Marry Me -Parts 78-129. Thread III Link Pg 1 Post 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: S.love1

Wow 🤗 what an update

Loved every single bit of it

Thank you so much.

I personally connect with shivaay more than any other character, he is penned so beautifully by you 👍🏼

Thank you, I am happy you can connect with him.

I feel so horrible for him, he is right in what he does but the fact that he is straightforward people don't understand him and find him harsh,

The way om reacted and got angry on shivaay was a bit dramatic, he doesn't think practically, he is more of the emotional brother

That he is, but in his defense, he sensed where Shivay was headed to, He was worried about him more than anyone else.

Shakti is the most level headed human in OM, the way he explained to annika was awsome

Gauri and shivaay are going good, always enjoyable to read about their interactions

Shivaays proposal was so random ( do you really propose a girl like this, I am sure he even proposes business in a better way) but then again it's shivaay so what do we expect from him.

I should have actually titled it Hostile take over rather than marry me. 😆

Annikas response was khidkithod

But I wonder what has shivaay planned to make her agree? Probably going to announce his alliance with her publicly or maybe blackmail her, but I really don't enjoy the blackmail bit.

Nope no blackmail, I don't enjoy it either. Tia is about to reappear in the next update so ...

They had their first kisss the way annikas licked her lips afterwards was so amusing and cute

Thanked for these updates!

And congratulations for coming this far in your story, all thanks to your beautiful writing style and marvellous imagination

Much love!

.Saumya.

Thank you so much for reading and writing back to me.

Love Samiksha

Originally posted by: ..Amri..

Yes Yes Yes!

New thread and new updates 🥳

Have read it all once already...will do it again in the evening after work and give you my detailed comment:)