Meeting Again - Rikara OS (Changed #5)

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it...

so rikara meet again...

waiting for their reaction after meeting

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Kash..jhappies for you babe...you've no idea how much I love this..the more I'm reading the more I'm falling for this beautiful saga..RiDya's chemistry is so pure and unadulterated...the way Ri is trying to start a new life with Aadya proves that she's a strong girl..our dabang chiraiyya..but somewhere in her heart she knows that she's incomplete without her jatadhaari..and about his jatadhaari we all know how much he need her..thanks for recreating the DBO scene here..kya din thhe..yaad agayi...it was totally unfair that you stopped there..but as you said this cliffhanger is going to make the next part more beautiful, I really can't wait to read...let's see how they react...hope Kara will do every possible thing to get back her love and trust...and PossessiveKara on the way..yeeey..!!

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Brilliant concept and brilliant work

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: gumpchump

👏 👏👏 brilliant, your style of writing doesn't let the reader breathe haha - so much anticipation, woven with such delicacy - simply exceptional! The portrayal of emotions is again amazing, each scene speaks volumes xoxo

@ bold : am simply loving this concept

This feeling of not knowing what's going to happen 😆 makes it very exciting, kudos for wrapping this chapter!

Yes even though I'm Procrastination Queen, I did promise you. About to reply to your PM soon. Thanks for reading and start breathing again!!😊

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: fariah25
Oh god ! Why did you have to stop here ?!?!
I was already flying in the rikara la la land with saaathiyaa going on in bg and the beautiful scenery of Kashmir...
You chose the perfect place for them... kashmir suits them so well...
This was beautiful 😊
Now plzzz don't keep us waiting long and update asap !
❤️

Cliffhangers - gotta love 'em...actually, no you probably don't😳

Sorry, but it was for the benefit of the next part.

Thank you for reading and taking time out for the lovely comment 😊

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: priya_86
That was awesome dear...meeting after ages...her jatadhari
Gauri had always been a strong...and hence she has the capability of bringing up an adopted child single handedly
Waiting for the next 😊

If only society and Indian Law agreed. There's gonna be some conflict on it soon - remember the orphanage's hesitation. Thanks for reading 😊

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: yayini
What an excellent chapter.. kashish this is excellent.. I am so loving hat gauri is moving on positively in her life with aadya. Omkaara and gauri s meet was much anticipated one. My heart yearns for more now.. please continue soonish.. I am very curious to know the direction of their conversation.. he is dying. To apologize to her.. let us see.. Lau and hug..yay

Oh he will apologise. He will beg and grovel. But how receptive do you think the new mother will be? Gaur has a lot of bitterness towards Om and she's grown a little too quickly. Omkara will need to move a mountain this time around. Thanks for reading and commenting 😊

Edited by kashishsr - 7 years ago

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Ann17
wow.. as alwz great piece of writing
bt how could u stop here!

waiting fr nxt.. do upload fast.. plzzz

I hope you'll find the next update worth the cliff-hanger. I'll try my best, thanks for the comment😊

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: guy3

To tell you the truth,Gauri doesn't need Om, Om needs her. Gauri is a strong girl who deserves much better in life. If you have to show them getting together again, please atleast ensure there is a good redemption track. Gul has never been good at making a good redemption track be it IPKKND 1 or Now Rikara. It's almost like Om continues to mistake Gauri but she just easily comes back to him. Yeh nahi chalega, our chiraiya deserves better. In fact, I would have loved to see another man love and cherish Gauri to show Om how she deserves to be treated and loved

Was totally with you until the other man bit. Come on man... Rikara is BAE. Of course she deserves better but that has to do with Omkara's growth not swapping him in for someone else. adding a third wheel will only create problems later so I'm sorry but that's not gonna happen in this one. Maybe I'll give it a go in different piece of work. 😉

Omkara will definitely get a real redemption - IPKKND lost me with ASR's half redemption😡. Don't worry he won't MU her again in this piece.

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated😊