RiKara OS - DESIRABLE - Page 2

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Firstly, thanks for the dedication😳. Secondly... WOW!

Kashish 🤗

You are on a roll Pooru, posting so much and I can't even get the next part of Changed up😆.

I am an overthinker 😆

I'm going to be totally badtameez and leave a really long rambling post for you, discussing both your piece and RiKara and a few things I need your permission to steal - I'll colour those pink.

So I guess this confirms that you and I are on the same page when it comes to DaddyKara Absolutely - he's not only goals, he's fully capable of giving fathers worldwide a complex. HusbandKara and DaddyKara came alive here for me and it inspires me to keep going with forging that bond in Changed. You know i felt that i should not bring in the whole family into this piece of work ... I did not want to divide attention into family entertainment and rikara time and that moment it reminded me of how effortlessly you do it in CHANGED I have already read the piece but am now re-reading to give you my reaction. Time for your own live update, courtesy of moi.😉 *HAPPY DANCE*

Waah Gauri starts this off so bold - seductively leaning against the door... somebody's hormonal😳. Addressing Omkara as 'Artist' - I'm guessing there's a subtle and private backstory to this name, perhaps he likes being called as such by his wife.

You caught me 😲 ... I thought No one would be able to get hold of me on that point when Wife Ri calls him Artist ... It was my first indication of how this man has helped her create a beautiful life into her ... THE ARTIST.

Addressing Gauri as 'Beautiful' and then going for the kiss - RiKara are both very bold here, I guess pregnancy suits them😆. You know Gauri and Omkara are that kind of indian television couple who will have potential even after becoming parents ... As a DBO viewer i was really looking forward to that part of their story. As is common in all your writings that have them as an established couple, RiKara are on a splendid comfort level - I love it. As I said earlier ... All the Rikara I write is a result of my over thinking ... I actually like them that was ... Mature and understanding.

Omkara dropping down to his knees, ditching his work and all else just to give attention to the baby he cannot physically connect to yet shows exactly where his priorities are - I'm squealing on the inside😃. This is one compulsory Papa-To-Be Scene ... And after watching the RiKara confession on screen ... I like him dropping on his knees.

EEEPPP! The first time I read that I actually made a sound out loud - lucky I was the only one in the room - Gauri with her hands in Omkara's hair? I am dying to have a scene like that ... Like something anything related to Omkara's hair ... I have thought so much about it like head massage, Oil Champi, Combing, Flat Iron or just caressing ... Don't torture me so, it's all I want to see in the show. Forehead kiss and concern for his wife - could this dude get anymore perfect? Nopes! He is Pooru's Omkara

Now he's getting cheeky and Gauri's certainly not shying away.😳 'Mother of my baby' - oh how I wish for this. Even when the DBO track was fake preggers ... I wanted him to say that she is the mother of his baby

The pregnancy books are back - are we twinning? Ahaan even you going to mention pregnancy books! The first child ones were gonna make an appearance in the next Changed😆, when Omkara tries to prep himself for all the duties he's desperate to take up. He likes to be prepared doesn't he? Yes he does and I love his interest and curiosity especially in matters related to Gauri

Oooh Gauri is getting frustrated - I'm sensing sanskaripan coming up. Its on the highway 😉

I totally see Omkara observing her eating habits like a hawk - he is totally the Mother-Hen in this situation😆. I actually love his concern - can I steal it? You have it Kash ... As much as you want as long as you want. I mentioned when he first met her again in Changed that he noticed he was thinner and I really want to build on that. Of course the Gauri there is not pregnant so its not cravings I'll focus on but how he notices how tired and overworked she's looking and her irregular eating habits. Special commendation to the return of Bareilly GolGappas😊. Yes what you are thinking about is absolutely right ... Omkara should take care of her ... Eating, sleeping and even some relaxation ... I think Gauri needs more of babysitting than Adya

Sharing a plate - what a comfort level again - how do you create this yaar? Share the secret of this talent with me please. You know the food and plate sharing scenes in serials can be highly dramatized with face feature close ups and continuous romantic vocals but with a man who can manage to rip his heart off for his wife ... Things have to be simple and casual.

