Oberos SS, 'Three Knights'...part 3 updated(ShivKara Moments

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Just wanted to write something on current track, specially having Rudra in it, in coming parts whole Oberoi Family will be here...Starting from Rudra Bhavya encounter with Sultan..


...Part 1...

Ruvya in Trouble

This time his damsel was unable to save her man in distress.Bhavya's plan completely backfired, and it was Rudr who came there to save her, they were now face to face with Sultan and his gooons,Bhavua was up agianst the rest while Rudra was trying to get hold of their biggest enemy Sultan,
Sultan hit him hard in his gut with his feet knocking the air out of him, Rudra grimaced and fought to remain conscious his vision wavered but he remained conscious to see Sultan's knife coming towards him , he shifted his side to save his face, he frowned grabbed his arm and launched him to a parked car, Rudra was back on his feet, he punched him and pushed him on the ground one swift punch following the other,

Bhavya shreiked his name ,there was a breif pause , the momentous distraction cost him , she shouted "behind you Rudra" ,One of the goon landed a stunning blow at the back of Rudra's head, he staggered barely recovering in time to ward off there next move,when he stumbled it was evident he was disoriented Sultan shifted himself in that breathless moment, Rudra tried to defend himself but he hit a hard blow to his stomach and he fell backwards on the road, there were pieces of broken glass,Rudra grimaced with pain as the broken glaased piereced through his skin making a way through his favourite shirt, Sultan flew away in an instance but the men who saved him was about to hit Rudra hard...

Bhavya's heart took a dip,she lost it , she reached there and tried to jerk him away from Rudra..after knocking him unconscious Bhavya reached Rudr who was breathing heavily , he looked dazed , he was trying to sit up , she helped him ...after catching some breath, he shouted, "Sultan ran away you should have gone after him instead of coming to save me "...She didn't utter a word ...She helped him up on his knees he ... Rudra pulled back to look at her, she shook her head, tears were clearly visible in her hazel eyes ..he cleared smudge of dust from her right cheek," i can feel your pain " , "he thought in his head... Bhavya just asked him to leave the place as early as possible, he tried to walk but limped, Bhavya put acros her arm around him but she felt there is something wet on her hands, he grimaced, and as she looked at his back she got to know that there are pieced of glass pierced through his skin and blood is oozing out from some...

Just wanted to try whats in my mind regarding current track
Part 2 Ruvya Moments
Part 3 ShivKara Moments

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S.love1 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
A new shade of brave Rudy
Loved it

Keep writing
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: S.love1

Wow

A new shade of brave Rudy
Loved it

Keep writing
Much love!

yeah Rudra in ordeal is my fav...thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rudra my fav too,
nicely written
waiting for next update
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Originally posted by: arak

Rudra my fav too,

nicely written
waiting for next update

he is a sweetheart...😛😛😛
thanks 😊
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...Part 2...

