha chalo usse kuch mil jaayein!

[The car halted in front of the railway station and Om and Gauri immediately hopped off ready to focus on their mission.]

*At the railway station*

Gauri: (To a shopkeeper) Bhaisaab, yahaan par taxi kaha milega?

Shopkeeper: Uss taraf behen! Wahaan par saare taxi waale apni gaadi khade karte hai

Gauri: Ji, dhanyawaad!

[Om and Gauri walked towards the taxi stand, where several taxis were parked.]

*At the taxi stand*

Gauri: (To a taxi driver) Bhaiyya, yahaan par bunty naam ka driver hai ka?

Taxi driver: Bunty? Naam suna suna sa lag raha hai, ek minute!

Kumar! Yahaan aa zara!

Kumar: Kya hua?

Taxi driver: Yeh bunty ke baare mein pooch rahi hai, tune woh naam kahi suna hai kya?

Kumar: Bunty? Haan! Arre woh toh yehi hai!

Gauri: (Shocked) Ka?! Kahaan? Hume unse milna hai, abhi!

Kumar: Accha rukiye, rukiye. Bunty! Bunty! Iss taraf!

[As Bunty came, Gauri rushed towards him to introduce herself.]

Gauri: Bunty! Hum Gauri! Yaad hai? Hum 4 din pehle Bareilly se aaye the? Vikram ke liye?

Bunty: (Confused) Ji? Aapko shaayad galat faimi hui hai

Gauri: Galat faimi? Nahi, nahi! Hum Gauri hai! Gauri Kumari Sharma! Vikram ne aapko humaare baare mein bataaya hoga!

Bunty: Dekhiye madam, na main kissi Vikram ko jaanta hoon, aur na toh maine kabhi aapka naam suna hai. Iss sheher mein bahut saare bunty hai, aapko zaroor galat faimi hui hai!

Gauri: (Frustrated) Arre aise kaise galat faimi hui hai! Hume pata hai ki aap bunty hai! Arre humaare Vikram ke dost bunty! woh bhi taxi chalaata hai, aur 4 din pehle, issi station par aane waale the, hume vikram ke paas le jaane! Sach bataayie, aap wohi bunty hai na?

Bunty: (Irritated) Arre ajeeb zabardasti hai! Jab main aapse keh raha hoon ki main woh bunty nahi hoon, jisski aapko talaash hai, aapko meri baat samajh kyun nahi aa rahi?

Gauri: (Frustrated) Kyun ki hume pata hai ki aap jhoot bol rahe hai! Hume Vikram ke paas le jaayie, haath jod rahe hai!

[Gauri began crying and pleaded in front of Bunty, who was getting more and more irritated. Om, who was standing behind immediately came forward and caught Gauri by the shoulders, before she collapsed on the ground.]

Bunty: (To Om) Aap samajhdaar lag rahe hai, isliye aapse keh rahe ki please inhe samjhaayie ki jiss Bunty ki unko talaash hai, woh main nahi hoon

Om: Ji, pareshaani ke liye maaf kijiye, aap jaa sakte hai

Gauri: (To Om) Aap unhe jaane kyun de rahe hai?! Hum bata rahe hai ki woh Bunty hai! Woh jaanta hai ki Vikram kahaan par hai!

Om: (Consoling Gauri) Gauri, utho, woh bunty nahi hai, chalo

[Gauri's shoulders slipped off his hands as she collapsed on the floor and began wailing uncontrollably and erratically.

She was frustrated and beyond tired.

It had been 4 days.

4 long days without Vikram.

Her Vikram.

Why was god playing this game with her? She had sacrificed her everything just so she could spend the rest of her life with the man she truly loved, Vikram.

Seeing her cry, Om slowly crouched down behind her and placed his arms over her shoulders, trying to console her. Gauri slightly turned and held on to his arm, before crying endlessly.

Om had no idea how to react. He had never done this before.

He had never been so proximal with a girl, let alone place his hands on her shoulders!

As she cried, he slowly placed a hand on his head, to calm her down.

Om was unusually surprised.

How could you love someone so much?

How could Gauri love Vikram so much that even his absence made her so weak and feeble?