'Doll' - WOW! She really is like a porcelain doll, especially with the special care he's taking of her. Feeding one another - can I borrow in a different context to do with his concern for her eating and him getting injured trying to help her? Don't ask Kash ... Let him feed her ... Let him talk to her ... Let him help her but injury! NEEDLES? and can he call her doll in CHANGED?

They're both sounding so hormonal and Gauri being so honest in the face of his teasing - so refreshing. I feel a couple happily married and pregnant can be like this ... All the flirting and teasing can be quite normal.

His correcting her that the baby is both of theirs 'sigh' - stop pulling at my heartstrings Pooru, it's not fair. Here I stop to draw the parallels between this moment and what happened in DBO during the fake pregnancy track when Omkara tried to exert sole right on his fictitious unborn child - what a turnaround from that man! I really really appreciated this because it reflects how perfect this Omkara is - so what say? Can I use a variation of this idea - his openness in sharing both responsibility and rights towards Aadya? Okay I'm gonna stop being greedy now - that was the last one. You know we are running our brain metros on the same track ... Even I wanted a positive variation of the DBO baby possession conversation ... And you don't have to ask ... Yes yes yes ... He can be open and expressive towards Adya's responsibilities and with that he can be Gauri's support system ... An unintentional kind of emotional anchor.

Both of them want one another attention and loving how Omkara is affected despite not being pregnant - he's so possessive. That he is and I love him so much for that ... He is life partner goals

Gauri's hormones are on overdrive, so much so that she is doubting Omkara's desire for her - paagal chirraya, the man is head over heels for you😆. That was my favorite part of the writing 😆

Oh no! That escalated fast. This child definitely has photo phoot ke Omkara stuffed in him, making Gauri so volatile - but Omkara you should know better than too lose your temper on a pregnant woman. Love that he looks past his anger and reasons out her erratic behaviour - good job OSO. Calling her 'Mrs' - be still my fragile heart. With this I say make Adya the Papa's girl just like how she defended him in her sleep ... Let her have a babyish trait of not eating anything sweet or love for soft and slow poetry.

Nothing distracts Omkara from her and the baby's health - mustn't forget milk before bed. Omkara manaoing is so cute - 'most wonderful and beautiful girl'. He knows what she's thinking and is quick to erase her fears - HusbandGoals! Gaur is his priority and he's not at all shy about it - you go OSO! He's letting her know how much she affects him - this guy is so open EEEPPP!!! You know Omkara the Artist, Omkara the Vulnerable and Omkara the person is my spirit inside out so I get confidence when I get to write his character detailing ... Here he is caring, emotional and romantic at the same time.

Hotness overload that allows for not live-updating - massage for the pregnant wife... HusbandGoals!!! ExpectantFatherGoals!!! I wanted to do a massage scene ... As it can be easy going yet romantic and meaningful

Even during all that steaminess he makes sure to tell her in words as well as actions how attractive she is to him... where is this guy on the show? Nahi milega ... There was one such Guy on the show who used to make sculptures and do meaningful poetry and introspect ab nahi Milne wala ...

First kick and Omkara wants his little princess - so many feels I cannot even convey it in words. I love that they both care more about a healthy baby than the gender as it should be. That is one important point for the kind of parents they are going to be and so I made them talk about it

Such open discussion where he knows she enjoys his pampering and extra attention and lets her know about his awareness - kya baat hai! Love it. I want both of them to argue about the same thing in CHANGED ... Like with the point that he says they can have as many biological children as they want. That conversation is going to be so interesting.

This was beautiful. Thanks so much for writing it up and I hope I haven't bored you too much with this rambling reply.😳😊

You know I like reading long comments after churning my brain into posting something ... Tumhe toh pata hai naa kitni mehnat lag sakti hai and right now I loved your reply.

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

And kashish one more thing ... I want Omkara to apologize to Adya for not being able to take care of her mother like he is supposed to just like here Omkara says sorry to her belly ... I want Omkara to have genuine conversations with Adya about his feelings indirectly and totally meant for Gauri.

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Originally posted by: kashishsr

We are on same track Pooru😆. Aadya is the tie that will bind them - little things like her stubbornness reminding Gauri of her jhatadari hippie and him using the topic of her to take care of Gauri.