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Ann17

@Ann17

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

tooo much hot to handle ... the potter!

😉

great one! keep writing! 👏

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Eeekkksss this is so amazing

Sensuos intense desireable

Yet so beautiful

Beautifully written

Clay makes such an important part in omkara's life

And now that they made love with clay lad hands it is so good...

Keep it up savi

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Romantic os!!

That was super hot...

Loved it..

Very well written.

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Sorry Savina for the late comment :0
Was caught up in some university work

LOVED LOVED LOVED IT desr
I swear you are the one of the best writers on this forum! Each story has the perfect amount of live desire passion and all these emotions are beautifully portrayed by you
The way they tried to make a Vase but were stopped by the desire of their bodies to finally become one hayeee
Loved it truly
I wish you could write for the show at least than we would have some proper RiKara scenes
We miss U
Come back soon and Good Luck with your Studies ❤️

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Wow👏👏

What a brilliant piece of writing.

The sensuality/passion was portrayed beautifully...each and every expressions/actions you brought out was to the point...nothing vulger, nothing OTT...I can use only one word "beautiful". It didn't make me uncomfortable or shy because your writing was so strong that all I could feel was the passion. Your write up made me feel that physical intimacy between 2 soulmates is a beautiful act of worship, a divine experience

Thank you so much for such a wonderful story.i

Edited by Cute-over-Hot - 7 years ago

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bhaagi1403

@bhaagi1403

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Can i get a 5min time before I comment!!! Let me just take small breaths. Ufff 1 2 3 .. yaaa done. GOSH actually u took us through the scene. something where we could literally visualized. Now I dont care if CVs give SR for rikara because I have the full scene in my mind saved in my hard-disk. The ambiance of the scene, the characters of om and G crisp like how they always are. The neat intentions which always seen in episodes. I'm flatten and will take time for me to recover from this sweetest bliss

PS; I'm still having mild fast heartbeats 😉