Om had never fallen in love before, and to him, this was completely new and unusual.]

Gauri: (Crying) 4 din ho gaye hai! 4 din! Pata nahi hume Vikram milega bhi nahi! Kahaan jaayenge? Ghar bhi toh nahi jaa sakte!

Om: Vikram milega, Gauri! Tum himmat nahi haar sakti! Vikram bhi toh issi haal mein hoga, na? Vikram bahut jald milega, Gauri, bahut jald!

Gauri: (Crying) Pata nahi shankarji ne humaari qismat mein Vikram ka saath likha hai bhi ya nahi!

Om: Gauri, aisi baatein mat karo. Chalo, utho, hume aur bhi kahi jaana hai, Vikram ko dhoondne

Gauri: (Emotionless) Hume ghar jaana hai

Om: Kya? Kyun?

Gauri: Bass, jaana hai

Om: Theek hai, hum ghar chalenge, chalo

Gauri: (Getting up) Nahi, hum yahaan ki baat nahi kar rahe hai. Hume ghar jaana hai, Bareilly.

Om: What? Kyun?

Gauri:(Crying) Hume jaana hai!

Om: Gauri, tum Bareilly chali gayi toh woh log tumhe maar denge!

Gauri: (Crying) Toh ab kaunsa zinda hai, hum?! Hum waapis jaayenge, uss buddhe se shaadi karke zindagi kaat lenge!

Om: Tum Bareilly nahi jaoogi! Sirf 4 din hue hai, aur itni jaldi haar maan gayi?

Gauri: Toh ka karein?! Vikram ka koi ataa pataa nahi mil raha, aur yahaan reh rahein hai toh sirf bojh bankar! Hume Bareilly jaana hi padega!

[As Gauri tried walking away, Om brought her close, holding her by the shoulders, and looked deeply into her eyes.

He had never looked someones eyes before, but somehow, Gauri's eyes drew him in.

Her red and teary eyes spoke to him.]

Om: Tum bojh nahi ho, samjhi? Main vaada karta hoon ki main Vikram ko dhoond nikalunga! Aur uska haath tumhaare haath mein rakhunga!

Gauri: (Crying)

Om: Chalo, ghar chalo ab

[Gauri's feeble legs got weak and she almost fell as walked, until Om grabbed her and carried her in his arms.

Gauri was taken aback by Om's nature.

How was he so caring and nice? They just met 4 days ago (with an incredibly rough start) and despite that, he made her a huge promise.

A promise to find Vikram.

At that moment, Gauri was beginning to understand the man Om was, and she was slowly beginning to appreciate him.]


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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
CHAPTER 5:

*The next day*

[It was about 11 in the morning and Gauri came downstairs to find the family standing on opposite sides of the room.

Dadi, Shivaay, Jhanvi, Rudra and Shakti were on one side, while Om, Anika, Pinky and Tej were on the other side.

Gauri figured that it was probably 'family time' so she made her way back up until she heard Shivaay's voice.]

Shivaay: Gauri, kahaan jaa rahi ho?

Gauri: Woh...Maaf kijiye, aap logo ke kaam mein dakhalandaazi nahi karna chahte the...

Dadi: Uff! Kaunsi dakhalandaazi? Tu bhi toh iss parivaar ka hissa bann chuki Hai! Chal, hum antaakshari khel rahe Hai, tumhaara hi intezaar tha!

Anika: Gauri humaare team mein hogi!

Shivaay: Ji, Nahi, Gauri humaare team mein hogi!

Dadi: Uffo! Bass bhi karo! Gauri, Anika ke team mein jaa!

Rudra: (Confidently) Waise aap logo ko bata doon ki Rudy antaakshari ka champion hai!

Anika: Accha? Woh khelne ke baad pata chalega! Gauri, aa jao!

[Gauri walked towards the other side and sat next to Anika.]

Rudra: Accha game doosri team shuru karegi! Kyun Dadi?

Dadi: Haan! Haan! Kaun aana chahega?

Om: Anika bhabhi pehle jaayegi! Jaayie, bhabhi

Shivaay: Haarne ke liye taiyyaar ho jaao, Anika!