Ruvya Moments

In these few months Bhavya got to know one thing clearly Rudra was exactly not what he appears from outside. He was different, he had his sides, a very sweet, stupid, fun loving, childish cry baby and at the same time mature, logical, strong head, stubborn, ruthless, beast he was a perfect blend of Shivaaye's venomous extremes and soothing moderates'. ,he always knew when to play smart and when to be an underdog, it was the control because of which he was able to dissolve tension in any situation , but this blend and the reason behind this cover was not even exposed in front of his brothers from whom he had never hidden anything but the biggest truth about himself, somehow he wanted them to believe that they are protecting him , in fact he was the one because of whom they were still together , Today he was not acting hurt , in fact he showed altogether another side of him , he was calm, composed, but his body was showing an altogether different story veins on his head were popping out as if he was trying to bear something very hard, his breathing was fast , his heartbeat was erratic , but he was serene unruffled more than anything else. He was alert and more concerned about his damsel, the one because of whom he was here, in pain bleeding not shrieking not even grimacing...Bhavya helped him reach the car, till then his white shirt was turned red, Bhavya panicked she asked him If he was really fine, Rudr replied with a nod and said "I am fine...we just have to follow that Sultan...Bhavya moved towards him and tried to pluck out the glass pieces from his back" Rudra turned his side "we have to go after him Bhavya calmly kept moving towards him and tried to pluck out the glass pieces that's not important right now in any way he must have gone by now , we should concentrate more on these stupid wounds of yours...Rudra tried to move back then clenched his teeth as his movements were causing more damage "yes these are stupid that's why we need to concentrate on Sultan...Bhavya didn't pay heed to what Rudra was saying she shrieked stop moving Rudra, it will push these splinters further into your skin, stop right now, This was the baby of Oberoi house, the one who needed all the attention of the world on a minor pin prick but today he was not even showing that he was hurt, he was not the usual careless prince , Bhavya saw the glimpse of a protective king in Oberoi's spoilt brat , the one he saw while coming back to Mumbai when goons wanted the ring of her mother...Bhavya looked at his back there were several pieces of glass splinters some half way pierced into his skin and some just hanging out after doing their part of damage...Bhavya quickly removed the ones which she knew can cause more damage, on every pluck he was grimacing with his eyes shut tight and his breath more fast...Bhavya knew that they were in the middle of nowhere and any medical help in that area was a far dream, she never wanted him to bear the pain but to protect him from more damage she had to do this ,after bearing all this he could barely stand, could hardly reach the car, she extended her hand and tried to help him stand he looked at her and placed his hand into her palm and tightened his fingers around her flesh, a soft feel of her made him love the warmth, she smiled down at him and asked him to hurry , she eased him to the car opened the door he just wanted to fell on the seat like a lump of flesh but he gathered his strength and tried to be as alert as he could, he placed himself on that seat and pain flared blackness hovered at the sides of his vision and for a moment he lost consciousness but came back when he saw her wrapping the seat belt around him, he could smell her presence, but this time she was so near that he was able to feel the warmth of his breadth, his eyes met his hazel eyes and for a moment he was mesmerized , lost in the innocence her eyes were showing him, she noticed that stare and hurriedly moved to the driver's seat..
The next sight he he had was of winding rutted road, she was moving the car at a fast pace, he kept looking at her , her eyes were focused and her grip was tight around the steering wheel , she was looking at him and didn't noticed the dip in the road, instead of pressing the brakes she slapped the accelerator, in an instant he was tossed against the side a fresh round of pain wrecked his nerves, she knew at this moment he should be distracted she warned him "Please don't come to my rescue again and specially don't do anything stupid like this
Despite the throbbing pain Rudra was unable to resist the sight of her angry blush and panic streak "You look very pretty when you are mad Bhavya and when you panic your hazel eyes change their color...he chuckled
Bhavya gasped and replied aap aese waqt mein bhi aesi baten kar rahe hain Rudra, aap ka kuch nahi ho sakta...
Rudra settled himself on the seat and smiled looking at her, after a while his eyes started looking for something, Bhavya noticed it and asked what if he was looking for his phone...Rudra replied in a yes as he knew ShivOm must have called till now ...
Edited by an_k - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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such nicely written part
Ruvya moments, waiting for next part anxiously
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...Part3 ...

ShivKara Moments


Oberoi Mansion


Shivika marriage preparations are going on everyone is in the hall.


Dadi " shadi ka ghar hai aur koi dance practice nahi hui,

Guari " Dadi aap phikar he na Karen hum sab kuch dekh len ge aur dance practice tu har haraiyke waise he hojayegi

Om " Dadi abhi tak gana select hua nahi hai aur ye aapki bahu sab kuch har hariyke karne ked awe kar rahi hai

Anika " Rudy yahan hota na aab tak sab ko nacha chukka hota

Shivika " whats that lingo Anika dance practice kar ra chukka hota

Anika Shivaye aap ko baat samajh agayi na phir iss angrezi ko beech mein lane ki kiya zarorat , angrezi na hui meri sokan ho gai "

Shivaye shrugged his shoulders , " ok,,ok tum se kon jeete

Daadi " tum dono larna band bhi karo , koi mujhe batayega k who khota hai kahan?bhai ki shadi hai aur who gayab hai "

