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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Starting part was awesome nd light hearted

Bt LST part left me dumbstuck...it was so painful..emotional nd heart wrenching... Plz give us a positive

Plz don't give us another heart attack

I jzt wanna kill that moron

Tq fr pm

Continue soon

Plz read my fic too I would love to know ur thoughts about it...though i know I'm not a gud writer like you...but bear with me

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Omg... wat an update..

Anika ke parents kahan gye . Hope unka trip shivika ko alag na kre...

Shivay ko kitna mara..😭😭

Update next soon..!

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tanisha

@tanisha997

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Oh my god shivay😒

Update soon😒

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Seema84

@Seema84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Sorry for the late comment dear actually I was so confused with my own expression after reading the story ... the first part was like I was laughing like hell but in last part when I reached the last word I was crying that uncontrollably please please please don't do anything with shivaay don't understand why shivaay said annika to not reveal anyone about that person???? Anyway let's see what exactly next n thank for the pm dear...

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Aparna

@Apu_915

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Amazing Update!

Such a roller-coaster of emotions. At the end felt really sad for Shivaay, poor guy couldn't even defend himself 😭

Still he is such a humble soul,his convo at the end with Anika 😒

Waiting for the nxt

Thanks for the PM :)

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Awesome n shocking update.

D first part was awesome fully filled with gang masti..

Loved their cute nokjok n their dance...

Fully enjoyed reading that..

Anika parents were going out n they r worried for something n not ready to say anything to her.

Romi is seriously so annoying..

Poor Bhavya is heartbroken to see Rudra with her but trying to ignore him..

Anika is worried thinking about their family reaction if they come to know about their relationship n he is assuring her.

Poor shivaay, it's so hard to see shivaay getting badly beaten up, he has not even got any chance to defend himself.

Last part was so heart wrenching😭

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Plz continue soon dear...

Thanks for d pm:)

Edited by arshifansiri - 7 years ago

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Pragnya Kiran

@CrzyPulviophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

No No
Shivaay got beaten.
Hope his condition is not that critical.

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Pragnya Kiran

@CrzyPulviophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

No
No
Shivaay got beaten.
Hope his condition is not that critical.

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Anila

@Anilaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
Totally loved it...

Thank you soo much! :)

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Anila

@Anilaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: joy1
Anilaa you almost gave me a mini heart attack there,with the sudden turn of events!
During the first part of the story, my friend and I were laughing, while reading that 'stuff part', and were talking about , how we girls love to tease others regarding that thing.
Then came the second half , as a shock!
Shivaay didn't even get a chance to defend himself , that thought itself was painful. His last words to Annika was heart wrenching. He is so caring, that guy, even in pain!
Hoping for some positive news in the next one.

Thank you sooo much!

I'm happy to see that you are enjoying the story! :)

Updating soon...

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