Anika: Mujhe woh aapse kehna chahiye, billuji!

[Shivaay walked towards Anika and whispered a movie into her ear, and after he did, Anika tried her best to control her laughter while she was enacting the movie.

After several tries, Anika's team finally guessed the movie and won a point!

The game went on and on, and then, it was Om's turn.]

Rudra: Accha O, aapki baari hai! Aa jao!

[Om stood up and walk towards Rudra who then whispered a movie name in his name.]

Rudra: (Whispering) Kuch kuch hota hai

Om: (Confused) Arre, woh kaise act karun?

Rudra: Wahi toh challenge hai! Chaliye, chaliye!

[Om put 4 fingers up, indicating the number of words in the movie title, but somehow, he was somehow unable to enact the entire movie.]

Anika: Om, tum kya act kar rahe ho, kuch samajh nahi aa raha!

Om: Yaar, main koshish kar raha hoon lekin aap logo ko samajh nahi aa raha!

Rudra: Accha Om, tu chahe toh kissi team member ki help le sakta hai

Anika: Yeh accha hai! Gauri, tum jao, help karo, tum filmo mein acchi ho na?

Gauri: Haan theek hai!

[Gauri stood up and walked towards Om who then bent down and whispered the movie name to her.

The whole family looked at both of them in confusion. What were they planning so much?

Om then went on one knee, and placed his hand in the air, trying to play the piano, while he placed his other hand forward.

They were trying to enact the scene from kuch kuch hota hai!

Gauri then hesitantly placed her hand in his, and Om slowly stood up, before placing his other hand on the small of his back, slightly startling her.]

Anika: (Excited) Mil gaya! Mil gaya! kuch kuch hota hai!

[As they gazed into each others eyes, they somehow completely forgot the world around them. Almost like they didn't even know where they were.

It took them a while until they realised where they were and they consciously moved away from each other, trying to pretend as though they didn't just share a 'moment'.]

Rudra: Kuch kuch hota hai ke chakkar mein, inn dono ka Shahrukh-Kajol moment ho gaya, nahi?

Anika: Haan, bilqul!

[Om and Gauri immediately returned to their seats, Gauri consciously sitting away from Om, to maintain a respectable distance.]

Shivaay: Accha chalo, kuch aur karte hai!

Anika: Jaise?

Dadi: Om! Puttar! Itne dino se tumhaari shayari nahi suni hai! Ek ho jaaye!

Rudra: Waise Gauri didi, aapko pata hai Om kamaal ke shayar hai! Isliye unki baatein itni complicated hoti hai!

Om: (Annoyed) Shut up Rudra!

Rudra: Accha theek hai! chal, aaj ek shayari ho jaye!

Om: Rudy, Shayari maggi nahi hai, jo 2 minute mein bann jaayegi! Inspiration chahiye, ambience chahiye, feel chahiye!

Gauri: Arre, inhe chodiye! Aapko pata hai, hum bhi kamaal ke shayar hai!

Anika: Kya baat hai! Tum toh chuppi rustom nikli!

Rudra: Wah! Toh ek ho jaaye phir!

Gauri: (Clearing her throat) Arj kiya hai...

Om: It's arz! A-r-z

Gauri: (Rolling her eyes) Arj kiya hai!

Anika: Irshaad!

Gauri: Kaafi dino se peena chah rahe the, chai ka ek pyaala...

Om: (rolling his eyes) Pehle line sunte hi pata chalta hai ki kya ghatiya shayari hogi!

Gauri: Aap chup nahi reh sakte?!

Dadi: Aage bol puttar!

Gauri: Kaafi dino se peena chah rahe the, chai ka ek pyaala...

Humaari favorite heroine ka naam hai, Madhubala!

Kya shayari likhi hai na!

[Om glared at Gauri in disgust, while the entire family laughed at how terrible her shayari was!]

Rudra: (Laughing) Wah! Kya baat hai! Log toh mohabbat,dosti par shayari likhte hain, aapne toh chai par likh di!

Om: (Annoyed) Please iss bakwaas ko shayari mat bulao! It's insulting!

Rudra: Isliye toh aapse keh rahe the ki aap ek acchi si shayari sunaayie, lekin aap maan hi nahi rahe the!

