Shivika OS : Undeserving Love - Page 2

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing story, sad for them that Shivaay pushed her away

thank you so much... yeah, Shivaay was too broken and cynical..

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Interesting...liked d melancholy feels...lol

thank you so much hun😛

Originally posted by: MITHMA99

Nyc os😊

thank you😛

Originally posted by: MariaRebecca

I always want Shivika to be together, but in this one I'm happy they didn't.

Great story dear!

thanks hun... glad u are happy with this ending😛😛😛

Originally posted by: bworm

Nice story. Sad but lovely.

thank you so much hun😛

Originally posted by: farinaks

Amazing Is

Happy to know that she moved on

Tq fr pm

thank you so much hun.. yes, she is happy in her life...

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

superb os dear

thank you so much hun😛

Originally posted by: lourel24

simply outstanding. No words to express how good it was. hats off.

thank you so much hun.. glad u liked it😛

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

intriguing os..

thank u😛

Originally posted by: hijabEfajr

superb shot

thank you😛

Originally posted by: -Lisha-

Amazing story dear.

Loved it totally.

Superb...

and I loved the ending of this!

thank you so much dear.. so glad u liked it and the way it was ended😃

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb...

thank you so much hun😛😛😛

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

sad but lovely story

thank you hun😛😛😛

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Beautiful

thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

So Shivaay will never know about Palak??

No way! I need another chapter... U can't drop us mid way! 😭

don't think he will ever know Palak... unless, she falls sick and Anika needs Shivaay for medical necessity...
Don't have any ideas to take it forward hun😛

Amazing story really close to reality.

Originally posted by: tikit

Is there a way for Shivaay to know Palak is his daughter? Lovely story. If possible please continue it

Hmmm only if Palak falls sick and Anika needs Shivaay for his medical history or such... otherwise, i don't see Anika telling him about Palak
Don't have any ideas to take it forward hun😳

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Amazing story. thank you so much hun😛

Really felt bad for anika..she had showered him with all her love but he never acknowledged that n even broken her with his accusations. yes she was too innocent and deeply in love while he was too bitter with life, that he just couldn't see that she could love him

He really trust that Daksh over anika n pushed her away.

Anika have a daughter but never bring herself to say d same to shivaay fearing he would doubt about her existence. Yes, coz even now she believes that he never loved her and wouldn't believe Palak is his

Shivaay really deserves this pain bec he himself had pushed his happiness n he didn't even know he have a daughter... sadly yes.

Very well written.. thank you so much hun😃

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Amazing story really close to reality.

thank you so very much dear... so glad u liked it😛😛😛