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Ash2029

@Ash2029

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice one..

Pretty new concept..

Would love to read further..

Update soon

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

New Concept! Very interesting...continue soon 😊

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is interesting..would love to read more...
Continue soonish..

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice concept

Something new

Looking forward to it

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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

It's interesting

New concept

Can't wait to read the story

Continue soon

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priyadil

@priyadil

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Posted: 7 years ago

nice concept...

Pls do continue soon,...

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

I like the new concept you are trying!

Really interesting. LEt's see how Om will react to his gift ;)

Continue soon and pls do Pm me❤️

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Ash2029

@Ash2029

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome one..

I had expected Om to not to know about Ri..

This is a interesting twist..

Waiting for upcoming chapters

:-)

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Loveena

@lovesick23

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Oh thank god I thought Om will mistreat Gauri because of his fathers influence but here the son is 10 steps ahead of his father 😆
Absolutely loved the update

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priyadil

@priyadil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Om is really matured little boy for his age...

he is such a possessive boy when it comes to Ri...

What will happen next...

Nice update dear...

Pls update soon...

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