Shivika OS: Mendhi, A Gunshot & Heartbeats [Current Track]

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

oh god it just felt so real

i almost felt its gonna happen in serial

thank god for haldi and disaster shaadi outfits spoilers else i would have thought Cvs are considering this

please do continue

loved this one

bye sumi

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

awesome update yar

Totally loved it...

it was beautiful

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This is really fabulous shot and I enjoyed reading it...

You have beautifully captured the depth of the Shivika relationship. It was painful yet endearing.

I also liked that you have gave a sneak peak into the current dynamics of Om- Gauri and Rudra- Bhavya...

Loved it...

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This is beautiful! Is there going to be a part 2?

Welcome back to IF!

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kaavya009

@kaavya009

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This is absolutely beautiful piece of work. I literally cried while reading. 👏

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Welcome back...I really missed having you and your stories on the forum! As for this OS, what i wouldn't give to get such a poignant hospital scene...thank you...it was perfect!👏

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kinnika
Sigh! So beautiful!!
I discovered your writing a little late and I can't help but keep re-reading them once I did.

Keep writing! Please! 😊

Better Late Than Never 😆

I'm Glad That They Have Been Re-reading Worthy, Thank You 🤗

Hope My Future Will Be Re-read Too 😳