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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Awesome update yar...

Bang on...

I really hope that cvs will explore this track really in a good way...

after the accusations om had made on gauri...I really wanted to see Omkara suffer so much...

if a person makes a mistake once then it's forgivable

and if he makes it again and again then it's a sin...

aur gunah ko maafi nahi hai...unko saza dethi hai...

The way he lifted her hopes in one minute and then insulted her...it was so cruel... shivaay and Rudra had also done this but the insulting was not preplanned but Omkara planned everything...he wanted to break her...

I was so angry on him... Ya he is only witnessed betrayal in his life but it doesn't give him the power to accuse any girl...

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samiksha1993

@samiksha1993

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

"Gauri pushed the heavy wrought Iron gates of Oberoi mansion open and stepped out into a new day"

This summed it up all. I am so proud of your Gauri.

When will our shows have the courage to show a female lead who can take a stand for herself. I loved this Os to bits. Virtual Hugs to you for penning it down.

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zeenucharm

@zeenucharm

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This was what I needed to seeing the show.show...well written genie.. superb.

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Take a bow dear..I was always a die hard Omkara fan..but believe me it didn't affect me at all to see him insulted like this..he deserve it...and the RiKara fan in me was fully satisfied..loved our dabang chiraiyya...her maa kaali avtar gave me goosebumps..hope to see a strong and bold Ri today...yesterday I cried for Ri...aaj Kara ke liye rone wali hoon..thanks for them pm...have a safe trip and be back soon..will be waiting for your nexts...

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Wow thank u so much for this amazing is...after reading this feelibg better for gauri...otgetwuse i dont know how angry i was after watching yesterdays episide...atleast in your story gauri will get her deserved peace...

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

wow that was amazing

this is something that i would actually like to see happen in the show, but alas i know it wont haha

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

really hope we get to see something like this in the show..if only our FLs were such strong and confident. Amazing work!

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Wohhooo

What a shot genie..what a shot👏👏 kya tha yeh behna..kya tha..but ji b tha..ek dum khidkitod tha...

The way you wrote strong character of gauri..uske sehne ki shakti khatm ho gyi...ek dum prorper feel aya by reading this..

And that heavy and dhmakedar dialogues..and the scenario you create ..i feel like i was watching the show..i must say in your every story dialogue delivery kmal ki hoti hai

I had tears in my eyes while reading this and broken gauri😭

She stood for herself and took the right decision of leaving him and he deserve this punishment

Aapke liye hath tootne tak taaliyan👏👏👏

Thanks for sharing this wonderfull shot

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

You are simply fantastic! And so generous.. giving us everything that the CVS would never! Ahh the heart is at ease after reading this piece... Beautifully described the kaali maa avatar of Gauri! Exactly the way I visualised her! Thankyou so much for this masterpiece genie!