Thanks for the special dedication central heater Pooru😆. Sorry my replies are getting so slow, and even more sorry about the delays in posting Changed #9.
Par aaj to heat karna chodo - tumne ghar mein aag hi laga di. 😆
Waah - Omkara sitting in a crowded room and imagining all he could do with his wife, but alas... Rudy strikes again - Omkara really needs to remind him that he wanted a lambe-baal-wala-chota-O.
This was so hot, hot, hot!😳 But can you guess my favourite line in the whole piece??
'A book, The couch and a duvet would have been some good time with her.'
As soon as I read it, I could picture it and my RiKara heart began to fall into a daydream. This level of comfort is so amazing when we are still suffering through awkward stage with hints of passion onscreen - but really Pooru - he can focus on reading when his wife is pressed against him under a duvet on their favourite recliner?😳
Okay, okay you got me - that's not my favourite, but it is really food for an avid imagination😆, my favourite line is... drum rolls please... it may be one of the best I've read form you so far? You guessed it - that last one.
'The song may be over, but the night is young, and they got one more dance ahead of them ... Some murmurs ... Some sighs ... Some whimpers ... Because the calendar reminds him that tonight ... Both of them can create a new life.'
Wow - they're trying for a baby!! Like actively, calendar-marking, date-checking, TRYING! You know PapaKara and MummyRi is the best thing in the world for me. Loved it, loved it, LOVED it😃! You've actually managed to wipe their passionate applaud-worthy spin around the dance floor from my mind with this line, as all I'm thinking is WOW!
Thanks so much for this OS - it was fantastic😃!