Rikara FS - Agar Tum Mil Jao | COMPLETED | Index added on PG 1 | - Page 6

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Are nehi behna..writer kaha ban gayi batao...I don't even know what I'm doing with this...bass khayal aya toh post kar diya..
Subha subha jhatka dene ke liye sholly...pehle hi bata deti, lekin I was unsure of what to do with this..pata bhi nehi tha continue karoongi ya nehi...
Take you time to read and let me know how it is...
Oh God..!! Dhak dhak moment...

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

It was indeed good dear

I like Ri's character here... Confident and cheerful

Now Kara's time to be wooed

Waiting for their date

Thank you so much..
I like the chirpy and dabang chiraiyya..she'll definitely woo Kara..woh bhi bohot jald...

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Awesome update...
It's getting interesting with each update... loved the dabang Gauri, she is gonna for sure win his heart soon and he would be her joru ka gulam... 😳 😳
Update soon...

Thanks dear..
Ri's character is my fav here..she's going to win his love soon..

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Now you have to continue this ... And yes you are a writer ... A really good one

Ahaan..!! The moment when you get a compliment for your boring from your fav writer... 😳
Thank you behna..
Will try to continue soon..

Originally posted by: Gratitude_Me

Nice story

Update soon

Thank you..
Will post the next part tomorrow...

Lovely Update!!!!nicely written dearI liked how Strong and Confident Gauri seemef in front of Om and how she only broke down the minute she was alone
I understand Oms feelings too and maybe once he wil get to know Gauri he will realize that she is the woman made for him.

For now he rightly needs some time for himself and I hope he will see that his coldness hurts Gauri



Pla do continue soon :D cant wait to read more
The story is really interesting

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Lovely Update!!!!nicely written dearI liked how Strong and Confident Gauri seemef in front of Om and how she only broke down the minute she was alone
I understand Oms feelings too and maybe once he wil get to know Gauri he will realize that she is the woman made for him.

For now he rightly needs some time for himself and I hope he will see that his coldness hurts Gauri



Pla do continue soon :D cant wait to read more
The story is really interesting

Yes, Ri is strong and confident...I'm sure she'll win his heart soon and Kara will realise she's the one who's made for him..
I'm not good in writing..so it's going to be a little fast...but I assure it's gonna be light hearted..I hope you'll like it..
Thank you so much Amel..

Shot 3


It's been three months since Gauri is trying to find ways to bring her Kara back..he has been too tough to handle for the past three months..she recalled the day when she went to pick him and he was showing tantrums..

"Mujhe tumhare saath nehi jana..you can leave..", he said..

"I'm not here to leave ainvaayi, Kara..get into the cat fast..we're getting late..."

"Hey, what's this Kara..?? I've a name..call me Omkara..", he replied imitating the act of her previous day...

"But I like Kara more..aab nakhre chodiye aur baith jaiye..."

Sighing in frustration he settled to the passenger seat as she drove grinning as if she won some battle...

That was it..they started seeing each other regularly as he wanted the media to know that he's dating someone equal to him and his status...though she has been like headache to him all these days, he couldn't do anything but bear her and her childish acts..

Sometimes she does things shocking him completely..he got the first shock when she took him to a roadside gol gappa stall for a date..never in his dreams he thought that the daughter of the famous business tycoon Shakti Sharma will be eating gol gappa making her face red and eyes watery..he smiled seeing her state..

"Try this, Kara..it's too good..", she said wiping the tears that flowed from her eyes due to the extra mirch she asked her supposed "GOL GAPPA WALE BHAIYA" to add a few moment back...

He nodded in negative and she murmured a "Akdu" making him chuckle...

She even took him to temple one day to introduce him with her Shankar Ji..he was hesitant to visit a temple..he didn't believe in God anymore...but she dragged him inside the mandir saying her Shankar Ji will be angry on her if she leave in outside...

"Aapko pata hain aaj aap humse kitna bada paap karwane wale thhe..??, she told him slapping her forehead and moving her head in disappointment...

"Aab maine kya kar diya..??", he asked rolling his eyes..

"You were being adamant ki mandir ke andar nehi jana..agar hum aapko chhod ke andar jaate aur koyi aapko kidnap kar leta toh..?!", as she said her her lips shaped in a perfect O and he couldn't but notice how cute she was..

He expected her to be a canoodled one..but with the passing time, he explored her as a chirpy, lively and simple girl with no highborn expectations..he never saw her expecting anything from him..in fact she was giving him and his family so much..she was a giver he realised much later..but he couldn't let himself accept anything from her..neither her care nor her attention..

Shoving the thoughts away, he prepared himself to face Riddhima..he's going to attend a party tomorrow arranged by one of their mutual friend...he's going to show that girl that he got someone much much better than her..

He was brushing his hair to go with another childish movie date with his supposed girlfriend as she claims to be...he was already feeling too horrible thinking about watching a movie of Salman Khan..

Did he ever thought that the heir of Sharma Industry and the only daughter of a billionaire would be so inefficient to show off her class..?? She's the most sprightly, vivid and easygoing girl he ever met..he wanted to behave just like an Oberoi before her..but he couldn't..Gauri was too naive to fall for all these external glitterings of the world..so he just couldn't be the rough and tough one with her..he didn't like how he thinks about her...

He came out of his nous getting the message of Gauri.."I'm waiting in front of your house..come fast", he read and was about to go downstairs when he saw his father coming towards his direction..he didn't want to argue with him..so he simply avoided him..but his father had his share of nonsense to talk about...

"Omkara", Tej called..Omkara didn't turn to face his father but stood there waiting for him to continue..

"As you started going office, I want you to take back your shares from Shivaay..he devoured enough from your foothold..its time to take back everything from him you deserve.."

Omkara was already feeling disgusted listening to his bogus tongun...but he didn't want to make an issue..he turned and said, "I'm happy with whatever I have and I don't want shares from Oberoi industries..moreover, Shivaay has been taking care of everything since years..so he has the right on those shares...and for now I want to focus on my art gallery..", Omkara said and wanted to leave when his father threw a ridiculous laugh to him..

"Paintings aur murtiyaan banake zindegi mein kya haasil kar loge tum..??", he almost roared..

Omkara was about to annul his father when he heard a voice from behind..

"Zindegi mein paise sab kuch haasil karne ki zariya nehi hota, Uncle..Omkara ne apne talent se jo naam banaya hain uske aage duniya ka sab kuch haasil karne ka feelings bhi kam hi mehsoos hogi..", said Gauri..

Tej shook his head, frustrated as if cursing himself for choosing Gauri for his son..when Omkara was looking at her in a trance..

He couldn't believe, the girl he thought to be a covetous one was defending him as if she was able to feel the emotions in him...as if she knew how he felt..as if she was capable of look into his soul..

Gauri hold his hand and dragged him with her..he wasn't able to understand what was going with him..when he tried to change himself, Gauri came to his life and started making him feel like he was everything she ever wanted...

So here's the 3rd shot of ATMJ..

I know it was supposed to be a TS..but when I started typing, I realised it'll not be covered up in just three parts..so I'm making it a five shot...

Thank you so much for bearing me and encouraging me to continue..

Wishing everyone a Happy New Year...

Thick head omkara slowly melting

Loved it