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@Tabsfully

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Um...I think our show is suffering on more than a few accounts 😆 So just thought of posting some suggestions to CVs...

*intention is constructive criticism*

1) WAY too many simultaneous tracks...I understand the show is a hour show. But that's useless and unworthy if the allotted time is used frivolously

and MORE Lined up. and expected.

"Current" / in the lineup

-Marriage and functions track

-TejViLana track

-Svet and her mission

-RuVya track ( ? Didn't finish the episode so idk where this is going)

-Bhavya and this new guy

-RiKara track (The miscommunication between the two is still happening and ultimately they also have to address the Kaali/Thukurian situation) ( Plus, They have no conflict to speak off...atleast shivika had NKK...All RiKara have are unsolved feelings. It can honestly be solved with 2 decent conversations.) 😳

-Gauri's mission to learn english

-Shivika (again, They seem to be stalling and idk why. Get married. end of story.) Who cares about the functions anymore. 🥱

-Custody of Sahil

-Pinky's Drama, and what Dadi keeps warning her about?

-Pinky's Half OMM (The track kinda never finished or had a solid conclusion...it kinda just was left hanging mid way, Like when you get up from your seat at a dinner party to refill your drink or something, and when you come back, your plate is gone...because someone thought you were done. 😳) Let us( your viewers) know...Is the plate gone, or can we expect something else?

Tracks we can foresee:

-what is the raaz?

-Annika's past

-Vanvas track

2) I understand side characters and sub plots are important okay? I read novels, I watch tv too. But focusing not on the leads. Is gonna hurt your show and alienate your FanBase. ( Whether its RiKara, Shivika, Ruvya )

CVs need to stop introducing more and characters and give a solid background/ purpose for the introduction of one.

-Ragini was suppose to be an obsessive maniacal chipku girlfriend...

Bechari only hurt herself and ate Kakri (Cucumbers) ...and left. She didn't even give us a NDE 😳

- what's his name ( ragini's brother) See..I forget his name too, that's how useless his character was. We saw him in like 4 scenes in total. .. First we see him drinking chai at the chawal, then, He was supposed to be Annika's boss initally, then helped Ragini with her plan by driving a car. and in the end. like helped shivaye...Continuity be koi cheese hoti hai yaar. 😆 He was all over the place.

Vikram--atleast he had some use to the plot. Got SSO in his protective mode. and had some backstory.

Sundari Bua--Okay, fine I foresee the start of the custody track. so I understand her need. But when you have so many continuous tracks running, WHY introduce her NOW?! Why not wait until after the marriage track ?

3) And most importantly Continuity! and coming Full circle The characters AND script need to be determined beforehand. That's why Old IB was so good.

Harneet/ CVs and a goal in mind: Get the couple together and the ML has to give up his NKK nonsense...but now, they seem to be winging it...we get 2 good episodes followed by a mediocre and 2 bad/filler ones.

If the writer is too busy to write or plan for sooo many tracks or shows, hire some new writers! it shouldn't be so hard.

Damn, You could pay some of the FF writers here and they'll actually be invested 😆 and come up with a logical result

The characters need to be grounded. We can't have them flipping and showing different attitudes and every other scene...one of the best things about IB is that all its characters ( for the most part) are multi-faceted. Or at least were. Let's make them stay that way...I understand Changes in characterization are important but don't make the character change just to change or so it adds conflict...There must be purpose behind it...

*Rant over*

-Thank you

* no chameli-s or chandni-s please* and share any suggestions you might have 😆

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yellomellow

@yellomellow

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Man, I have so much to say about the show 😆

The characters have moments of clarity for the track to move forward, but all that goes out the window for forced conflicts or to let the vamps win.