Om: Haan aur maine bhi kaha tha ki shayari 2 minute mein nahi banti! Filhaal mere paas koi inspiration bhi nahi hai!

Gauri: Arre toh issme ka hai! Hum ek aur bolte hai---

Anika: Nahi! Nahi! Ho gaya! Ho gaya!

Dadi: Arre, main bhool hi gayi! Kal holi hai! Tum logo ko yaad hai na?

Rudra: Arre, yaad kaise nahi hoga Dadi! Maine bhaang ka bhi bandobast kar liya hai!

Dadi: Tum toh ho hi iss layak! Kal jaldi uthna! Subah subah pooja hai, aur phir mehmaan bhi aayenge

Anika: Dadi, maine sab kuch organize kar liye hai, aap tension mat lijiye. Gauri, tum kal bahut mazein karogi!

Gauri: Hume holi bahut pasand hai didi!

Accha, bhaiyya, Police commissioner se koi khabar mili?

Shivaay: Nahi, Gauri. Om, tum aur Gauri kal kahi gaye the na? Wahaan se kya mila?

Om: Kuch nahi mila, bhaiyya! Lekin haan, hume lagta hai ki railway station par bunty tha

Shivaay: Matlab? Tumne usse dekha?

Gauri: Dekha, aur baat bhi ki! Lekin woh kabse ee keh raha hai ki woh bunty nahi hai, aur woh Vikram ko nahi jaanta! Lekin humaara dil hume bata raha tha ki woh jhoot bol raha hai!

Shivaay: Tumhe woh mila kaise?

Gauri: Woh taxi driver tha! Isliye hume lag raha tha ki woh wahi bunty hai, jisski hume talaash hai!

Shivaay: (Angry) Sach toh main ugalwaaoonga! Om, Gauri, mere saath chalo! Hum abhi railway station jaayenge aur uss Bunty ka sach pata karke rahenge!

[Immediately, Om, Gauri and Shivaay got into the car and sped through, to reach the railway station 20 minutes later.

Gauri was anxious, but happy at the same time.

After Bunty would speak the truth, she'd finally be able to meet Vikram! Her days of waiting would finally come to an end!

They stepped out of the vehicle the moment they reached and headed towards the area where all the taxis were parked.]

Shivaay: Kya yehi woh jagah hai?

Gauri: (Anxious) Haan bhaiyya, yehi woh jagah hai. Aur uss aadmi ne hume bunty ke baare mein bataaya

[Shivaay walked towards the taxi driver standing, whilst Om and Gauri closely followed.]

Shivaay: (To the taxi driver) Yahaan bunty naam ka driver hai kya?

Taxi driver: Bunty? Arre woh kal hi toh madam se mile the!

Shivaay: Haan, lekin aaj main usse milna chahta hoon. Jao, usse bulaao

Taxi driver: Aapne thodi deri kar di saahab

Shivaay: What do you mean?

Taxi driver: Kal shaam ko bunty ne apna isteefaa de diya aur apne gaaon chala gaya

Gauri: (Shocked) Ka?! Chala gaya? Matlab hum sahi the! Woh wahi bunty tha!

Om: Usska gaaon kahaan par hai?

Taxi driver: Yeh toh nahi pata mujhe

Shivaay: Accha tumhaare paas uska number ya pata hai?

Taxi: Haan number hai, yeh lijiye

[Shivaay dialled the number but before it rang, he received a message saying that the number was switched off.]

Gauri: Ka hua? Phone mila?!

Shivaay: (Frustrated) Switched off aa raha hai!Shit!

Gauri: (Crying) Hume yahaan aana hi nahi chahiye tha...humaari hi mat maari gayi thi! Ab hume vikram kabhi nahi milega!

Shivaay: Gauri, tum himmat nahi haar sakti! Do you understand? Hum bunty ko dhoond nikaalenge! Tum jaao, gaadi mein baitho, hum abhi aate hai

[Gauri walked away and sat in the car, while Om and Shivaay observed her from a distance.]