Shivaaye " Dadi meri Bhavya se baat hui thi who log wahan se raat ko he nikal gaye the , Rudy ko kisi dost se milna that u they will be back tonight

Dadi "chalo theek hai , magar Om Guari tum dono tu tab tak kuch decide krlo

Guari Dadi hum tu hamesa he tyar rehte, ye Omkara ji hume sang silect he nahi krne dete

Dadi Om tu kion isse song select nahi krne de raha

Om Shivaye tujhe pata hai iss ne last time bhi Bollywood songs ki bajaye Bollywood bhajans select kr diye the aur Guari please tum shadi ke list songs ki list nahi banao gi mn khud kar ln ga,

Shivaye wants to divert the topic Ohh okk well ye hamer pass hai na chalta phirta Bollywood radio Annika ye list bana le gi what say

Anika Matlab kia matlab hai Shivaye mn ga sakti hn aura cha ga sakti hn tu aap ko mich michi mach rahi hai , ab talent hai tu hai kuch logon ki tarhan thori jo gane ki tang bazo hath he tod dein "

Pholon ka taroon ka flash backs in Shivaye's memory and she nods " ok ok Lady Gaga..maan liya

Annika ye gaga goga kia kaha aap ne? "

Shivaye " goga nahi Lady Gaga the famous singer

Annika tu singer se milana hai tu Shreya Ghoshal se milaye, Asha ji se milaye ye kia naam hua Lady matlb agar naam mn Lady nahi hoga tu kia who gents hojaye gi aur agey kia sir name mn Ga aur phir Ga

Dadi intervenes bus karo tum dono kal shadi hai aur bilkul bachon ki tarhan lar rahe ho "

Shivaye " mn dadi... mein ...mein kab lara , lar tu ye rahi hai aapki Jhansi ki raani "...

Dadi " chup ker Bilu jab dekho larne ke liye tyar hai , khair se koi kaam bhi kar le, ja ja ke abhi apni sari meetings nipta le baad mn mein phone ko hath bhi nahi lagane doon gi "

Annika smiles listening to Shivaye getting scolded by Dadi , Dadi then turns to Annika ja puttar Annika , tu ja ke thora araam ker le subha se kaam kare ja rahi hai "

Annika par dadi mn ne kahan kaam kia ...abhi itna kaam hai mn help kr deti hoon na

Dadi " tu dulhan hai na , bus jo mn ne keh diya who ker chup chaap ja aur araam kar...mn hoon guari hai Om hai hum sangeet ke function ki tyari kr lein ge aur who khota Rudr bhi tu hai ajane do use sari raat ussi se kaam karaon gi "

Annika has no other option but to leave from there dadi then orders Om and Guari to work as a team and come up with a plan for Sangeet ceremony,

Om "Rudr ko bhi abhi jana tha, ab mujhe is ke sath mil ke sangeet ki preparation karna paregi

Guari " hum sun sakte hain, hume bhi koi shouk nahi aap jaise jiddi chirote ke sath kaam krne ka per Dadi ne kaha hai tu hume karna parega "

Om rolls his eyes ,and after deciding for a song they are about to start their dance practice was the theme of the night,and Guari resisted telling him that she doesn't know how to dance, Om assures her that he will make her, he extends his hands, Gauri hesitates then places her hand in his hand the next moment as if in slow motion he places his hand around her waist pulls her closer , they were so close that she was able to feel the warmth of his breath against her skin , then he makes her twirl around , he assisted him while she took twirls around him , there eyes freezed , Omkara was lost in that trance was she really that beautiful, it was not the first time he was mesmerized by her beauty and lost in the moment , suddenly the phone bell rang and broke the trance...Omkara immediately left her arm she was about to limp he held her arm and asked her if she was alright she nodded in a yes and then he left immediately answering his phone...

Edited by an_k - 8 years ago
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awesome part,
probably you miss typed Rikara moment to Shivkara moments
update soon

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