Bleeding Hearts(Shivika FF)|Ch 1 up pg 5 at 19/8/2017 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: arshifansiri

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Originally posted by: farinaks

Awesome concept
U lnow I've cravings fr vampires
I'm in love with them reading stories about vampires is my hobby nd finding something happening in forum I'll go gaga over it
Though story is perfect bt I would hve loved it more If Mr.SSO HAPPENED TO BE A VAMPIRE
GOOD LOOKING SEXY HOT VAMPIRE WITH EYES WHICH CHANGE COLORS SKIN AS WHITE AS SNOW
VAMPIRES R MY FIRST LOVE ND SOMETHING RELATED TO THEM ...MY EYES WILL FALL DOWN

Chapter 1-Murder at Oberoi Firm

His chromatic blue eyes scanned the destruction of the place. The buildings was burnt yesterday night by someone who had murdered his man who are working at the company.Looking around at the rest of the place, he saw the place where the fire must have been started. The walls had long since crumbled and in their place stood thick beams of wood, blackened and charred from where the flames had licked at them. The ruins were still smoking and he could see the faintest glow of embers as he maneuvered around the creaking threshold. Black dust hung in the air and invaded his lungs as he walked around the freshly burnt company. Nothing had escaped from the fire, glass littered over the floor, where the windows had been broken and the metal base of many machines lay blackened and twisted on the ground.

The fire had been no accident, the entire estate knew that, but they also knew the fire department would class it as one. Not to do so meant an investigation, turning up answers the gangster politicians needed hidden or someone who is more dangerous than me. The blackened skeleton of the dead man was so much more than a burnt down house. It was the final resting place of a group of many man or his employers to be precise his family who had been supporting him from the starting of his career to build a firm of his own.

This was more of a personal loss than a huge business loss.His eyes were now a chilling, pale blue, less like ice and more like a blizzard, terrifying and filled with cold fury. Deceptive and filled with a vow of a monstrous wrath.They slowly turned into a deep ruby red .

The person who not only killed my family but also destroyed my dream has to pay for this.

He took an antique elixir bottle out of his pocket and drank the bloody red content in one go. He covered his still red blooded eyes with a pair of black shades.

He walked near to the car which was parked away from the burnt down place and took a long black trench coat. He covered his black turtle neck shirt which had clunged to his muscular body tightly.

He took his phone out.

"Khanna check this place carefully. If you find anything suspicious inform me."His deep husky voice grew into a dangerous roar which scared the hell out of the man who was on the reciever call.

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Wrote it from Uni's computer.Sorry for short update. I was suffering from writer's block.

It was lunch break when I finished this chapter.A foodie also needs to eat something before she dies.

Don't forget to like and comment.I'll be waiting for your comments.