RiKara OS - WOH AJNABEE - Page 5

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Pooru!!

Thank you for this lovely OS! So much happening over a cup of coffee. I loved how you described him, writing without a care about his surroundings while she falls flat on her face. The manbun made an entry and a hasty exit. We all love openhairKara and then the coffees! The cameo by Soumya! Thank you girl, it's always a pleasure to read about her and you know why.

I love how this was simple with everything happening in CCD, as everyday things, described in a simple way. A believable way, away from the glitz and glamour that usually accompanies the Oberois. I honestly think Gauri would have left a threat at the reception because she is dabangg Gauri.

And then he fact that Omkara here gets to speak at least some tiny bit unlike what we get on the show. A sweet OS with a simple story that weaves it self around so nicely, starting and then moving on all over a coffee.

Thank you for the dedication, Pooru! I loved it.

Originally posted by: indigal07

Pooru!!!!!🤗 Yeh kya hai?! You've outdone yourself! This is too good! The way you've written it, it almost feels like fast paced poetry immersed with so much love and angst and ultimate happiness--it's fantastic! The entire time I was reading this I was really admiring your style of writing this one, how you've captured the essence of this Ri and Kara with so much ease and so successfully portray Ri's attraction to him. As if it couldn't get any better, the line "3 yrs 2 months 11 days" came and I was like OMG Om likes her too!!!!!!!!!!!! You blew me away! Such a big happy dance at that part!

It's all perfect perfect!! And I'm seeing that you're gonna post Om's POV soon?! Best thing I've heard all day!! I cannot wait for the beautiful gift you'll give us with his POV! Just love this so much!! Keep writing, you're awesome! ❤️

Originally posted by: sarroo

Nice OS