Om: (Folding his arms) Shivaay, mujhe kuch gudbud lag raha hai

Shivaay: Mujhe bhi. I don't know why, but right now, I feel like Vikram is a really shady character

Om: Lekin maajra kya hai? Yeh bunty achaanak kyun bhaag gaya?

Shivaay: Wahi toh samajh nahi aa raha! Main police commissioner ko yeh number dunga. I'm sure woh usse track kar paayenge

Om:(Looking at Gauri) I bass hope ki jo kuch bhi ho, accha ho. Kal Gauri ki haalat kaafi badtar thi

Shivaay: Lekin tum bhi toh the, usska khyaal rakhne

Om: What? What do you mean?

Shivaay: You know what I mean, O. Or at least aaj ki antaakshari ke baad toh pata chal gaya hoga

Om: (Rolling his eyes) Aap logo ke dimaag mein pata nahi kya bhara hai! Ab chalein?

Shivaay: Chalein!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER 6:

*The next day*

[The Oberoi mansion woke up with a startle to the sound of a loud conch. A few moments later, they heard the sounds of bells ringing and immediately rushed downstairs.

They found Gauri standing in the front of god's altar, holding an aarti thali in her hand.

Dadi couldn't stop smiling at sight. Her love for Gauri had multiplied ten-folds!
Anika and Shivaay looked at each other and smiled, because they had come to realize how close Gauri had become to them, and Om?

Om was just staring.

It had almost hit him that she was so beautiful. Dressed in a pretty yellow suit, wearing a bindi on her forehead, and her hair on one side, the sight was enough to take anyone's breath away.]

Gauri: (Applying teeka to Shivaay) Humaare yahaan holi ki shuruat pooja se hoti hai

[Gauri proceeded to put teeka on everyone, and when she reached Om, an unusual feeling came over her. She stood on her tip toes and whilst applying teeka on him, felt his gaze on her. The moment her fingers touched his skin, both of them immediately moved away from each, almost as though they had been electrocuted. ]

Gauri: Ah!

Om: (Confused) T-tum...yeh c-current...

Gauri: (Confused) Wohi toh! Aapse current?

Rudra: (Whispering to dadi) Isse kehte hai electrifying chemistry, kyun dadi?

Dadi: chup kar! Khamakha itne khwaab mat dekh! Gauri kissi aur se pyaar karti hai, bhool gaya?

Rudra: Lekin chemistry toh O ke saath ho rahi hai na!

Gauri: (Confused) H-hum...h-hum abhi aate hai

Om: (Confused) Haan, main bhi...

[Gauri and Om walked the opposite direction, and the whole family witnessed the scene.]\

Anika: (Excited) Please koi bata do sirf mujhe nahi lagta ki dono ki jodi ekdum khidkitod hai!

Shivaay: Hum aisa soch bhi nahi sakte! Gauri Vikram se pyaar karti hai, so please, aise khwaab na dekhein!

[A few hours later, everyone met again downstairs as the guests arrived.

Everyone stood in the lawn, talking and chit chatting, and Gauri stood alone in the corner, observing everyone.

Suddenly, she felt a strong force of color on her cheeks and turned around to see Rudra, who had mischief in his eyes.]

Gauri: Rudy bhaiyya! Ab toh badla lekar hi rahenge!

[Gauri filled both her hands with color and began chasing Rudra, ready to color him, but as she ran, her body hit a tall and sturdy frame making him and her fall on the grass below.

Gauri found herself on top of Om, with the color's on her hand staining his crisp white lucknowi kurta and her hair. His hands were invariably placed on her upper back, to give her support, and as he looked into her eyes, he saw the strands of hair that covered her delicate eyes.

Slowly, his hands reached her face and pushed her hair behind her ears, revealing her pretty yet innocent eyes.

For the first time, Om felt like something was happening to him.

Something unusual happened to him when he looked at her. Something he hadn't felt before.

Gauri knew this wasn't right. She was here for Vikram, and she couldn't hurt him and Om. She immediately got up, trying to pretend nothing ever happened, and Om too, did the same.]

Gauri: Woh hum...Hum Rudy Bhaiyya par ee rang daalne waale the

Om: (Applying color on her cheek) Koi baat nahi.

Happy holi, Gauri

[Gauri gave him a slight smile before turning around and walking away from him.

