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Posted: 7 years ago

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Excellent update dear I just love it... btw thanks for the pm dear

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aichaab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

this has been amazing...right from yours truly through fixing th epieces to the third part now. Always looking forward to reading it and i cant wait to see their life in the real world now that school is over.

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farinaks

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Congratulations

Fantastic update

I too wanna go to Barbados

Tq for pm

Continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Res😆

Unres😛

It was too good.😊😊

Vacation before getting into serious business.😃😃

But they all are chanto-mais: Taking Sid-Mallika with them and also using them to manaofy Bhavya parents.😆😆

In the end, I really hope the person is Shivaay as I simply hate Daksh🤢🤢.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Anila!

Congratulations for the new thread! I havent finished reading the last few chapters of part 2.

I'll try to finish reading and drop comments by the weekend.

You have already reached to thread 3. That is commendable

Good job :)

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Anila

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: bworm
Fantastic, without visiting, tour ho gaya.
This was fun.
Am suprised that sid abs Malika have no hint on what's going between shivika.
The ending was scary..

Thanks for the pm

Thank you sooo much!.. :)

Glad to know you enjoyed the part! 😳

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Anila

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome, Superb Update..

Thanks a lot! 😃

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Anila

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Apu_915
Amazing Update. Totally enjoyed reading it!
Would love to visit Barbados some day 😳
Waiting for the nxt!
Thanks for the PM :)

Thank you!! :)

@Bold - Aww, you should, it's an amazing place! 😳

Updating soon, Stay tuned..

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Anila

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Dik..
Congratulations for 3 part of the ff...
Part was super awesome..

End was a cliff hanger.. I really hope it's shivay..

Thank you soo sooo much!.. :)

@Italics - Read on to find out 😉

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Anila

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update!!
Loved it..
Gang planned to go Barbados to enjoy their vacation..n they planned to take Sid n Malika along with them, so that their parents can give permission..very intelligent..
So enjoyed while reading about this whole trip..they have full fun...
Very beautifully written..soo loved d way u describe about every place..
But poor shivika can't enjoy together in d presence of their siblings..
Guess it's shivaay who took anika in d last scene..really hope it's shivaay..
Enjoyed reading this..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm dear:)

Aww, your long comments again! I love them! 😳

Thank you sooo much!...

@Italics - Soo sweet of you :)

@Bold - Read on to find out 😉

Updating soon, Stay tuned.. :)

Thanks once again!

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