Gauri wasn't even in love with Om, but now she wants acceptance as his wife. We saw her spend months dealing with vamps, villains, and CGI snakes, but now she is weak. She cheating Svetlana and Bua Maa, but she can't handle reporters now? She had a reply from everyone from Pinky to Ragini, but she lets some reporters humiliate her? I'm not even upset at her being insecure but I just don't get the inconsistency in her character.
Shivaay solved his own problems no matter how stupid the writing was. Now he needs the help of Bhavya. Enlisting the help of others isn't a bad thing, but at times he comes off stupid. It's the same track we have seen before, but now he suddenly doesn't know how to handle the situation when he did it fine before.
Tej tried to kill her multiple times, but Jhanvi is having feels with him the kitchen and slapping her son for him. The son that was willingly to marry a mistress so there was no threat to her marriage. Really Jhanvi 😕
Tej was the bad guy. Shady business dealings, possible murder with the 30 year old raaz,and conspires against his own nephew. Not to mention he tried to take out his entire family in day to force his mistress to marry him, but now he is getting physically and verbally abused by the vamp. He needs Jhanvi to save him 😆
Anika never abandoned people and the drop of a dime she leaves Shivaay. Comes back to literally spend weeks being told what to do by others about her own marriage. Her fake engagement and the discard for her safety. The amount times she almost died you would think she would be wary of strangers.
OBros would kill for Prinku, but no one seems to remember her existence now or care to check if she is even alive.

I like Svetlana as the villain, but I don't understand her purpose in the story with Kaveri act. Before in IB and DBO her motives were clear even though the tracks were strange. She had a goal and she went about accomplishing it. What's the need for Peter and Kaveri act? Is it for comedy purpose? I don't get it. Just bring back old Svetlana pre-masks and iceboxes.

Also, can Tej start winning again? I'm tired of seeing Tej being abused by Svetlana.

Pinky is another character with so much wasted potential. She was exposed then she disappeared and now she is back to plotting again. Instead of making her completely evil you could just make her a grey character. Someone that causes friction, but you don't hate. She could genuinely be struggling with her insecurities and being left out instead of more plotting.

Please show some attention to the FLs too. A FL centric track when the villain doesn't end up a woman or a psycho. Or explore their past. It's a rumor, but just becayse they are opposite of brothers doesn't mean the FLs have to be related too. That would be really lame and cliche plot-twist lol.

Shivika:

Shivaay is too busy being the bahu. I understand family is important, but that doesn't mean his basic characterization should be gone. He is way too invested in Gauri and her problems. Om gave him lectures, but he wasn't this invested in his relationship. Don't get me wrong I love the bonding, but Gauri can figure her own problems. It's like he has no other life than fixing his brother's love-life.

Anika just attends random rasams. She is getting married, but nothing is happening.

Sahil's custody, Sahil's Bua, and Pinky should be their conflict let the others handle their own tracks. Can he get a business rival or something?

The actual wedding would be nice too. Fans have been waiting for the happy remarriage track and now it's been dragged.

Rikara:

Gauri and Om barely interact with each other anymore. Can't they be friends like in DBO and then slowly fall in love. I get Om's character sketch, but Gauri is a bit hard to understand now. If Gauri is in love and wants acceptance then fine, but stick to one thing. She jumps from one tangent to another. In my opinion, I found her character was more interesting in DBO. There was shades to her then now she is just insecure.

Kali misunderstanding was resolved or at least I think it was, but nothing has changed. Jungle track happened and still nothing changed. Several NDE's and no still movement. Isn't the story/couple supposed to move forward afterward a major track? I can't speak for others, but I was hoping it was a friends to love story for them. Marriage acceptance is too soon considering the baggage Om has and Gauri changing herself for love doesn't suit them.

Ruvya:

I don't really understand their story so I gave up.

Edited by yellomellow - 8 years ago

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Jinan

@Tashfee

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Loopholes here, loopholes there and everywhere! 😆

TejViLana- What are they still doing here?! Their track ended when Svetlana made an exit, back in those days, during the Mahasangam. They could easily have shown them to be a happy married couple now, instead of eating up the screenspace now, but Svetlana can't be kept away from the show, it seems. 😳

Now, wasn't the masked Svet dating Tej? So where's the real one? And how did she escape the police, mental asylum or whichever place she was sent to?