As he saw her walk away, a weird feeling took over him.

Om just couldn't understand what he was going through, and what he was feeling.

Was he starting to like Gauri?

Why did he have to like someone who would only end in trouble and disaster? ]

Rudra: (Handing Om a glass) Kahaan khoya hai? Yeh Le, pi le!

Om: Bhaang? Chee Rudy, you know main yeh sab nahi peeta

Rudra: Chee? Theek hai, main hi pi leta hoon phir---Yeh kisski awaaz thi?!

Om: (Worried) Gauri ki lag rahi thi, Chal!

[Rudra and Om ran towards the sound, and found Gauri and Anika standing on top of the table, both of them holding glasses in their hands

Gauri was drinking bhaang.

Probably a bit too much.]

Rudra: Kya baat hai! Inka alag andaaz dekhne ko mil raha hai!

[Gauri took another big sip of bhaang before sitting on the table and then laughing really loudly.

Om slapped his forehead in embarrassment, knowing that he would have to put up with drunk Gauri now.]

Gauri: (Loudly) Bhaiyon! Beheno! Aaj ke mehfil ko nazar mein rakhte hue, hum ek sher arj karna chahte hai!

Om: Oh god, no, no, no, please

Anika: Irshaad!

Gauri: Na yeh Rang, na yeh khaana deti hai itni khushi

Jitni bhaang ki 4-5 glass hai deti!

[The crowd cheered for Gauri, who then let out another laugh before drinking another glass of bhaang.

Shivaay rushed and carried Anika away, before she drank more bhaang and Om shook his head and carried Gauri in his arms before she created any more ruckus.

As he carried her in his arms, she slowly wrapped her hands around his neck and rested her head on his shoulder.]

Gauri: (Drunk) Aap baal baandhna chod dijiye, aap khule Baal mein jyaada acche lagte hai

Om: Chup! Tumhe andaaza bhi hai tumne kitni pi rakhi hai?

Gauri: (Crying) A-aap daat kyun rahe Hai? Hum itne acche hai, Aur aap daat rahe Hai hume?!

Om: (Silent)

Gauri: Hum aapse baat Karr rahe Hai! Baat suniye!

[Om dropped Gauri on the couch, and she started crying.

Again.]

Om: (Irritated) Ab Kya hua?!

[Gauri stood on the couch, trying to balance herself, and then crying before making another speech.

How the hell did Om put up with her?!]

Gauri: Hey bhagwaan! Main aapke paas aa rahi hoon! Iss zaalim aadmi ke saath rehne se behtar hoga ki hum aapke paas aa jaaye!

Om: Ho gaya tumhaara?

Gauri: Aapko ee sab majaak lag raha hai ka?

Om: (Giving her yogurt) Yeh lo, yeh khao

Gauri: Nahi! Hume kuch nahi chahiye!

Om: Chup chaap baitho! Chalo! Bahut ho gaya!

[Gauri obediently sat down and Om sat besides her, and fed her a spoon of yogurt, hoping it would tone down her intoxication.

As he fed her, he noticed a bit of yogurt left besides her mouth, and gently wiped it off with his bare hands. By the time Om placed the bowl back on the table and turned around, Gauri had already fallen asleep.

Om smiled to himself and gently picked Gauri up, taking her to her room, and placing her on the bed, before pulling the blanket over her.

Om didn't want to leave, for some reason. He still didn't understand why he was liking her, despite the fact that doing so would only end up in heartbreak

Om stood up, to walk downstairs but felt a tug on his arm. He turned to find Gauri's hand gripping his arm lightly, like she wanted him to stay.

He wanted to stay, but he knew he couldn't. He had to make sure his emotions didn't take over his senses.

With her heavy heart, he moved her hand away, and walked out the room.

He couldn't get close to her, because things wouldn't get good.

For either of them.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
So good to have you here on the forum😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
Loved the story and the fact that there were soo many chapters to read in one go! Its beautifully written, hope you'll update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Interesting start...
Gauri ran away from home so that she can marry her love but where is Vikram?? I hope he isn't double crossing her...
RiKara ne aate ke sath hi fight start kr di 😆 cute
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