TS: Hormones & Losing Control PART 4 Pg 8 |PMs not sent yet - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Fantastic concept
Shivay and Anika are moving on
But their hormones are coming in between
Please make keep them together
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
So hot enchanting. Intensese seducing..sensuous. Erotic...passionate
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Breathing hard *literally*
So hot to handle.. ☺️
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
God this is so insanely hot
Intense passionate
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Awesome...hot...n very very seductive...so glad u continued...update soon😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
awesome update yar...
it was superb...and hawwwt
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
uff too hot..
i cant read it in one go hehe then read it twice
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
You have kept shivaays hormones alive in your story
They seem extinct in the show

The line at the end if the 1st part was just classic- you owe me a wedding night

It has always amazed me how 2 people like sso n anika can live together as they have in the last few weeks without losing even the slightest of control

Nice update dear, please continue


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys!

Thank you for the positive feedback. I am ging to start writing the third part now. Should be ready to post by tomorrow. Also, any suggestions would be very welcome. Anything specific you might want to read about, let me know 😉

Ciao
Mirnalini⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Wow, that was great. Awesome writing, do you have an index? Thanks tons for the nice read

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