Shivika- Get em married now please. _/\_ Jiss rate pe jaa rahe hai, I wonder if they are actually going to show the marriage properly. They're going so slow, speed pakadne ke baad I hope its not a chat mangni pat biyah.😳 And, if they are trying to delay the marriage bcz of the other show's wedding, then can't they at least show normal rituals and ceremonies taking place? Like, Engagement, Mehndi(With real mehndi plz) and the Haldi? A very serious NO to Samuhik Vivaah! _/\_

Rikara- For now, everything can be cleared only if they decided to talk. The lack of communication between them is creating more misunderstandings.

Ruvya- Like, I said in the other thread. Harneet loves triangles.😆 There has to be someone to get em together na? So yeah, the new ACP (I dont know if he is one. It was said that he is from the department)is introduced now. Like, Kaali Thakur was needed for Rikara and Daksh/Vikram for Shivika. 😆

About Ragini, she was also a psychopath right? After Daksh, she seemed to be so pheeki, lol.😆😆What did she even do other than introducing Vikram and eating khakri like you said. 😆Aur toh aur, NDE diye bina hi sarak gayi... ek toh dhanka kaam karke jaati. 😒

And Samar... I think he was supposed to be used instead of Vikram, initially. Thats why, he was included in the promo, post leap. And the chai scene with Annika also doesn't make sense now. What the heck was he even talking about?!😳 Then, ek jhatke mein he turned out to be a positive character, instead of the one who was fulfilling Ragini's bratty demands, at least thats what I had expected of him.😆

Pinky ji, is doing nothing these days instead of lurking around and complaining (Taunting? Insulting? Sneering?) about Annika. But she is someone who has something to do with the Raaz, so yeah.

I said I was gonna add to what I said before but ended up writing so much! 😆😳

Edited by Jinan. - 8 years ago

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mainkyanaamdoon

@mainkyanaamdoon

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome requests. There is no cohesion anymore. Editing is bad. Jumping all over the place. Story and characters (not literally most of the times 😆 ) also flying in every direction. Atleast give us the shaadhi. No thinking is required while doing some rasams and sambhars is there?

Maang rahe hai junior Obros and obahus ke romance aur mil raha hai sirf senior oberois ke romance

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BIaddict

@BIaddict

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Well I watch this show for Rikara. I don't give a damn about that cartoon character from chawl they showed yesterday or Swetlana or the string of jung characters they keep bringing with non sense tracks on disgusting comedy which is not funny at all.

If I get a good story line on Rikara with like 10 minutes focus on their story, I will be a satisfied viewer/fan and will accept all Jodi's provided it is a balanced episode. I don't understand why they bring batches of these disgusting characters. Not sure who is interested in watching all the non sense they spend time detailing on. Don't get it why they can't focus on the three brothers.

I am not sure how long I will hang on to this show with 1-2 minutes of Rikara with no continuity to their story. Good side is with 2 minutes Rikara, watching the episode becomes an easy quick task for me. Hail the FF button and online watching option on such days as Monday.

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pooja

@uppaas

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

can I just not comment on what tracks to give...but just request for some mandatory..underlining non changeable ...things..

1 to 10...dont butcher the character u created n was totally loved and accepted

PLEASE LETS HAVE THE SSO U MADE BACKKK

please get husband and wife back into the bedroom..they are married..

how about getting over creating new function n shoving down re marriage down our throats not needed..

put ur brains into creating n finising tracks instead of creating n inventing new never heard of rasams..

PLEASE BUTCHER dadi..pinky n shaktis characters instead of the leads ..

thanks

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

This show has great potential with detailed characterisation, but not properly lead.

Are we not used to shows becoming slaves of TRP and losing their originality?

At this point Shivika's romance is to the point of cringing. They have to get married soon. When you introduce one plot before another, then the first one loses its point.

RiKara... well, I don't even think they are leads anymore. Tej Jhanvi gets more screen time and story. One simple misunderstanding. Are they not mature enough to solve it. Shivay and Gauri are good together, but love guru shivay is not really interesting.

RuVya plz don't even get me started about them. Again lots of potential but always their scenes turned into something from a comedy show

I am not able to bear the new found love of Tej and Jhanvi. How did that even happen???

Pinky is left showing tears eyes in a scene or two

This show has amazing cast and crew. Only if they are used properly