FF - I'll Love you better now - Chap 19 Page 49 Updated on 1 Apr 2018

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Shelma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written.

Thank you! 😳

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Shelma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude
oh my oh my
i dont thing words can do justice to this writing
simply out of this world
continue soon

Thank you! Thank you, thank you!

I think I m gonna hide under the covers and cry tears of happiness now... 😆

I am very grateful!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

wow such a ending u are forgiven for everything

its not my rudy baby then ok i sill survive

loved gauri vishwaas and om reaction

shivaaay condition was pathetic but understandable

cant even imagine his state

please do continue

bye sumi

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Gayathri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Give me a hug dear...

It's not Rudra!!!! He is alive...indeed RUDRA IS ALIVE🥳

Finally...I let out my breath Shelma👍🏼

Where the hell that stupid Doctor??? I m going to kill him😡😡😈

OMM...Shivaay's state...no words dear. I don't know how to explain my feelings.👏

And Gauri's faith on her Rudy bhaiya

Loved the way you described Om's himself thoughts and condition on seeing his parents like that state👍🏼❤️

Shelma...your two hours work was really worth to read. You didn't waste your time instead you gives me peaceful sleep!!!

Take care dear

Keep smiling❤️

Thanka for the PM dear...

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Mummyoftwo2012

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Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Amazing continuation of the story.
Loved every bit of it..!!!

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#236

awesome update yar

This chapter was better...last one was heartbreaking and I literally hold my breath while reading each word..

you beautifully portrayed the emotions

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Shelma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow such a ending u are forgiven for everything
its not my rudy baby then ok i sill survive
loved gauri vishwaas and om reaction
shivaaay condition was pathetic but understandable
cant even imagine his state
please do continue
bye sumi

Haha...! Thank you, Sumi.

I don't think Shivaay posses the strength to be rational if something happens to his brothers.

This chapter made me decidedly happy

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Shelma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: GayathriV
Give me a hug dear...
It's not Rudra!!!! He is alive...indeed RUDRA IS ALIVE🥳
Finally...I let out my breath Shelma👍🏼
Where the hell that stupid Doctor??? I m going to kill him😡😡😈
OMM...Shivaay's state...no words dear. I don't know how to explain my feelings.👏
And Gauri's faith on her Rudy bhaiya
Loved the way you described Om's himself thoughts and condition on seeing his parents like that state👍🏼❤️
Shelma...your two hours work was really worth to read. You didn't waste your time instead you gives me peaceful sleep!!!
Take care dear
Keep smiling❤️

Thanka for the PM dear...

Happy that I didn't fend of your beauty sleep again🤗

Rationalizing Om was like writing a summary to a poem. Nothing with Om is ever simple.

And his relationship with Gauri is even more complicated and supple.

It's unexplainable but exploring Rikara needed careful examination and proper placement of emotions.

And, yes. Our Ru is INDEED alive!!! 😆

But here's where the real drama starts😉

Love,

Shelma